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MrTokes Vs Se7en
30 mins blind spit
10 lines min and max No D/R votes No hate votes No crew votes All votes explained 3-0 Ko or 1st to 5 Sorry bout other thread, im doze on other sites.. Ive also nearly wrote it lol...give me 5 mins.. Peace..... |
iight I'm dropping now dawg, it's kinda weak, not my best but it's an ok battle verse
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(Verse)
Hold the phone, I’ll cap ya dome, till ya seeing gold chrome If being wack in a verse is talent, this kid has to be in a zone Evolve looked at this kid, like how is his rap skills a gift Only way he’s still standing, is because a body builder gave him a lift He called for a fight, but he’s really getting beat wit the mic His chance of winning, are like Loyd Banks turning white This kids, career lived, is as short as a lighter that juss lit I’ll blow out the flame, so your name is a cross between whale and bitch Die young, he’s to dumb to be in a game for the smart and witty This kid’s style is as pumped, as a fat teen wit big titties |
Ill slaughter-this-kids-writes…to show he aint even when punished
This boy needs to alter-his-quick-types…its like hes tongue-twisted Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt I smash through-wack-spits…its like your setting-lot-packs-new-ways Why does this newb-act-big…hes only getting-popped-back-to-place These high-rate-spits-flip and pound…se7en wont hit-me-with-blurs The way i-rape-this kid…i should be known as the next kiddie-fiddler Uppin Se7ens drop! |
Uppin............................................. !
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Uppin x1, PLEASE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE IF YA VIEW THIS VOTE< VOTE
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Uppin......One of my bars are fucked...its ment to be like:
Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance Not this: Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt |
Not enough posts to poll, but here is what I thought...........
Seven took this.....Although his punches were not that great, I still felt they hit harder than Toke's....who really came weak in this department...Toke's verse was also lacking personals and didn't flow...rhyme scheme was fucked and some words didn't even rhyme... also he should get rid of the hyphens between the words... My Vote > Seven (better punches,flow, and had the only personal) |
The hyphens are to show the multies LOL!!!! i had no flow..ok then mate..you accepting this se7en??
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Uppin.............................................
And explain it properly..... |
wat you mean uppin' x2 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
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aight i think that seven wins this for better punches and the only personal
but this was a good abttle and toke had a lot of intereseting concepts i liked his verse but felt that it was too ordinary and elementary seven had the more entertaining verse and he also had a more complex verse for better punches and harding hittin concepts and for a better organized and complex verse....... v/se7en |
uppin x3 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE
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uppin x4 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE
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iight...
Se7eN Hold the phone, I’ll cap ya dome, till ya seeing gold chrome If being wack in a verse is talent, this kid has to be in a zone Multi's... Forced... Not bad though... 5/10 Evolve looked at this kid, like how is his rap skills a gift Only way he’s still standing, is because a body builder gave him a lift Lol... Nice... 6/10 He called for a fight, but he’s really getting beat wit the mic His chance of winning, are like Loyd Banks turning white [b]Nice again... 6/10 This kids, career lived, is as short as a lighter that juss lit I’ll blow out the flame, so your name is a cross between whale and bitch Nice... 7/10 Die young, he’s to dumb to be in a game for the smart and witty This kid’s style is as pumped, as a fat teen wit big titties Played... But nice enough flip... 6/10 Overall... 30/50 MrTokealot Ill slaughter-this-kids-writes…to show he aint even when punished This boy needs to alter-his-quick-types…its like hes tongue-twisted This didnt rhyme... Nice mult's... 4/10 Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance Not feeling it... 4/10 The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt I smash through-wack-spits…its like your setting-lot-packs-new-ways Why does this newb-act-big…hes only getting-popped-back-to-place These high-rate-spits-flip and pound…se7en wont hit-me-with-blurs The way i-rape-this kid…i should be known as the next kiddie-fiddler The rhyme scheme was so hard to break down... That a didnt bother... Overall... 15/50 v/Se7eN Hit this up in return... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114514 Thanks... Pz...[/i] |
uppin x5 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE
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yo ite this wasnt nething specialk really but id have,
to give it 2 se7en purely baecause, when it comes down to it 7 had alot better punches, toke yours came rlly forced and played, also your shit didnt flow well atall man, 7 you also had alot more personals wich, is always a good thing man, plz hit this up now man plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 thx .......... |
Se7en - some pretty impressive concepts.. harder punches.. but ya vocab kinda put ya flow off.. some stretched lines made the personals lose a bit of force.. but a cool opener an a closer that got a chuckle.. shockin imagery!
Toke - lose the dashes kid.. thas pre-skool style.. an try gettin more personal about ya opponent.. u had a fair bit of jus general filler in there.. cut the uneccesary an it'll make ya verse harder hittin.. but still a solid verse.. VoTe = Se7en Drop a vote here plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698 ...1 |
Se7en ~ Nice shit man, this is actually the firt of your battles I read...pretty damn impressive man..no offense to your opponent, but you made him look like...a herb..I agree with illtalic on the opener at least, dope drop..
Toke ~ Your rhyme seemed...forced..you tried way to hard on your multies and i'd comment on your dashes thing but its been beaten into the ground..you aint bad man, just need to fix a little bitta shit and you'll do fine. Vote~ Se7en HoLLa BacK ... thanks.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114599 |
open- se7en (it was better than mrtokes' his didn't really hit that hard)
close- mrtokes (yo that shit was slick as fuck! shit is hard hittin) personals- mrtokes (his just appeared out to me more) punches- se7en (his hit way harder than mrtokes . . had some hella slick punches) flow- mrtokes (couldn't really find a flow to se7en's) vote- se7en (punches always wins the battle nice battle fellaz . . please peep my sig and hit that link up . . return the favor with an honest vote . . it'd be appreciated . . get at me |
Se7en Wins By KO as stated in the rules.
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