RB.com's Father V.s Menolin
 

10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no feedin
etc etc

good luck

Gay white poeple

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!
But saying that..Imma bout to go off on a tange...
Props to I.C.U. Unit...for being my number1 fan!
But back to business...When meno spits its a joke
Cuz seriously duke, ICU comes with nicer posts!
I could make you sit, with my ass standing up..
Change ya name to bitchilin, you aint meno nuff!
I'm that funny type, with jokes make ya speechless
But if I cracked a joke now, You'd be in 2 pieces!

i went out, an im back now,
i never thought you'd spit, im soryy keyin up at
00:13 U,K time


you name is one of those... a lot farther from the truth,
hitting this kid up so muc, i oughta be called babe ruth,
you declare illness (sig) feels like im battling the infantry disease,
you got all your rehearsed shit wrong, like nervous interviewees,
your already winning 1-0. no need for the mod to re-set the polls,
even when i come half assed.. you make my verse look whole,
you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined,
well my quick keys rip up your flesh... break you bones,
now run away little piggy, menolin just had you owned,

00:34

RB-ya came w/ some very original punches I was well impressed
w/ ya play off Menolin n all. the Meno Nuff line was funny &
I liked ya finisher a lot to. Flow was on point. this was an above
average verse.
Yet I dunny know why ya w/ Dynasty Soldiers lmao

Menolin-Some punches was nice but this was too much filler
The babe Ruth line wasnt good coz it dint hit. But I did like
the Vers look Whole line. that was prob ya best punch
Flow was choppy but wasnt too bad. Underestimated Him tho.

V/RB.com's....For being a lot more Wittier

are you taking the piss??

lmao...thanks for the vote mayne....i gotta start somewhere

well uppin first time
peace

cmon and vote yall...
I'll return the favor....

aight i think that rb's father got this

rb's- good punches very witty indeed
nice verse
flow was good structure was good
opener was funny clser was good
good verse
7-10

menolin- an ok verse
i felt u underestimated him
ok punches
flow was ok
and as bi sed a lot of filler
6.5-10

for better punches and harder hitting punches

v/rb's father

hit up the battles in my sig and then i will come back and poll vote

RB.com's Father wins cus his was funnier
since i rated yours come and rate mine

B.I Detained with the hate vote
i doubt the other 2 actually read the battle, they just followed BI detained's vote!!!




some real votes please!!

I'll vote wen u follow the links i left in ya other battles..

wot the fuck. Menolin we are arent we?
stop being a bitch..RB was witty..yours
wasnt. He came w/ sum iight concepts.
you didnt. C'mon!! the Babe Ruth line
summed up ya verse

But saying that..Imma bout to go off on a tange...
Props to I.C.U. Unit...for being my number1 fan!



yeh he real witty an ill!!


an you hated on me for a while no BI, so fuck off!!

shut up you 2....so u pick my worst line of my verse to critique...fucking bitch...I killed u plain and simple..and i was witty

Rb's Father =

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!
ok i suppose, punch was ok
But saying that..Imma bout to go off on a tange...
Props to I.C.U. Unit...for being my number1 fan!
ok
But back to business...When meno spits its a joke
Cuz seriously duke, ICU comes with nicer posts!
ummm ok
I could make you sit, with my ass standing up..
Change ya name to bitchilin, you aint meno nuff!
na didnt like this bar
I'm that funny type, with jokes make ya speechless
But if I cracked a joke now, You'd be in 2 pieces!
played a little, but ok!!

menolin =

you name is one of those... a lot farther from the truth,
hitting this kid up so muc, i oughta be called babe ruth,
nice punch and ok word play
you declare illness (sig) feels like im battling the infantry disease,
you got all your rehearsed shit wrong, like nervous interviewees,
lol, i really like this bar
your already winning 1-0. no need for the mod to re-set the polls,
even when i come half assed.. you make my verse look whole,
umm ok i guess
you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined,
lol, lol really nice punch
well my quick keys rip up your flesh... break you bones,
now run away little piggy, menolin just had you owned
na

ok this is how i saw it.

Flow = tied, both flows were practically the same!!
structure = tied, again to difference in the two spits!!
Punches = Menolin, Coz he lines were more original and witty!!
personals none, didnt really see any!!
Vocab = menolin, he were just overall better!!

Rb's father, favorite line =

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!

Menolin, Favorite line =

you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined

although the interviewee line came close!!

Vote = Menolin < Just an overall better spit!!

And none of you dont say this is a d/r vote, coz i dont even like menolin that much because of the abuse he gives me!!!

PZ anyways

this battle was weak as fuck but melonin took this becuase rbs.com father barely had any hard hitting punchlines.. melonin came weak also but i felt like his wordplay was sharper and his lines were stroneger

i spent time voting on your battle now if you can hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114982

uppin

rb.coms father - structure was good.......flow was on target.........vocab was pretty good.........multis were aight.......wordplay was ok........some of the punches connected.........nice personals........

menolin - structure was good......flow was good.......vocab was nice........multis were ok........wordplay was good at times........i was feelin some of ya punches.......ok personals......

breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - tie
vocab - tie
multis - rb
wordplay - menolin
punches - tie
personals - rb

conclusion - rb.coms father took this in multis and personals, so he gets my vote.......good battle nonetheless........

VOTE - RB.COMS FATHER

tight battle.....some nice verses...
Rb... came a little to elementary....and his punches werent complex enuff to compete with menolins,,,< he tied in personals as well....wordplay was pretty decent from both....
personals were eh... Ok... but rb came with too ...basic of punches...and disses....
so - vote menolin ....better overall verse....

Rb's Father =

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!
ok i suppose, punch was ok
But saying that..Imma bout to go off on a tange...
Props to I.C.U. Unit...for being my number1 fan!
ok
But back to business...When meno spits its a joke
Cuz seriously duke, ICU comes with nicer posts!
ummm ok
I could make you sit, with my ass standing up..
Change ya name to bitchilin, you aint meno nuff!
na didnt like this bar
I'm that funny type, with jokes make ya speechless
But if I cracked a joke now, You'd be in 2 pieces!
played a little, but ok!!

menolin =

you name is one of those... a lot farther from the truth,
hitting this kid up so muc, i oughta be called babe ruth,
nice punch and ok word play
you declare illness (sig) feels like im battling the infantry disease,
you got all your rehearsed shit wrong, like nervous interviewees,
lol, i really like this bar
your already winning 1-0. no need for the mod to re-set the polls,
even when i come half assed.. you make my verse look whole,
umm ok i guess
you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined,
lol, lol really nice punch
well my quick keys rip up your flesh... break you bones,
now run away little piggy, menolin just had you owned
na

ok this is how i saw it.

Flow = tied, both flows were practically the same!!
structure = tied, again to difference in the two spits!!
Punches = Menolin, Coz he lines were more original and witty!!
personals none, didnt really see any!!
Vocab = menolin, he were just overall better!!

Rb's father, favorite line =

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!

Menolin, Favorite line =

you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined

although the interviewee line came close!!

Vote = Menolin < Just an overall better spit!!

And none of you dont say this is a d/r vote, coz i dont even like menolin that much because of the abuse he gives me!!!

PZ anyways
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that about sums it up....yet Rb.father you surprised me...had u done that against me you might have won....your getting better and im happy for you...but u just barely lost here...it definately wasnt a blowout..menolin leads to drop better and stop procrastinating with shit verses..lol.....but barely

v/menolin

I felt rb just came up short... the lines were a little unoriginal...Timeless is right the flows and structure were pretty close... but meno showed a couple punchs i thought were just a little better composed...

Besides meno deserves a vote for starting down 1-0

{Peace}