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TheUnderRated vs. Oakley
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Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult... Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1 Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2 This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard) Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3 Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school.. And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4 I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich |
Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars.... Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme... but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line... Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses... cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses... 3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?... up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat.. prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with..... your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) get an avatar nub pz |
Oakley Break down
Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult... Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1 Creative but not hard hittning Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2 ^ok for a filler This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard) Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3 OK pretty good Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school.. And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4 Tight I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich Tight 8/10 Underated Breakdown Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars..... cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars.... Tight Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme... but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line... no great but ok Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses... cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses... good filler 3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?... up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat.. tight prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with..... your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) Tight as closer 9/10 Tight battle you both are good some shit that i didnt like was the underrated stucture but liked his punches. Oakley had some creative shit but fillers wernt very good so I am gonna have to give this to under |
flow was def. Oakley
but punches were owned by under closing/opening-under Under gets my vote ThA Ce http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988 vote there^^^ |
underrated took this on punches, oakly had a better structured verse and a few decent punches but nothing mentionable.. better finisher as well.....
vote: Under Unexplained vote gone. -Token |
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I second this, no offense, but Under had the best punch lines, but Oakley Ur flo is tight!! |
This was a pretty good battle...
Oakley...you had some strong points to your verse but could have re-worded some things to make them better or more unique good verse though just nt very consistant Under...good verse a little more consistant with hard punches structure from both was same Over all Under took this with more creativity and wittiness |
oakleys wackness line was hot.. his flow was pretty decent but not all that consistant, if it was he couldve taken this, underrated had some kool rhymes a few kool disses, even tho oakley had the quote of the match i feel under was more original and creative, with a little bit more consistancy in his verse.. aiming at his opponent a little bit more, vote- under
return an honest vote no hate or beef.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...74&page=1&pp=15 |
word alright thanx to all those that have voted thus far.....lookin for a couple more poll votes love for all the new to rB's though....................pz
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aiight the only things oakley had in this battle was structure and flow besides that he was missing the major thing u need in order to win a battle which is punches and personals, theunderrated came a lot harder with his shyt so he gets mah vote
vote=theunderrated...sorry i cant poll http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661 |
This was a tight battle but I must slide this to Under...why?
punchlines: he had sum great punches with a gud wordplay and they just came harder than Oakley's punches personals/ Under had sum nice personals while Oakley din't had so much and Under were jsut betta cuz of the wordplay and the originality of the personals flow: Oakley had a nice flow with sum variation but also did Under, you both were gud on this part structure: Oakley had a betta structure I thought cuz I just felt that his verse was more easy to read and it just workt out gud Overall vote: The Underrated (but close) Hit this back thx: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596 |
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sorry underated....but this was botherin me.... |
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Aight, i'll vote on this if you guys are gunna vote on my battle link shown below.
Im tired of spendin time votin, then no one votes on mine. So, let me know if youre gunna vote, then I will post my vote. ... |
Oakley:
Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult... Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1 aight open Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2 nice This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard) Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3 ok ok Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school.. And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4 aight personal I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich Ok ok... Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars..... cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars.... you put .... at the end of urs...feedin i think....not much of an open, personal tho Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme... but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line... aight Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses... cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses... nice nice, personal punch 3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?... up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat.. forced multi, no good prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with..... your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) personal, aight close __________________ Both sides had good personals. Oakley had the flow tho. Gunna give it ta oak, Vote - Oakley |
Don't forget to hit up my battle right now, I took time ta do this, aight?
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get off underrated dick. Yes he did come hard in this battle...but i do not think he beat Oakley here...im sorry UnderRated...but it's true.
"Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2" ^Thats the best punch in the entire battle...very creative...hit hard...and is original..but no voters highlighted that. Oakley deserves this win because of stronger punches...frankly, his flow was better. Ask any really good text battler...the short n sweet punchlines make the best ones. UnderRated did come nice...but not as nice as Oakley. Get off his dick and drop some real votes. "Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars..... cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars...." ^You voters say that was good...its just a personal...no creativity, no nothing...thats like me dissing underrated about his name... Oakley gets my vote because of better punchlines. Why his stoof out more? his flow was better. You learn this in audio...you can have the wittiest punchlines in the world...but if you can't flow em properly...nobody gives a fuck about how good they are. Learn that...never sacrifice flow for structure. v/ - Oakley |
Oak if you gonna sway for votes just give up your alias so you D/R to the win homes.......pz.......
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uppin....forgot i wasn't supposed to get votes
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Hmm...aight battle..
Carson had some nice punches.. Tha bulc line was corny though...didn't really dis under But ya bleeps line was hot.. And tha splinters one...not tha printers though Unders first 6 lines were good and hard punches after that...they fell off...u didn't have that great of flow But punches are more important.. and 3 is better than 2...sorry carson v/ Under |
ok looks like one of my votes got taken away.....happens all the time....hate this new system........anyway....uppin for more votes don't herb me you ........pz
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oakley - structure was good.......flow was on target.........vocab was good..........multis r ok.......some of the wordplay is good.........ok punches........personals were aight
underrated - structure was pretty good......flow was good........vocab was nice........multis were ok.........wordplay is nice.......punches connected........good personals...... breakdown - structure - oakley flow - oakley vocab - tie multis - tie wordplay - tie puches - underrated personals - underrated conclusion - underrated takes this in punches and personals.......so he gets my vote...... VOTE - THE UNDERRATED yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback can u two please return the favor..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139 thanx....... |
Punches: Under, both had pretty nice punches, liked the wackness line, liked the punchline line. Under just barely took this category
Wordplay: Under, had the yellow line, though it was forced as fuck Multis: Neither, both used 1 syllable liners Personals: Oakley, entire verse was almost personals, you whack motherfuckers need to read the verse. Opener: Oak, nice creative personal, Under's was pretty weak Closer: Under, Oak's pic line was decent, but the line after what weak Vote - TheUnderRated Really close battle, keep up what you do Oakley, you're already pretty good, so keep elevating. but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line Best line from Under If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/ Oak's best line |
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