|
Mentality vs He_Hate_Me
aight 10 lines
no d/r no crew no hate no feedin envee and reefer cant vote blind spits ill go first due in 30 minutes |
kk
aight nigga
|
checking in and spitting........
|
yo whats blind spits mean cuz i dont know what that means...
|
that just means that u cant feed or bite
original lyrics |
its a battle tho....a battle, i think there should b feedin and shit
|
nah because then you have the advantage
im spitting now no feedin or biting allowed |
damn it thats horrible but i'll go neways cuz im coo like that
|
nnnn
so im a suppose to after u then still or what?????
|
lol y would u feed,? if u feed its like taking a total advantage, i guess to u feed but not like hardcore, i dunno i dun like feeders kinda pisses me off. well im waiting till one of u spit, hurry up.
|
yo all u do is spit, u cna't read his rhyme till u ahve posted, thats simple enuf dude, spit diss him and when u finally posted read his rhyme, then u dun't feed, just spit for god sakes
|
I'm switchin it up..Make this Wannabe Blue Like Lilo and Stitch
Putting A Car In Reverse And Hittin Female Dogs Is The Only Time You'd Tag A Bitch Just Relax, Your Wack I'm The Ultimate Weapon Of This Entire Rap Pile Uneven Numbers In Your Head, Just To Show How The Odds Are Stacked My Punches Like Steppin On Nails With Shoes, They Pierce through Your Sole Like A Highly intelligent Pillsbury Doughboy, I'm On An honor Roll Profile Says He's Unknown, But I Know Your Location Is A Gay House I'm Known To Serve Cats Like You In 10 Minutes.... Like Chinese Take Outs He Hate Me?? Thats original...Rod Smart...that name ring a Bell This Guy Was Stumped.... Couldnt Think Of A User Name ..........................So He Stole One From A Guy In The XFL -Rod Smart used to play in the XFL under the name He Hate Me No feedin or Biting Spit u have 30 minutes |
once i blaze the lead its ova, hit ya face n head n shouldas //
hav ya skin lookin like u had a case of melanoma // yea this fruity dude soon to be doomed // only thing tight about u is ya looney tunes fruit of the looms // ain ya parents, but im able to ground ya // treat ya lips like loose office sheets when i staple ya mouth shut // Mentality being giving so much head his own brain is empty // but I’m regulating this bitch like a PI MP // so next time you want to get sliced to bits // call on HE HATE ME, and i'll bury'ya with my spit // |
they call me he hate me cuz i swtiches schools in 10the grade to go play for a better football team and all te kids from mu old school hated me
|
he hate me you gotta elevate alot dude. your lines were to easy and there was no substance to your raps at all. you r punches were one dimensional and yo had very poor attempts at personals. Mentality took this one in evry category. he had the better flow, his punches were nicer, and he got em with more personals. both could use better word play and throw some more multies in there but my vote goes to Mentality in this one.
VOTE_MENTALITY open battles in sig |
uppin 1
.............. ............ ........ ... . |
Punches: Mentality, alright punches
Wordplay: Mentality, good wordplay, def. your best asset Multis: Hate, had a few flow enhancing multis Personals: Mentality, had the XFL line Opener: Mentality, Hate opened up really weak Closer: Mentality, personal finish, Hate was uppin himself Vote - Mentality Hate, you gotta work on quality punches, just think up some jokes or some wordplays involving personals or something. Flat out elevate. Mentality, you need work on your flow, definitely count syllables and change words after you type up something to make it sound better. You got some nice wordplay though. once i blaze the lead its ova, hit ya face n head n shouldas // hav ya skin lookin like u had a case of melanoma // Good vocab, and multi Pile Uneven Numbers In Your Head, Just To Show How The Odds Are Stacked Dope wordplay, flow was off though |
uppin 2
........ ...... .... ... .. . |
I'm switchin it up..Make this Wannabe Blue Like Lilo and Stitch
Putting A Car In Reverse And Hittin Female Dogs Is The Only Time You'd Tag A Bitch good opening.. metaphor is there, punchs were alright Just Relax, Your Wack I'm The Ultimate Weapon Of This Entire Rap Pile Uneven Numbers In Your Head, Just To Show How The Odds Are Stacked punch could have come better with it.. the meta was dope though, good overall wording of it, cept it could have been evened out more My Punches Like Steppin On Nails With Shoes, They Pierce through Your Sole Like A Highly intelligent Pillsbury Doughboy, I'm On An honor Roll similie wordplay here was good.. a little played though but not bad.. lacked on directed punchs though Profile Says He's Unknown, But I Know Your Location Is A Gay House I'm Known To Serve Cats Like You In 10 Minutes.... Like Chinese Take Outs eh this could have been worked alot better.. wording was off i thought, again meta was alright but lacking on the punch, the one you did have came off played He Hate Me?? Thats original...Rod Smart...that name ring a Bell This Guy Was Stumped.... Couldnt Think Of A User Name ..........................So He Stole One From A Guy In The XFL this ending was alright, good personal shots. the bar it self needed soem working, help with flow, it went alright for the most part. Overall i thought you had a good verse, with alright metaphors a little wordplay and some ok punchs when you accually threw them. but you need more consistency for this battle since it is one once i blaze the lead its ova, hit ya face n head n shouldas // hav ya skin lookin like u had a case of melanoma // openign is ok..but the punch is self lacked, structure is basic and the flow was alright but needed work yea this fruity dude soon to be doomed // only thing tight about u is ya looney tunes fruit of the looms // a better connect would have helped this bar alot.. the metaphor was alright and it did connect except not all that hard.. punch was eh, ok ain ya parents, but im able to ground ya // treat ya lips like loose office sheets when i staple ya mouth shut // more inners would have helped your verse here and everywhere else as well. metaphor is played ithink punch isnt really there Mentality being giving so much head his own brain is empty // but I’m regulating this bitch like a PI MP // flow was ok.. the metaphor was alright not much though. the punch was decent, but needed a better follow through to really help it out so next time you want to get sliced to bits // call on HE HATE ME, and i'll bury'ya with my spit ending could have been more here, the punch isnt much and the metaphor is basic.. self boasting over all you had alright shots, with some alright metaphors for this battle.. you could have tryed harder with the punchs, they really lacked in strength i thought. rhyme scheme could have used better flow to it, as well as multis. ok verse i suppose... Vote- Mentality Took it with better metaphors, the punchs were about equal i thought but mentality did connect a little more. Drop an honest vote, then ill come back and poll vote for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113612 |
uppin 3
............. .......... ...... ... . |
Mentality - solid verse.. consistant punches.. started off a bit weak wiv the 'tag a bitch' line.. but stepped it up wiv the 'uneven odds' line.. that was nice.. creative metas were used to good effect.. flow was a lil choppy mainly cos there were a few stand alone punches.. but nice overall..
He Hate Me - very played.. very general.. an not very creative of effective.. this was more like a general open mic piece.. ur opponent was cussin u in person but u jus used vague vocab to create some forced punches.. focus on who ur battlin nxt time.. VoTe = Mentality |
uppin 4 for that last vote!!!!
............. ....... .. . |
v/ Mentality
i believe i seen a few punches in there.. some decent shit here n' here.. He Hate Me just was very blah.. okay flow, but no real hard hitting punches. both could have done better, but ment just had better punches |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...245#post1189245
n' you better hit that up.... |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:51 PM. |