Brethren vs. Eki
 

10 lines
House Rules

Good Luck

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check, drop soon, I'll try to drop soon after that

Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill















so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill

comeon man post............................................

I'm trying to drop, but I keyed my verse, and my computer shut down so I gotta re-do it all. This time I'm writing it down. Damn, if you didn't drop 18 lines

oright oright...... becaoue that happened when i was doing a long ass feedback today ill forgive ya :)

Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still couldn't start evolving....


one typo...

Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.

Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Played out first line..second was Ok
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
kinda played..but ok
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
stretched bar...kinda weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
played
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
ok


Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
decent
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
good
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
weak and stretched
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
just ok
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
ok...kinda weak tho
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
played
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
ok...kinda weak/played
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
wasn't feelin it
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
ok closer

This was a close battle...but I gotta give this to Breth...Eki came with too many played lines..Like the whole Janet Jackson nipple thing is so played out already

PLease drop an honest vote here...I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158

.......................upin.......................

Hey, this battle is closed on the other site, what happens on this site????

ibelive the crap i just read, "you chumps call that a rap, I can flow better with my lips wraped behind my back". there is just one line for you Frapers, Yes Frapers.

sup
Brethren has my vote by 2 points becuz
EKI line's wurr slitely played
so he made me go OK SURE EVEN THO IVE HEARD IT B4

Brethren had a decent verse
enuff to git the vote
NO BAD BLOOD
GO VOTE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118055
YoungStar* vs. Zeet in FRONT LINES

oh my badd i didn't kno u had to b registered
i am waitin on CPROGRESS to hit me back so i can kno if i'm registered
when i git that PM bak i will hit this one up

i'm registered now so i'll poll vote
cud ya'll go vote too its in regular front lines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118208
YoungStar* vs. bRi SkEe42o

Here's how I saw it.....

Eki came OK in this one but had some played out punches. You started with the most played line in here. Maybe back when you wrote it, it wasn't that played but it is now...... you had a choppy flow in some spots which dfinately took away from your verse. Bretheren came with better punches and wordplay. His flow was a little choppy in spots too but the punches definately made up for it.......

Vote - Bretheren

chekc it

brethern gotthis shit with harder punchs and nice wordplay on this verse flow wasnt reallythere for me like force together lines only worked out cause the punchs hit harder then his and elki lines was played brah not hatin but get creative with some shit and get better wordplay added to your verse might help out your meek punchs to just elevate a lil bit

ok brethen got it eki ur structure was horrible mad plaed lines ok flow and no vocab work on all of those ok batle verse i guess eki urs was alot better better flow vocab and punches i would like 2 c u come with more multis and personals though really good verse so my vote obviously goes 2 bre eki that verse needs mad elevation