KayOhh ---Vs.--- PROOF
 

16 lines minimum, no max
due 1 hour afta checkin
house rules

No kuniva votes, no hatin votes...
3 - 0 is auto KO
dont like the 1 hr thang, but whuteva, not much of a freestyle

post and agree

u wanna freestyle lets make it 10 minutes

Shit, aight, Im checkin, 10 minz start on ur check

here i am, checkin in

aight, now im gonna battle this mothafucka kayohh
next time i challenge you, just say no
i told him an hour and he thought i was messin
this bitch is tryin to rape me, please arrest em
i told him ten minutes now hes got second thoughts
can this bitch freestyle, umm, i reckon not
i can spit all the lines i need in the time i got
show up to ur house with a warrant and five cops
get ur ass in jail just cause u annoy me
but on this website, ur ass cant avoid me
this guy thinken we got votes, just cause he sways
now u can be sure i freestyle each day
ull come with some bullshit that doesnt even rhyme
ill come up with a better line than u each time
i wonder if this mothafucka even has sixteen line
if he doesnt post, at least the viewers can see mine

Aight, time ta get this, blunt lit, start up the game, set up the ball n, punt it,
This verse is gunna be a, fun spit, cuz he’s more pussy than my girls, cunt lip;

I’ve already destroyed one D12, wannabe, this hurt response I’ve, gotta see,
Merked kuniva, wonda if this one is also, gunna be, five ta zero fa me;

And he’ll be soundin a, bit like Pharell, high noted after this lyrical, kick in the balls,
His verse didn’t have one clear punch, so if I have one, hit then he falls;

He’s up in his lab, with a pen and a pad, only copyin styles, fixin up gay shit,
Cuz all I’m seein, is déjÃ- vu, … there must be a, glitch in tha matrix;

His rhymes go nowhere, jus round and round like, revolvin carasels,
Between this guy and dog shit, like train trax, I’m drawin parallels;

Voters, take a close look at what, he spit, it is obviously, pre-writ,
He had it already written, that’s why he wanted a ten minute time, limit,

Shit, you must be close to dirty, dozen, can I have a signature do you, know them?
He mus be crazy wanten ta fuck wit KO, so nuts he belong in a, scrotum;

Here’s a tip before you spit, go get votes start dick ridin n, rushin poles,
Now that its ova he’s bitchen for a recount, sounds a lot like, Bush n Dole;

wtf...you didn't have one punch (<---not tryin ta sway here, vote for him if you think different...hahah)

uppin ( 1 )

haha, not tryin to sway, ur shit was prewritten anyway, thats why u only had one personal

KayOhh, sent me a pm sayin how this was a good battle, a little different that what he posted in this thread, and he says he isnt swayin

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There were three you fuckin idiot!
One:
"I’ve already destroyed one D12, wannabe, this hurt response I’ve, gotta see,
Merked kuniva, wonda if this one is also, gunna be, five ta zero fa me;"

Two:
"Voters, take a close look at what, he spit, it is obviously, pre-writ,
He had it already written, that’s why he wanted a ten minute time, limit;"

Three:
"Shit, you must be close to dirty, dozen, can I have a signature do you, know them?
He mus be crazy wanten ta fuck wit KO, so nuts he belong in a, scrotum;"

1,2,3, how many did you have??? I think 2

i didnt prewrite my shit, and i dont care if you think you i did, the third line u mention could have been prewritten, thx for ur opinion though

wutever man...you sayin that I'm swayin is jus ur method of swayin urself. Not sayin anything more.

dawg shut the fuck up, u must know ur swayin or else u wouldnt put in parenthases (not swayon, vote for him if you think he won.... LOL HAHA)

shut the fuck up, thats why in my verse i said you sway, ur damn good at it, if ur confident in ur verse, let that do the talkin

My vote goes to kayohh cuz his closer and opener were killer and owned PROOF badly, Proof if u want to start winning get some vocab and elevat, this battle goes to k.o cuz he had better punches, multis, personals, structure. not a hate.
vote=kayohh sorry i cant poll
can anyone hit dis one up???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661

PROOF
aight, now im gonna battle this mothafucka kayohh
next time i challenge you, just say no
uhh......pretty weak......bad opener
i told him an hour and he thought i was messin
this bitch is tryin to rape me, please arrest em
dont ever say hes tryin to rape u.......1st line isnt a punch
i told him ten minutes now hes got second thoughts
can this bitch freestyle, umm, i reckon not
one of ur best punches.......
i can spit all the lines i need in the time i got
show up to ur house with a warrant and five cops
no punch........whats ur deal wit cops and arresting and shit........wack...
get ur ass in jail just cause u annoy me
but on this website, ur ass cant avoid me
wack punch.......they dont put people in jail for being annoying, and over the net people can avoid u.........so that makes that even wacker
this guy thinken we got votes, just cause he sways
now u can be sure i freestyle each day
ok first line.......second line isnt a punch.....and wack......
ull come with some bullshit that doesnt even rhyme
ill come up with a better line than u each time
second line is one of ur better punches........1st line is weak
i wonder if this mothafucka even has sixteen line
if he doesnt post, at least the viewers can see mine
what the fuck is this?........wack ass closer........

OVERALL - pretty weak........no really good punches.......half of the lines werent even punches.........3/10 at best

KAYOOH

Aight, time ta get this, blunt lit, start up the game, set up the ball n, punt it,
This verse is gunna be a, fun spit, cuz he’s more pussy than my girls, cunt lip;
blunt lit?.......uhh ok second line.........first line didnt make since at all........to start off a football game u dont punt the ball, so iono.....thats just weird.......
I’ve already destroyed one D12, wannabe, this hurt response I’ve, gotta see,
Merked kuniva, wonda if this one is also, gunna be, five ta zero fa me;
i dont see how kuniva is a D12 wannabe..........no punch.........dont talk bout the outcome in a battle verse........
And he’ll be soundin a, bit like Pharell, high noted after this lyrical, kick in the balls,
His verse didn’t have one clear punch, so if I have one, hit then he falls;
yea.......first line was ok.....second line was wack as fuck......dont sway votes in ur damn verse man.........who r u to judge that if u bring one punch hell lose.......weak as hell
He’s up in his lab, with a pen and a pad, only copyin styles, fixin up gay shit,
Cuz all I’m seein, is déjÃ- vu, … there must be a, glitch in tha matrix;
no punch........wack attempt at wordplay cause it didnt do shit for u.........like horses i have big dick.....wtf?.........that shit was pointless.........wack........
His rhymes go nowhere, jus round and round like, revolvin carasels,
Between this guy and dog shit, like train trax, I’m drawin parallels;
1st line was ok wordplay.......didnt get the first half of the second line.......and come to think.......i didnt get the second half either.........whats drawing prarallels mean?.......i get train tracks are parallel, but not what that means in terms of battle......hmm........
Voters, take a close look at what, he spit, it is obviously, pre-writ,
He had it already written, that’s why he wanted a ten minute time, limit,
i dont see how u concluded his shit is prewrit....its called keystlyin........no punch.......and wack.......
Shit, you must be close to dirty, dozen, can I have a signature do you, know them?
He mus be crazy wanten ta fuck wit KO, so nuts he belong in a, scrotum;
[/b]no punch........y would u ask for a signature.....that makes no sense..........and what kinda shit is......nuts belong in a scrotum.........weak.......[/b]
Here’s a tip before you spit, go get votes start dick ridin n, rushin poles,
Now that its ova he’s bitchen for a recount, sounds a lot like, Bush n Dole;
ok first line.....but i wouldnt suggest tellin him to get dr votes.......and y would he ask for a recount?.........wack second line.......

OVERALL - pretty weak as well.........had some more punches......but a shit load of fillers........just like proof this verse is a 3/10 at best.......

CONCLUSION - proof takes this because his flowed better......kayooh had stretched lines and wack structure........the punches proof had were better, and i dont think he came with as many fillers........kayooh forced to many multis, so most of his shit didnt make since........so proof gets my vote......

VOTE - PROOF

what the fuck....jus cuz you dont get any of my shit...Kuniva is a member of D12 dumb shit...you do punt the ball to the other team to start a game of football ( I think, unless you think I'm talkin about soccer )...and when you "draw parallels" between things, it means showing simularities...

I aint fuckin swayin, but seriously, I dont have to spell out shit...jesus...

^^^football u kick the ball off of a tee.........a punt is when the punter gets the ball hiked to him and kicks it outta his hands........

and.......no one would have gotten that parallel line untill u just said that.........

and even wit that........its still a wack punch........

so fuck u......thats what i think was the outcome in the battle...........

both of yah had good structure, although kayohh you streched your lines out a little more than they had to be.. i was feeling kayohhs punches alot more, Proof you gotta work on landed them punches. Flow in both verses was alright. When it comes down to vocab Kayohh had this one hands down. Originality was pretty much a tie. Multies Kayohh had a few more.

overall Kayohh takes this one

stop swayin faggot, i dont say what the fuck after someone doesnt vote for me, JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP

uppin for votes

Once again, I didn't sway! He didnt "understand" my fuckin verse! WTF, if you dont understand, dont jus vote for the other guy, that is dumb. Shit, I think you are swayin more than me, jus by sayn that I am. Jesus, drop the shit, fuckin baby.

proof said the words i wreckon and he also said sumi about wantin ta get raped. he also hangs out wit pigs, by sayin hes ganna have cops come to his house. aslo needs ta rhyme wit better vocab got cops. line rhyme. time mine. i dont like that shit.

kayohh, ya u definetly dont punt at the begining of a football game. but u had better vocab wit less gay rhymes. and i liked that" hes so nuts he belongs in a scrotum" or sumin line that was funny.

just by overall who's spit wasn't as gay

vote-kayohh

ok, ok, i admit i neva watch or play football...but ya get tha point...right?

uppin......................4, I believe...............

KayOhh takes this 1 he had better punches and his Opener and Closer killed Proof....
Your flow was aiight but it was patchy in some bits and should be sorted by your next battle.
Proof You had barely any punches, your Opener and closer where bad aswell you need to stop goin on about arrestin and police...Overall your flow was good it was smooth no complaints about that...

\/.KayOhh

Return the favour on this please............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113910

kayohh had proof on that one. kayohh had alot more personals
nice battle

get at this ----> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113918

PROOF
aight, now im gonna battle this mothafucka kayohh
next time i challenge you, just say no
-filler,punch = 1
i told him an hour and he thought i was messin
this bitch is tryin to rape me, please arrest em
personal,-flo = 1
i told him ten minutes now hes got second thoughts
can this bitch freestyle, umm, i reckon not
-repeated personal = 0
i can spit all the lines i need in the time i got
show up to ur house with a warrant and five cops
-self hype,-logic = 0
get ur ass in jail just cause u annoy me
but on this website, ur ass cant avoid me
-repeated ryhme scheme,punch = 1
this guy thinken we got votes, just cause he sways
now u can be sure i freestyle each day
personal, -repeat = 1
ull come with some bullshit that doesnt even rhyme
ill come up with a better line than u each time
personal,punch = 2!
i wonder if this mothafucka even has sixteen line
if he doesnt post, at least the viewers can see mine
-dumb,-pathetic,-moronic,-retarded = -2

The worste I have ever seen. Quit
Overall = 4
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KayOhh
Aight, time ta get this, blunt lit, start up the game, set up the ball n, punt it,
This verse is gunna be a, fun spit, cuz he’s more pussy than my girls, cunt lip;
metiphore,metiphore,-stretch = 2
I’ve already destroyed one D12, wannabe, this hurt response I’ve, gotta see,
Merked kuniva, wonda if this one is also, gunna be, five ta zero fa me;
personal,punch,personal,-stretch = 4
And he’ll be soundin a, bit like Pharell, high noted after this lyrical, kick in the balls,
His verse didn’t have one clear punch, so if I have one, hit then he falls;
metiphore,punch,-feed,-stretch = 2
He’s up in his lab, with a pen and a pad, only copyin styles, fixin up gay shit,
Cuz all I’m seein, is déjÃ- vu, … there must be a, glitch in tha matrix;
His rhymes go nowhere, jus round and round like, revolvin carasels,
Between this guy and dog shit, like train trax, I’m drawin parallels;
Voters, take a close look at what, he spit, it is obviously, pre-writ,
He had it already written, that’s why he wanted a ten minute time, limit,
Shit, you must be close to dirty, dozen, can I have a signature do you, know them?
He mus be crazy wanten ta fuck wit KO, so nuts he belong in a, scrotum;
Here’s a tip before you spit, go get votes start dick ridin n, rushin poles,
Now that its ova he’s bitchen for a recount, sounds a lot like, Bush n Dole;

I can't go on voting on this junk.....KayOhh's begining was better than PROOF's whole verse....

Vote = KayOhh.....both QUIT

my vote goes to k.o.: by the way drop in and see me http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113883

oooo, aight, im challengin ya oak, ive read ur shit, its nuthin

no shit dawg, we both wrote our shit in 8 minutes, that means 2 lines a minute, so fuck off, u suck

opener-KO
closer-Ko
personals proof
flow-proof
OHHS-ko
structure-proof
creativity-KO

In all of the hardhitting catagoried KO takes it... he had more creative ideas that later led to a hard hiting punch.... he had a lack of form but thankgod he had nice punches... KO make shore u don't stretch your bars out soo much.... cut them down an still deliever a hard punch.... PROOF u were decent but alot of your concepts were played out..... next time bring more original multis or jsut a different approach