Re$Tricted Vs. Pa'ea
 

Both Of Ours First Battle..

Rules:
10 Lines = 5 Barz
5 Votes Winz
No Dickryding and Shit

.::Checkity Check::.

~R~

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Yo..Yo...

Adominal blows from these lyrical punches got you on the
operating table, Comical flows, spitting in verbal bunches, got you into a mystical fable/ Playa you ain't able, to comprehend my vocab when I'm spittng into solitude, You comical? Your flows baghdad, reason enough why my lryical drops be bombing you/
Lyrically stopming you, my thought patterns equal biohazards
I'ma fucking phenomenon, like your girls day-job get on your knees and let R-Rated spit some cum upon/ With acidic tongue spits leaving your dome split, flipt this script, underachieved with this battle of verbal conflicts, Bitch!/

~R~

Aight....Upping For Votes As Soon As He Drops His Shit, Which Should Be ASAP Since Its Been 20 Minutes..

~R~

Shit a Metaphor Couldnt Be Placed to this Battle Before I Spitted
Borderin Opposites, This battles Breakin Up With him.."It Felt Restricted"
His Lid is Comin off As I pop The lock To these Signature Bitches
Sad tho You used Adobe 8 and It Still Came out With Glitches
Since This Kid Is a Nerd I Speak in his Terms With a :hitit:
While Ull See Tons of Happy Faces/Smilies Pertainin To his Verse: :Offtopic:
hahahah Wow Some Fishy Shit With Your Verse Sharky
Lets all Call Your Rape Victim Pamphlete Personals? Hardly.

Uppin.
The Id hit it Line is not like id hit it like id tap that u know like a girl
but id beat on him.

Well I like how you had a whole hour to do your spit and I only had 15 minutes..Fucker...

~R~

Uppin....Come On Peeps Don't Sleep....

Holla At A Pimp!

~R~

dis was a week battle...
Re$TricTed....not many punches,some were ok but others were jst week......flow was there in places....some lines didnt rhymes tho.....no structure...wordplay was there but needs work.......personals wernt there at all....overall...6/10..
Pa'ea ....no real punches and dats wot wins battles bro......once agen some lines didnt rhyme....no flow....bacis structure.....wordplay was elemetry.....personals were none...overall.....2.5/10.....very week...needs a lot of work bro....and stop using those smilies,kinda childish...no ofence...keep it up both of u.....
v/Re$TricTed

...personals are u stupid?
did u not read the first 2 lines
....omg. fuckin idiots in front lines.
:\ what punches didnt u get idiot.

Wasn't really a punch man, all you did was use my name in your bar.....doesn't really count.

~R~

Looking For Votes..
 

Only My 2nd Time Uppin...

C'mon Ya'll Don't Sleep On Dis..

Only 4 More Votes Needed To Close This Battle..

HOLLA AT A PIMP!

~R~

decent battle

personals-neither
punches-paea
similies-pea
complexity-paea
creativity-paea
multiples-restricted...thatz all ur verse was
structure-paea
humor-both
vocab-both
overall-paea

again a weak battle
punches need to be more better from both of u
restricted work on ur punches instead of multiples

the battle
 

Overall the battle was okay

Like everyone else is saying, personals are neccessary in a battle, Pa'ea kinda used one in the beginning, but you gotta make that more obvious to clown him.
Restricted the whole baghdad thing is played out, every other battle i see that, i know you can come up with some hotter shit, cuz your last bar was bangin.Also the first bar was okay, I liked the whole operatin table thing.
Pa'ea i didnt get the whole Id hit it thing but your last three lines were dope.

keep up the good work to both of you
Even though Pa'ea came up with a personal the winner is

Restricted

to tell yall the truth as well...i didnt feel this battle much...both sides came aiight...i read more of restricted's verse than pea...ol duke restricted had an aiight structure and had some meta's but the punches were a lil off....pea came wit some coo punches but his verse lacked structure and overall intensity....

vote - restricted


Igido

Ayo..
 

Alright well so far....

The votes so far are...

Re$tricted: 3

Pa'ea: 1

Keep It Uppin

~R~

Upping Dis Battle....

C'mon Dont Sleep.....

~R~

C'mon Ya'll, Get To Peeping Dis Shit, Only 2 Votes Needed...

Holla!

~R~

Vote = restricted
becasue he came harder in punches ok battles for n00bs..& he had good cteatvity and the other guy was talking garbage they both were but him more.

4=Re$tricted

1= Pa'ea

I need one more vote to close this thing and get my first battle over with. C'mon ya'll one more vote...

~R~

restricted takes this with better punches, wordplay, and structure..yet lacked in complexity

paea or whatever the fuck your name is... work on multis and personals more homie.

vote ~R~

Close This Battle..
 

Alright I Won 5 To 1....

Moderator Close This Battle and Update My Record..

1-0 :-D

Good Battle Pa'ea!

~R~

:thumbup:

it was a bit close but i think pa'ea took that one. very close tho

check out this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505

Yeah this Battle was kinda weak.....I was expectin Restricted to come a lil harder.....It felt like you was just spittin with no purpose.....be more direct in your punches.....I see that you was tryin to switch it up by addind a lil flow.......but again, don't let your flow get away from you..............Pe'ea......I didn't really follow your verse too well, and that aggrevates the reader....so try to work on your sturcture......But all and all.....Restircted got it......

Return the favor....and stop the sleepin....

one

WhenThe Fuck Does My Record Get Updated...

I should be 1-0...

Soon To Be 2-0..

WTF!?

i say restricted won but it could have been betta but it was enuf for that other weak m.c. so my vote is with restricted 5/10

paea or wateva yo name was, it ok you cant win every one but just work a lil harder next time 3/10