Ambition v.s. d.j em sce
 

No hate votes
d/r votes
verse due by the end of tonight
10 line mine
16 line max....
May the best emcee win.... :thumbup:

I dont understand what happen/
what kinda guy spends records where he rappin/
one of a kind nigga takin action/
the only way somebody would still rap from this fool/
is if they needed a piece of scratch paper to wipe the mud off they shoes/
my glocks will leave you snoring/
have you the number #1 reason....ya homies using they vodka for pouring/
its just that fuckin simple you'll get popped wit no warning/
dont think you run the fuckin streets because you jog in the morning/
kill so much I got a morge in my house/
you wanna live???...better shut it like you got doors in ya mouth/
cant wait to measure your pace/
he's a christian now but I bet you still aint doing better then Ma$e/
you dont wanna see the clutch and clip size/
the reason the post and raw is cause I aint worried whats gonna come against mine...

Its a wrap.....just a little something the top.

Uppin.....even though ole dude didnt post I'd still would like peeps to tell me what they think about my piece...

Please close this battle sense ole dud was a no show

wat im i supposed to do, is it to late to battle

im bout to just spit something

i got stupid heat, but not the kind the friction makes when you beatin yo meat,
the kind that willl set flames upon yo tung when yo spittin to beats,
your obselete, the only way you'll be a victor is if your crowned in defeat,
i kill all m.cs on dees microphones,
i'll kill you repeatidly like physco clones,
i spit cuurents, and your rymes dont even flow,
be the end of this rap i'll get yo ass runin lilke your nose,
i was hungry until i just ate you up,
now im stuffed like the crust that they serve at pizza hut

did i do it right????????? or what?????????

hahaha think ambition just got took...............

uppin this battle for votes.......................

wat does that mean

On The Real Dj Em Sce Tookk This One I Shouldnt Have To Explain Why

Thats why your vote wont count dawg.... You must have read the rules. I think this is a hate vote I explained why you lost. The rules also say no one line voting so this doesnt count to bad.

Aiyo..
 

Newb Battle..

Ambition: 4/10
I dont understand what happen/
what kinda guy spends records where he rappin/
one of a kind nigga takin action/
the only way somebody would still rap from this fool/
is if they needed a piece of scratch paper to wipe the mud off they shoes/
my glocks will leave you snoring/
have you the number #1 reason....ya homies using they vodka for pouring/
its just that fuckin simple you'll get popped wit no warning/
dont think you run the fuckin streets because you jog in the morning/
kill so much I got a morge in my house/
you wanna live???...better shut it like you got doors in ya mouth/
cant wait to measure your pace/
he's a christian now but I bet you still aint doing better then Ma$e/
you dont wanna see the clutch and clip size/
the reason the post and raw is cause I aint worried whats gonna come against mine...
----Whole Spit Was Plain....No Texture Or Creativity----
------------------------4 For Trying--------------------------

D.J Em Sce: 5/10
i got stupid heat, but not the kind the friction makes when you beatin yo meat,
the kind that willl set flames upon yo tung when yo spittin to beats,
your obselete, the only way you'll be a victor is if your crowned in defeat,
i kill all m.cs on dees microphones,
i'll kill you repeatidly like physco clones,
i spit cuurents, and your rymes dont even flow,
be the end of this rap i'll get yo ass runin lilke your nose,
i was hungry until i just ate you up,
now im stuffed like the crust that they serve at pizza hut
----You Had Some Creativity In Your Spit. You Need To Work On Multis and Metaphors. Better Punches and Vocab-
--------------------5 For Effort------------------------------


Sorry Ambition But He Just Came Hotter...It's All Good For Newbs Though...

~R~

Yo! Very good battle i'm really impressed with the whole battle and like mad flow good battle to the both of you. NOW! On to what was up! ight the battle was tight as i said before but dj kid had a sicker flow to ambition but ambiton murdered you! It was heated and intense! Like mad! Crazy right! Oh and Big up to the Ma$e line! HA HA! anyway nothing personal but Dj took it! Holla back but seriously both were good but dj took crown! Not bad for a newb!

close dis its a given i thought i told you that already

uuuuppppiiiinnnn for votes

Um. I like dj em sce's stuff, but I *SO* don't get why everyone's givin' him big ups for this one. Maybe I'm missing somethin'. But what I see is a pretty decent verse by Ambition, and a so-so verse by dj em sce (with some okay punches but nothing like he's dropped in other battles).

Ambition's biggest problem is he started off slow and had some awkward phrasing. But around the midpoint his stuff began to pick up and displayed some nice multi's:

its just that fuckin simple you'll get popped wit no warning/
dont think you run the fuckin streets because you jog in the morning/
kill so much I got a morge in my house/
you wanna live???...better shut it like you got doors in ya mouth/

Yeah, nothin that knocks you over, but fairly solid. Honestly, I don't see how Ambition got slept on so bad. I'm giving him the vote. The verses were fairly close, but he had more content and more definite punches.

this was a very in-experienced battle.

I have to give it to Ambition though.
It was fairley close. But Ambition had better punches.
Work on your style.
Both elevate. Work on originality....
Seen alotta played concepts.

DJ MC D.J Em Sce: 5/10
i got stupid heat, but not the kind the friction makes when you beatin yo meat,
the kind that willl set flames upon yo tung when yo spittin to beats,
your obselete, the only way you'll be a victor is if your crowned in defeat,
i kill all m.cs on dees microphones,
i'll kill you repeatidly like physco clones,
i spit cuurents, and your rymes dont even flow,
be the end of this rap i'll get yo ass runin lilke your nose,
i was hungry until i just ate you up,
now im stuffed like the crust that they serve at pizza hut
----You Had Some Creativity In Your Spit. You Need To Work On Multis and Metaphors. Better Punches and Vocab-
--------------------7For Effort------------------------------

em sce, that was heat where you learn to rap like that?

what the fuck you give your opinion in your vote not just give your opinion quit freeposting shit

yo man this is a very weak battle kinda hard to decide.....

meta=d.j. nice lil gay pizza hut line

punch= both

multi=none

vocab=d.j

pretty basic voting but you all can agree its all thats needed...........

so d.j gets this battle jus by a lil.........