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PROOF 02-13-04 11:40 PM

Envee ~~vs~~ PROOF
 
30 minutes afta check in
12 lines
blind spit
no crew, d/r, hate votes

PROOF 02-13-04 11:52 PM

this stupid shit just sent me a pm to set the battle up, he says hes gon rip me but he doesnt even know to look in frontlines...LOL

Envee 02-13-04 11:54 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay lets go you readyy!??? Who is gonna go first??

PROOF 02-13-04 11:55 PM

yet again, how am i gonna battle someone who doesnt know what a blind spit is, shit, he had like 30 posts but they musta been from freepostin. We both go, u write "checkin in" and then i will and then we both have 30 minutes

Envee 02-13-04 11:57 PM

okay
i write the "ckeckin in" in here? uhh shit this is mah 1st day so stop hatin!

PROOF 02-13-04 11:58 PM

checkin in, im hatin cause ur a retard, man people should go through the bitch slapped and read how u were challenging any mothafucka with a name and threatening them, and then u dont even know anything, shit

Envee 02-13-04 11:59 PM

checkin in, okay stfu i'm starting to battle now so lets go ready yo

Envee 02-14-04 12:08 AM

I'll fracture your legs so I can break some limbs, You walk like you retarted ain't no need to pretend// I'll go to your funiral cuzz i'm tha one that made it happn, i walked up in the church and people started clappin// I'll make you eat a pack of chewy bars so you "die of thirst"// Your dads legs are wide open, so you jump in "head first"// Rub these mac 11's againts ur neck, to make you sweat// Their filled wiff blanks but your screamin "Hit Tha Deck!"// SHit bitch this a check you going get killed in a sec// da fuck you doin battlin the best don't you know that i'll drop Ludgers on ur chest??// Bitch you talk to much i'm puttin you to rest this the best u messin wiff da fuck is wrong wiff your brain imma take the victory and rub u into shame// Everything u do in here going reflect on you people going come in and juss shit on you// No one wanna see a weak ass rhyme so do us all a favor and get tha fuck out FRont Line!// I'm a bigginer of this game but i'm coppin all the money and puttin u in rain// you out there all by your self while everyone is votin to put me up on the shelf...// Battlin me was juss a mistake get the fuck out the room and get fucked up wiff a rake you a thief a pussy and also a lier so shut you fuckin mouth you know you inspired bitch!

Envee 02-14-04 12:17 AM

I'm Envee you envy me mayne i slap you wiff mah words feels like you get hit wiff a train// Everyone know that you juss vote for yourself and we know you masturbate a lot juss keep your hands to ur self// I got Proof right here that "Proof" got no girls he juss sits at home and twirls and twirls// Hes a pussy theres no secret to that he wanna get fucked up by the biggest and meanest infact// if he ever went to jail hed be fucked in tha ass //made to a little bitch so he is nothing but trash// ain't no one wanna see u rap this motherfuckah here is turnin it to crap// you ain't worth the time of the lyrics right here juss get tha fuck up out and stroke ur dick elsewhere! Bitch trick noffin but a hoe you're cut man! :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: You've ben taken out! :shoot:


VOTE FOR ENVEE!

PROOF 02-14-04 12:22 AM

This nigga might wanna try and post lyrics that are SAT-IS-FACTORY
just read his fuckin verse, and you'll see that its wack indeed
this nigga followin me through bitchslapped sayin ima witnees a murder
but this isnt really a he, in fact this bitch is a squirter
once this bitch reads my verse, itll give her somethin to "Envee"
im sick of battlin herbs and newb, both are my pet peeves
ur in both categories, therell be no rematch, im battlin u one time
this nigga goin back and forth lost lookin. Hey dawg, the battles in frontlines
my lyrics and vocab in this will both live this bitch befuddled
why does he even post, he really cant survive in these scuffles
i dont even see why i try in lines eleven and twelve
if he was a car, his engine'd be revvin for help

Envee 02-14-04 12:23 AM

WELL GO You know u can't kick thoes lyrics shit shouldn't have challenged me like that i told u i woulda kicked ur ass bitch

Envee 02-14-04 12:23 AM

Vote For Me! If u like mah lyrics but i dunno maybe he might have some good shit i dunno we'll see i doupt he got any good shit tho i've seen his last battles!

PROOF 02-14-04 12:23 AM

man, read the bottom of his second verse, can someone truthfully tell me that thats not swayin

Envee 02-14-04 12:26 AM

Your lyrics are shit mayne half doesn't even rhyme man!

ThA Ce 02-14-04 12:38 AM

yo man crazzy ass battle...i can tell u guys really dont like eachother haha i love it

Envee had sum nice lyrics nd goo vocab but didnt he go over 12 lines?

I liked teh wayy Proof brought what happened before teh battle into his battle...he also had sum clever ryhmes...

fav. line-I'll go to your funiral cuzz i'm tha one that made it happn, i walked up in the church and people started clappin-Envee...great ishh

Overall id say Envee takes it...btu id love to see a rematch

PROOF 02-14-04 12:39 AM

why did he post twice anyway, twelve lines max buddy, damn, ull be lucky if u dont get DQed

ThA Ce 02-14-04 12:40 AM

Battle: Slim Cykotic vs. ThA Ce


ThA Ce vS YOz Lyrical Killa

MaDa vs ThA Ce

not sure if itll work

vot on those ^^^

ThA Ce 02-14-04 12:52 AM

Yeah proof I'd say Envee takes it unless he get Dq'd cuz of goin ova 12 lines but ya niice battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114112

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113893

vote on these^^^ return the favor

taciturn 02-14-04 12:57 AM

ThA Ce stop freeposting here, we already heard ur opinion

PROOF 02-14-04 01:02 AM

ma bad, ^^ is me, just stop freeposting here, we know what u think already, seeing as you posted 3 times

Archeologist 02-14-04 09:04 AM

yoyo.......
Proof nice drop son.you had an aiight flow abit patchy though...some good punches and a nice opener and closer....

Envee ok drop, your flow was bad very very patchy..not many punches alot were missin the target.not bad opener and closer....

Archeologist 02-14-04 09:06 AM

\/0te goes to proof.....

do the same and vote on this please..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113910

Envee 02-14-04 10:03 AM

Yo fuck that limit and shit juss vote for the MC you like most so we can have a winner..... And if anyone else wanna battle jusss say so and we can go battle too

Token 02-14-04 10:47 AM

Next person to sway is DQed.

PROOF 02-14-04 12:00 PM

uppin for votes, if you vote, drop a link and ill it up ur battle

PROOF 02-14-04 09:22 PM

uppin for votes, like i said drop a link

Envee 02-14-04 09:26 PM

wow uppin votes thats fucked up u guys should vote who u like more fuck everything else u know what i mean if i lose i lose but i don't wanna lose cuzz he will up ur fuckin other battles thats juss cheap why u gonna say u gonna up they battle u can't win me fair???
Shit i'm only 13 can't beat a 13 year old!?? GHAHAHAAHA LO!L OMG!

Envee 02-14-04 09:33 PM

Yo people i got deep shit in this battle please vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...182#post1185182

theres site! I got some good shit in that

Envee 02-14-04 09:34 PM

:shoot: PEOPLE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND VOTE ON THIS BATTLE \/\/\/\/\/\/

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...182#post1185182 :shoot:

Reefer 02-14-04 10:23 PM

You envee and proof keep rapping this shit is good you know

~Yo What Up~ 02-14-04 11:58 PM

Envee - ur structure was fuckin horrible........ur flow was wack as hell.........ur vocab was basic........ur multis were weak.........hardly any wordplay...........some of the punches were ok at best.......no personals......

proof - structure was good....flow fell off a lil.......vocab was basic........no multis.........wordplay was ok.......some of the punches were good........personals were nice.....

breakdown -
structure - proof
flow - proof
vocab - tie
multis - envee
wordplay - tie
punches - proof
personals - proof

conclusion - proof takes this in structure, flow, punches, and personals so he gets my vote........

VOTE - PROOF

yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u (Proof) did the same in my battle against envee....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227

thanx.........

Envee 02-15-04 09:18 AM

~Yo What UP~ i killed you in that battle but u didn't do as bad as i thought you would..... we needa get that battle closed!!

HeXen 02-15-04 11:17 AM

diss was very onesided in my opinion...
Proff....punches came very week and no flow at all..structure was elmentry...evaluate...overal 3/10
Envee...good verse...punches came hard and somr structure...not much flow...<work on dat bro.....personals wern't there....overal 6/10
v/envee(onesided)

.Syck. 02-15-04 11:38 AM

umm.. i see 2 verses by envee.. so im just going to judge by the first one since proof only posted one.. envee had a good flow.. some attempts at punches, some hit, some didnt.. proof had the better more complex flow, the better disses.. none had real hard punches.. proof was more cinsistant.. i feel he had the edge in hurting his opponent.. envee had a goodflow and can defenitely elevate.. but as far as this battle goes i think proof took it with a cleaner more rounded verse, vote proof.. return an honest vote plz, no hate or beef
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...070#post1186070

Envee 02-15-04 12:31 PM

Yo Syke you judged this battle fairly that was pretty honest... Cheers to u

Rappin' Master 02-15-04 12:40 PM

yo, this was an aiight battle

ENVEE...you had an aiight flow but your structure wasn't really there. You had some punches and you also had some nice personals. you didnt really have any real good wordplay. Keep it up.

PROOF...you had a weak flow and your structure also that good. You had aiight ounches but they didnt hit that hard and you had some aiight personals. You also didnt have any real good wordplay. Keep it up

vote ENVEE

return da favour plz...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112557

Tha Phat Rabbit 02-16-04 06:52 PM

WEll let me see this was a goood battle really close and very to tha throat i think u both should have a re match but i wanna battle proof heres the break down

Proof- You had goood punchs ur structure and rhyming wasn't too well built but i still liked ur battle u got a 8/10

Envee- You had good punches good rhymes everything fit together goood u get a 9/10

V/Envee

Proof i wanna battle u!!!

Tha Phat Rabbit 02-16-04 06:53 PM

Sorry guys i cant vote yet but ill come back later and vote okay?

Tha Phat Rabbit 02-16-04 06:56 PM

YOu think u guys gonna have a rematch that shit be hott!!

Reefer 02-16-04 06:58 PM

Envee Kicked Proofs ass and they sound rap again i want to see a ass kicking again


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