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.Syck. 02-15-04 12:54 AM

Accelerate -vs- .Syck.
 
12 lines max
due tomorrow night
no one with 1,000+ posts can vote
(this way i know your elevated buddys and DRing you)
(cats with that many posts dont vote on battles in here)
no feeding/biting/recycling
no DR/beef/unexplained votes
see you soon

Accelerate 02-15-04 01:01 AM

Are you kidding me??? Nobody over 1000 posts?? Do you know how many noobs fucking hate me?
Get the fuck outta here..I posted my verse in the other thread, and I'll post it here too.. fuck it..Im not ducking..

Oh goodness, I can't believe I forced myself to battle this dude...
When the Dynasty Soldiers Chat, has more Quotables than You!
You came to Wits End trying out, talking all this stupid Bullshit..
We got the idea to make a n00b recruitment to help elevate..
But it wasn't like you were going to be in it!!
I mean..I'm mad, If I found anything more played out than his name..
That'd be pretty syck..
And I don't have to worry about Losing..It's not like Eminem'll be on your dick
So yeah..Your fucking garbage, Trash, Recycled, or Waste..
If I think of any more ways to describe you...Webster'll be Replaced!!
And I'll smack your Mother...I Proceed to Son this Little Bitch..
Oxymoron: N. a figure of speech that uses seeming contradictions...
Example: This kids name is .Syck.
A Played Punch^..Indeed But I know alot of what you say already is shit....
And thats sad...considering Your Punches are more played out..
Than saying they are, is..

.Syck. 02-15-04 01:32 AM

i didnt know u wanted to post tonight.. i'll do something up real quick lmao

.Syck. 02-15-04 01:53 AM

ahem.. this is how you rip a wack vet with a big mouth


when it comes to rap ya suck.. shit this kids wack as fuck
cuz he cant hold a flow.. or throw punches to back it up
so lemme just slap this slut, listen.. cuz this is how it goes
i'll show this fag aint nothin but a newb with 3,000 posts
i'll knock ya lights out kid.. see he's bout to strike out big
cuz Syck spit's like Shout.. the way he whipes out Skiddz
it only takes one punch to pop this fool, to stop this deul
its all optical..
so watch this bitch get tooken care of.. like i was a hospitol
ya flows hard to find.. half ya bars dont rhyme thats weak
convicted of wack punches & choppy flows..
........................................^^^thats his only 'Rap sheet'
yeah i tried out..
but when i saw yall were wack.. i wanted outta that group
cuz he couldnt pull a W out his ass.. shittin alphabet soup


yeah.. fuck you

Accelerate 02-15-04 02:17 AM

Bwuahaahahahahahaahhahaha I won't even say anything...Jeeessuusss Chhhrrriiissst

.Syck. 02-15-04 02:22 AM

you knwo you lost, i can tell because your swaying and a vote hasnt even come in yet, i mean who are you kidding.. with your one sylabal stretched ass flow.. i literally laughed when i peeped that gargabe, hey if ur gonna sway im gonna sway.. bullshit and elevate dont rhyme.. thought i'd let u know.. no more free-posting, fag

Accelerate 02-15-04 02:25 AM

Im not even swaying dukes...I never said I laughed at your verse...LOL..Im still laughing cuz this is in FL..so take your gay ass swaying up ya ass.

.Syck. 02-15-04 02:26 AM

ahem.. this is how you rip a wack vet with a big mouth


when it comes to rap ya suck.. shit this kids wack as fuck
cuz he cant hold a flow.. or throw punches to back it up
so lemme just slap this slut, listen.. cuz this is how it goes
i'll show this fag aint nothin but a newb with 3,000 posts
i'll knock ya lights out kid.. see he's bout to strike out big
cuz Syck spit's like Shout.. the way he whipes out Skiddz
it only takes one punch to pop this fool, to stop this deul
so watch this bitch get tooken care of.. like i was a hospitol
ya flows hard to find.. half ya bars dont rhyme thats weak
convicted of wack punches & choppy flows..
........................................^^^thats his only 'Rap sheet'
yeah i tried out..
but when i saw yall were wack.. i wanted outta that group
cuz he couldnt pull a W out his ass.. shittin alphabet soup


i forgot to take that optical shit out..

Accelerate 02-15-04 02:29 AM

should've just edited it.. I don't really care..I don't want a point for ever little thing like some kids on the site :rolleyes:
anyways..votes?

.Syck. 02-15-04 03:07 AM

why'd you change ur info asshole.. his alias is SkiddZ, and he just took it out his user title conveniently, votes....................... ??????????????????????

Intoxicated 02-15-04 03:57 AM

LOL... Syck so obviously took this battle...


It's all about the punches here, and Syck had 'em...

"when it comes to rap ya suck.. shit this kids wack as fuck
cuz he cant hold a flow.. or throw punches to back it up
so lemme just slap this slut, listen.. cuz this is how it goes
i'll show this fag aint nothin but a newb with 3,000 posts"

^^ Aggressive, good multis n flow, ended wit nice punch

"i'll knock ya lights out kid.. see he's bout to strike out big
cuz Syck spit's like Shout.. the way he whipes out Skiddz"

^^ Nice personal/wordplay

"ya flows hard to find.. half ya bars dont rhyme thats weak
convicted of wack punches & choppy flows..
........................................^^^thats his only 'Rap sheet'"

^^ Creative


"but when i saw yall were wack.. i wanted outta that group
cuz he couldnt pull a W out his ass.. shittin alphabet soup"

^^ Played



Overall, nice ass battle verse... 88/100


Accelerate... Some nice punches.... but, some stretched line and some that didnt even rhyme...


"Oh goodness, I can't believe I forced myself to battle this dude...
When the Dynasty Soldiers Chat, has more Quotables than You!"

^^ Nice punch

"A Played Punch^..Indeed But I know alot of what you say already is shit....
And thats sad...considering Your Punches are more played out..
Than saying they are, is.."

^^ Too stretched but i liked the whole concept of the bar



My vote goes to Syck .... Good battle guys

Intoxicated 02-15-04 03:59 AM

Sorry about the extra post .....................^^ 72/100

Accelerate 02-15-04 09:24 AM

atleast you broke it down..I can't hate on that or whatever..

K.Cobain 02-15-04 10:13 AM

Accelerate had more witty ness & complex in his punches, fucka n00b votes, hee took this by far w/ punches...other cat came basic and weak as fuck.. =) .. accel is a topical .. but still, he ripped this kid here, recognise cunts, syck u was played as meh!..

Vote Accelerate.

.Syck. 02-15-04 11:30 AM

^^as if thats not one of the most obvious dickriding votes ive EVER seen.. come on man, i mean at least PRETEND to be honest when your voting asshole

Envee 02-15-04 11:59 AM

I will vote on Accelarate he had good punches and i like his style plus he did way better the syke did i mean syke wasnt that badd but Accelarate u got mah vote!!

V/Accelarate,

Help me out wiff mah battles here are the links!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114150

/\ that one is envee vs proof

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...132#post1186132

/\ envee vs yowhatup


Vote a'ight mayne peace!

wordplay 02-16-04 06:25 AM

accelerate:your opener was sort of fucked up structure wise, but the humor in the punch made a good bar, out of an otherwise simplistic starter. your punches were fucked, a lot of lines just didn't match or rhyme, but the ones that did hit pretty hard. your overall structure was all wrong, I had trouble reading it, you need to try counting sylables...you had atleast one metaphor, which was ayite, a little wordplay, none really stood out. your closer wayyyyyy too long, but I got what you were saying,so it hit a lot harder after I wread it the second time...

.syke.:your opener rolled a lot better off the tounge, the structure was there but, the punch was soft,plus obvious,which took away from it's power a little. your punches werent really complex or strong, the hospital line is pretty played..your structure was way better than acc's, I don't think you had any metaphors, you had a little bit of wordplay, mostly because you played off his name..your closer was the most witty and complex part of your whole verse, it was a good punch/personal, I just wish your whole verse would've came hard as your finisher....

vote:accelerate
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now hit me back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=114089&page=2

Accelerate 02-16-04 10:35 PM

SUbe Parriba with the dopeness and all that good shit..

.Syck. 02-17-04 11:45 AM

lol i cant even believe ur winning against the wackest verse i ever spit.. didnt think i needed to try against that garbage ass shit u posted, and im not about to lose to some one as below mediocre as u.. so if u win i want a rematch and i'll actually spit this time.. and i know ur gonna be like no i dont want a rematch i wanna run away with this insignifcant W and talk trash.. but your not even on the level below me.. so instead of posting a 5 minute verse we'll have it due the next day and both try then we'll see who comes out on top..

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:31 PM

Dude..WTF is wrong with you? You think I tried? Stop making some fucking excuses, I mean seriously.Even in FL Im winning against you. I'll have your rematch, I don't care, But now we play by My rules, cuz Im beating you by your own rules...

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:35 PM

good, so neither fo us tried, so this match is insiginificant, i'll admit u beat me when u actually do.. because i know u wont touch me when i spit a verse i spent more then 5 minutes on.. thistime i wont underestimate the stupidity of the newby voters

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:39 PM

THATS EXACTLY WHAT I SAID...You didn't listen to me..Why would I put out a good verse when Imm in FL.lol...Seriously dukes..Even in Elevated I wouldn't try.

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:41 PM

well im not battling you unless you try.. this match right here is a fluke of bullshit since neither of us actually tested out skillz, but i want u to know that im better than you, and i wanna prove it, and if u say u wont try then youll be able to use excuses when i win.. i wanna win fair n square with both of us putting at least a somewhat attempted good verse up.. so.. whats the deal

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:42 PM

Whatever..I'll see what I'll do tonight if Im bored..tomorrow I have to start doing some work so Im not sure if I can do anything for then.

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:45 PM

well wait for me to have 5 wins so im aloud in elevated and we can do it there.. im close to it now so we'll do this in a couple days then

lyricallyabusive 02-17-04 12:52 PM

yo accelarate ill vote u vote me plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144

I vote you , u vote me?.. Dr/ vote removed, & banned.
-Eddy

.Syck. 02-17-04 01:08 PM

^^lmfao did that really happen.. gotta love front lines

Accelerate 02-17-04 01:09 PM

^Im noble..I reported him..Lmao
Suicide and me go waaaay back

P-Verse 02-17-04 01:28 PM

.Syck. took it for me, nice start although it tailed off toward the end. Accelerate sounded like he was defeated from the start. Your rhymes didn't flow and was just basically poor.

Vote = .Syck.


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