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***TOoN-VS-killaconcepz***
unlim bars(as many as you need)
first to five votes no bitting:nono: no ridding :hump: check in, and spit first....Good Luck |
oh yea i forgot
3-0 KO 4-1 TKO ok checkin' in |
aight
checkin in............................................... |
A Yo Lets Go
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Spit First Dawg.............................................. ...........
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AYO
thought u could beat me but i don't know wat ur lyin' for cuz shit bout' to {jumpoff} like {niggas on divin' boards} this fagat got more colors than a coral reef cuz when i break his grill he won't be able to afford no beef my flow is persistant and i'll erase ur existance punch u in ya face wit' lines until ya mouth starts to listen but that's besides the fact that i'll win this easy cuz ur attemts are useless........................... i mean really cuz i walk into beef walk in da club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat when i stokp u wit' cleats my hand speaks sign language so i'll make my fist talk in your sleep and then leave a slash across ya cheek like it was part of ya speech u say ur nice but u ain't close to the best claimin' u ben thru war zones without' a scar on ur chest battlin' me was a vital mistake cuz i'll completely destroy u like fat men wit' cakes so just buck up and accept ur merkin' cuz like mike tyson's comeback ya punches ain't workin' and i got flows that'll leave u dazed for days cuz u beatin' me is like stevie wonder findin' his way out a maze i got this kid shook like a rattle and only time u {elevate} is when ur uppin' ur battles so wateva u say or do is menial to me so log and run away............................ IMMEDIATLY |
c'mon and spit dawg
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Yo Check this
I'll stab you in the head till theres no blood left ta bleed Rappin with no soul theres no chance to revive ya speech/ Ya rhymes deceased, as your vital signs decrease You'll be screaming like a hindhu lyricists" i dont want no beef!"/ Ya time is reached, life like the end of CB radio conversations Over rated coulnt find ya star status in earths orbital constellations/ Follow my migration, because your below me in observation Efficiently rape your immunity until magic joshnson rubs blood in your abrasians/ Your an equation, a small problem thats easily solved Like the probability of a sure death im leavng you cold/ Eating your mold, you dont shape up like a square with three sides Holdin ya self high with a marquee but if ya saw me you'd have to pre-write/ Swallowing pride, ya title suggest i defeat you with joy Like the look on your face when you up inside 13 year old boys/ "dogg u kinda like a gap model without the sweater"??...what the f**k was that? Conceptz, my d*ck comes harder than that Switch it If you got questions, then the answers waitin// Cause my flowz stay sick, like Hospital Patients// remember that |
nice battle yo
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uppin yo
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yeah....wait til I start spittin 4real......just have no time involved........uppin....
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u wanna tag in the tourny yo
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uppin' dis' shit
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I sent you a pm...........uppin......................
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uppin' dis
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Killaconcepts took this one it was a good battle I was feelin your opener a lot.
Toon I was feelin some of your lines too my fav. was. Eating your mold, you dont shape up like a square with three sides Holdin ya self high with a marquee but if ya saw me you'd have to pre-write/ But just didnt feel you come on as strong. I know you guys are pissed cause your battles gettin sleeped on mines is to. So could you return the favor and go vote for my battle?????? Sorry though Too. V/ Killa |
mis-spelled ya name Toon.......................................
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thanx but uppin'
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uppin' dis shit man
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once more
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uppin'
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votes pleaze
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Im going with Kilaconceptz
Cos.. he had better flow & punches... Toon had better creatity & wordplay but chat alot of garabeg had no flow and had wack structue Vote = K |
i give this battle to toon.his flowed better and had better punches,and the beginning was better.
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Decent.
Decent Battle Here..
Kilaconceptz: 4/10 thought u could beat me but i don't know wat ur lyin' for cuz shit bout' to {jumpoff} like {niggas on divin' boards} -Funny, I Liked The Humor- this fagat got more colors than a coral reef cuz when i break his grill he won't be able to afford no beef -Stupid Punch- my flow is persistant and i'll erase ur existance punch u in ya face wit' lines until ya mouth starts to listen -Weak- but that's besides the fact that i'll win this easy cuz ur attemts are useless........................... -Shitty- i mean really cuz i walk into beef walk in da club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat when i stokp u wit' cleats my hand speaks sign language so i'll make my fist talk in your sleep and then leave a slash across ya cheek like it was part of ya speech u say ur nice but u ain't close to the best claimin' u ben thru war zones without' a scar on ur chest battlin' me was a vital mistake cuz i'll completely destroy u like fat men wit' cakes so just buck up and accept ur merkin' cuz like mike tyson's comeback ya punches ain't workin' and i got flows that'll leave u dazed for days cuz u beatin' me is like stevie wonder findin' his way out a maze i got this kid shook like a rattle and only time u {elevate} is when ur uppin' ur battles so wateva u say or do is menial to me so log and run away............................ ----Rest of Your Shit Was Weak---- TOoN: 7/10 I'll stab you in the head till theres no blood left ta bleed Rappin with no soul theres no chance to revive ya speech/ Ya rhymes deceased, as your vital signs decrease You'll be screaming like a hindhu lyricists" i dont want no beef!"/ --Tight, Like The Beginner.-- Ya time is reached, life like the end of CB radio conversations Over rated coulnt find ya star status in earths orbital constellations/ -Didn't Understand It, Weak In My Book.-- Follow my migration, because your below me in observation Efficiently rape your immunity until magic joshnson rubs blood in your abrasians/ --Definitly A Decent Line, Hott-- Your an equation, a small problem thats easily solved Like the probability of a sure death im leavng you cold/ Eating your mold, you dont shape up like a square with three sides Holdin ya self high with a marquee but if ya saw me you'd have to pre-write/ ---Aight, Wasnt Anything Big-- Swallowing pride, ya title suggest i defeat you with joy Like the look on your face when you up inside 13 year old boys/ "dogg u kinda like a gap model without the sweater"??...what the f**k was that? Conceptz, my d*ck comes harder than that ---Weak.....-- Switch it If you got questions, then the answers waitin// Cause my flowz stay sick, like Hospital Patients// --Heard A Million Times, Think Original-- Vote---Toon |
uppin' yo
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let's go yo
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nice battle both of u both had coo verses a few nice lines here and there but overall i think killa took this one sorry too but he edged it out but really u both had very nice verses good job
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...211#post1198211 can u hit that battle up please both of u their cheating me there pz |
thanx.......Only poll votes count though dawg...............
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OOOPs i didnt poll vote ill do it right now my bad
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i am voting for toon cos i have seen killaconcepz lines before
"i mean really cuz i walk into beef walk in da club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat when i stokp u wit' cleats he has used it before vote on this battle plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505 |
u to r guna get banned if u dnt stop uppin man......any way....dis was a nice battle..
toon came wid some week punches but some hit hard......personals lacked power....flow as ok....structure was basic....wordplay was ok...overall...6/10 k......came wid hard punches...personals were basic but effective...flow wasn't realy there....structure was nice.....fwordplay was ok...overall...7/10 nice battle keep it up both of you! v/k |
toon wins..........................cant poll tho havent got over 100 posts yet sz
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toons verse had better punches but the other dudes verse was alright
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