Quelude vs Oakley
 

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30 min
Blind Spit
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Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"...
sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay
How are you Dropping? As Aragorn or Quelude?...
Your margin off error's the trunk size of a daewoo..
Watch,..Ima shake this herb, and make his daughter develop
Kid can't do nothing right...get's punched and he fell'up
You couldn't win if you set up and challenged yourself...
Vote n Link? Que's playing more ball's than pool table felt..
This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat..
Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote:(

Beg token to vote?!.....I ain't never asked no one to vote on my battles...let token come in here and say that shit. He knows I never asked him..why you saying that shit?

its not a personal it's wordplay and your time's up any ways

token = money , poor and broke = sad and hurt....moron

This kid from maryland.. looks like one of Robin Hood's Merry Men
Just my two cents...you can use it to the pay the Ferry Man
On River Styx...After a dose of my spit
Quelude...the purest shit..Oakley's just Pure Shit! lol
Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints
The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig.. (around Oakley)
Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch?
What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch...
Your career is stagnant...This I believe without question..
You going nowhere.... like red meat does in your intestines
I'd show Oak respect.... but I'm really a fan of Ray-Bans
To break it down in Lay-mans..The victory goes to Que man!

wordplay-oakley
punches-oakley
flow-oakley
ohhhs-oakley
personals-Quelude

pretty much a blow out..... i was actually impressed by oakley i haven't seen him around here an he has nice puncehs with a direct flow....Quelude u kinda stretch your bars nice idea but try an not use two set ups in a bar make shore u throw punches... an direct disses...

vote oakley

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114

i voted an took time for your battle....make shore both of u return the honest favor an vote on mine...^^^there is the link

Punches: Que, some nice ones from both, Que had a few more
Wordplay: Oakley, the broke line, I wouldn't've gotten that if you didn't explain it, too confusing. I didn't know Token is slang for money.
Multis: Que, every now and then had 3-4 syllables, Oakley had around 2 every time
Personals: Que, had the sig glowing line, and the ray-mans line. Oakley, the instant replay joke must've been used a million times.
Opener: Tie, both were pretty nice, Oakley's flow in on point, both opened pretty nice.
Closer: Oak, que's finish was pretty weak, good use of multis, but nothing besides that. Oak finished with a wordplay.

Vote - Quelude

Decent battle, Oakley you got the idea. You are better than a lot of these whack rappers in the front lines, so you'll step up to elevated lines real quickly. Throw in a few more punches, you got a relly good flow, so keep that. Quelude, your flow was a little off, but good punches and personals. Both of you keep it up.

Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch?
What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch
Best bar from Que, dope multi with it

sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay
Nice personal, funny

Return the favor in my battle with Rule

Uppin...




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nice battle by both cats.. actually worth my time to read.. breakdown:

Oak:
punches were nice, flow was good, structure was nice, personals were off the hook, your opener was off the hook, your closer was very very very nice, overall = very very nice verse..

Best Lines:
Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"...
sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay
^ lol.. very nice
You couldn't win if you set up and challenged yourself...
Vote n Link? Que's playing more ball's than pool table felt..
^ nice.. made me chuckle
This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat..
Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote
^ very nice.. had me rolling and going 'Oooooooh!!'

Que:
punches were good, flow was very nice, structure was nice, personals were ok, your opener was ok (could of been better), your closer was not very good, overall = ok verse..

Best Lines:
Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints
The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig..
^ lol.. nice
Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch?
What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch...
^ made me smile on this one.. nice..

well, nice job by both cats.. but however i think oak won this cause he came harder.. worth my time to read.. great job you two..

Vote - Oakley

return the favor:
links are in my sig: 'Lethal vs PROOF and Lethal vs Killer Emcee'

Lethal...we're instant nigga...you can't vote on my battles.

Both Showed signs of potential and skill, Oakley yes did come harder then i expected...
Both verses were pretty good, Good use of wordplay in both, Punches were Pretty tight, I think Que got punches even tho some of his were a lil played,,I wasnt feelin that merry man ish...Personals- Descent effort by both of these Cats..But that token voting line killed ish..Nice..Nice flow and structure by both...Que kept his ish a lil more on track w/ his structure that was really the only thing i saw that gave him upper hand sept for His constant use of punches....Mad close battle < Hard to judge But im gonna have to go w/ que jus cuz His shit was more creative, Phrased better...No hate tho Ok Spit some ill Shit

V/ Quelude

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107056

BE a good, descent person and drop and honest vote on this battle

yea.. i just realized that.. sorry guys.. good thing i didnt poll, just stating my opinion.. sry guys.. dont dq him or anything, its my bad..

Sorry bout the freepost, but consider this an up, Que can you hit one of my battles up?

uppin

Oak:
ya punches were good, flow was consistent, structure was nice though out..not stretched lines, you had some really nice personals and a good veres overall

Quotables

Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"...
sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay

This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat..
Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote


Que:
punches werent bad..flow was pretty good but not as consistent as Oak's.. you had some decent personals and overall just an average verse

Quotables

Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints
The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig..

overall - oak took this battle wit harder punches and better personals..

V/ Oak

uppin

uppin

this one was pretty close, but i would have to say Oakley took this one with some harder punches, a nice flow, which was easy to read and it was well structured with alot of personals and a couple of alright metas, your opener and closer were nice...
Quelude:decent verse too, punches just didnt land as hard, same with the personals,
try to work on your openers and finishers...it makes quite an affect on the battle
vocab was decent...wouldnt hurt to throw in better vocab and wordplay...but nice verse all the same....nice job guys...
return the favor.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431

uppin

This was not a close battle.

Oakley came alot harder than the other kid. The other kid just didnt compare whatsoever, but I do see how he might have potential. Oakley, you came pretty decent, but you have room for improvement, of course. Your closer could have been stronger.

Vote- Oakley

please return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114170

damn, oakley took this battle, he had some creative ass punches such as the line about the daewoo and also the ebay line....quelude your verse was good to but oakley just overtook you in this one......you guys both were pretty even on the personals and flow but the breakdown was definitely in the punches...oakley just took a different approach and used some good shit...this was a really good battle though, and it was worth my time to read it...

punches:oakley
personals:tie
flow:oakley
wordplay:oakley

damn, it's always making those fucking smiley faces when i use the letter O...ha, oh well..

Oakley got it his vocab is off the hook. He links it mad nice. Some wack shit. He also had mad work doing his sigs. gotta give this kid props.

yeah, oakley definetly won this, id give a long explanation, but i cant poll vote anyway

Nervous?

anywayz....descent battle fellas but fairly one sided in my opinion...
oakley takes it with far better punches and wordplay...sum nice metas..daewoo trunk line was nice meta...
other cat jus didnt hav tha punches hittin as hard...came weak on that side....descent battle tho

v/ oakley

descent battle.......

stay up................................................ ..........peace

uppin for the last time.....



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I poll voted one of the many that didn't.

so Oakley wins.