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IllConceptz vs. TOoN
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His best bets to fold... He says his cards weren't properly-delt,
The only thing you could do to make me laugh is offer-me-help, Like not being able to stay 'on' topic... this kids spittin 'off'-hand, If ya punches are 'hittin' then they must be makin a 'soft'-land, I'd give him a chance... But his credibility is zero, Nobody to fear-though, I'll serve you for dinner, saved himself from bein eaten and thinks hes a hero, Must be in denial, but Im just waitin for written proof of this kids wack style, Fuckin retarded herb... He'll read my verse and begin to think this is a trial, From the moment you said set it up and pressed reply you was doomed, Think of him as a pair of *'rabbit ears' cause todays hes gettin "TOONED", *(Bugs Bunny) Get distinguished like nitro, Devoured by my tight-flow, I'ma phsyco, Only way you'd be recognized as first is if rapbattles made a typo, What you got son? |
What the fuck? Aight....I'mm do a quick keystyle then......
Like abstinent females its obvious u just dun want none, ill put a dick on ya spine so u can get the ?fuckin nerve? to cock-back a gun// Ya through, that?s it son, ya lil shit-streek is over, imma send u to the other side like a deadly game of red rover// U don?t fuck men? Well then I guess yer a fuckin dyke, masturbating to a picture of Jordan is the only way ull ?bust-on-the-mic?(mike)// It seems u up Shits-crique(creek) witout a fuckin paddle, u got flow like liquid, I guess that?s why u in ?no-shape? to battle// U might as well become paraplegic cuz ull never hold a microphone, u could have one of yer boyfriends dicks on ya head and still not ?cum-off-the-dome?// Its like im battling even-steven cuz the odds are against u, u must be proud to be a predominately wack emcee, but ya not one of the few// Conceptz wrote his verse under a crescent moon cuz his verse is half assed, sendn ya rhymes ta Internal Suspension my verse has yers ?out-classed?// This fagget sayin he bringin the heat but looks like he forgot the flames, hes stuck in a forward motion cuz he cant ?back-up? wat he claims// Ya expiration date has past, ya old pre-packaged wackness, cant protect u from this tongue lashing if u were licking prophylactics// The only type of addict u are is one addicted to smack cuz yer wack, the name Arctic wouldn?t run wit dope if he fuckin peddled crack// This is all it should take............ |
damn toon u had no business battlin' this guy u completely raped him and ur name should be illconcepz and he should be stripped of rap completly this was a manslaughter
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Can't Vote On Da Pole Cause I Don't Have 50 Posts....But Oh Well...
ToOn Fucking Ripped Dis Kid...For A Quik Keystyle That Was Definitly Sick. I Wouldn't Mind Battleing You Man....Your Actually One Of The Best On Dis Site... Holla My Name... V-ToOn ~R~ |
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Toon Ain't Fuckin Shit.......why The Fuck You Dodging Me Dawg??.........go Post On Our Fuckin Battle That You Set Up Yesterday If You're Soo Fucking Good......
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toon took this better vocab and some of his punches actually hit
u both need to work on personals |
I Agree Toon Had Better Punches But Killacon. Had Some Descent Ones Also.
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Illcon:
His best bets to fold... He says his cards weren't properly-delt, The only thing you could do to make me laugh is offer-me-help, Like not being able to stay 'on' topic... this kids spittin 'off'-hand, If ya punches are 'hittin' then they must be makin a 'soft'-land, I'd give him a chance... But his credibility is zero, Nobody to fear-though, I'll serve you for dinner, saved himself from bein eaten and thinks hes a hero, Must be in denial, but Im just waitin for written proof of this kids wack style, Fuckin retarded herb... He'll read my verse and begin to think this is a trial, From the moment you said set it up and pressed reply you was doomed, Think of him as a pair of *'rabbit ears' cause todays hes gettin "TOONED", *(Bugs Bunny) Get distinguished like nitro, Devoured by my tight-flow, I'ma phsyco, Only way you'd be recognized as first is if rapbattles made a typo, I'd say to work on phrasing, so it comes off a little more street, its readin a little like poetry, too grammatically correct. some personal off his name. toon: Like abstinent females its obvious u just dun want none, ill put a dick on ya spine so u can get the ?fuckin nerve? to cock-back a gun// Ya through, that?s it son, ya lil shit-streek is over, imma send u to the other side like a deadly game of red rover// U don?t fuck men? Well then I guess yer a fuckin dyke, masturbating to a picture of Jordan is the only way ull ?bust-on-the-mic?(mike)// It seems u up Shits-crique(creek) witout a fuckin paddle, u got flow like liquid, I guess that?s why u in ?no-shape? to battle// U might as well become paraplegic cuz ull never hold a microphone, u could have one of yer boyfriends dicks on ya head and still not ?cum-off-the-dome?// Its like im battling even-steven cuz the odds are against u, u must be proud to be a predominately wack emcee, but ya not one of the few// Conceptz wrote his verse under a crescent moon cuz his verse is half assed, sendn ya rhymes ta Internal Suspension my verse has yers ?out-classed?// This fagget sayin he bringin the heat but looks like he forgot the flames, hes stuck in a forward motion cuz he cant ?back-up? wat he claims// Ya expiration date has past, ya old pre-packaged wackness, cant protect u from this tongue lashing if u were licking prophylactics// The only type of addict u are is one addicted to smack cuz yer wack, the name Arctic wouldn?t run wit dope if he fuckin peddled crack// i think too much sex and masturbation metas, some pulled off ok though, but still played topic when overdone. good punchlines, hard metas. rhymes on "wack" can sound played unless part of a multi, like "prepackaged wackness" ok, but didn't like "smack cuz wack". claimin keystyle is lame, cuz it can't be verified so u come off like u sandbaggin. let the verse stand on its own. vote Toon. had more dope shit. |
if ya coud vote on dedd sirius v. froxen wud be much preesh.
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Toon of course.
yo nigga, u kinda shitted, ive been lookin for a challenge....holla back! |
im uppin votes for y'all, u should return da favor and look out fo me...
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Toon takes the win on the basis of his harder punches. But IllConceptz was no slouch either. He had some creative wordplay in there and a more consistent flow than Toon's verse. Also I deduct no points for a good "poetic" format. Who cares if it doesn't look street. If it sounds dope when spoken, that's good enough for me. Props to both y'all. Sorry I don't have enough posts to put down a proper vote yet.
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All Toon Illconcepts Flow Not Sick
I Got Sick Of It Toon Yea Yea Hotter Punchlines And Delivery Concepts Wack You Said Nothing Hot Study Da Butcha 1 |
yo tune I know you completely ripped off your whole verse. Go to THE WORDS OF WISDOM BOARD this bitch bit nearly the whole thing I aint gonna drop no link he knows what he did.....hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!
keystyle my ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fucken punk |
I don't know how to drop a link people but go to THE WORDS OF WISDOM BOARD, the go to the REVOLUTIONARY WAR section of that forum. Go to page two look for a battle between NYC INFAMOUS and NERVOUS WRECK. the proof is all there.dated and everything...lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllll. somebody kick this motherfucker out. SHIT AT LEAST USE SOMETHING THAT HASN'T ALREADY BEEN RECYCLED LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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By the way.........that line about shits creek supposed to read "up shits-critique" not "shits crique" this retard don't even know how to copy shit properly DAMNNNNNNNNNN YOU ONE DUMB MOTHERFUCKER.
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Im uppin this for ya Toon don't worry dawg I got ur back
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what the fuck you talkin about?............if it's a verse that's like mines......then somebody ripped that shit off me........cause I don't bite nigga........look at the dates dumb ass..................I bet you mines was posted first...........
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ok, Im gonna type another link out and then you can shut the fuck up for life ok bitch. then you tell me f the dates match up you fucken punk. next time you get found out don't sit there defending yourself. and it's not a verse like yours its word for word motherfucker. like I said lollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lll. and who the fuck you callin dumbass?? you're the one who can't copy shit properly.
http://pub57.ezboard.com/fsacredsoc...ID=1604.t opic shut the fuck up bitch!!!! |
you look at the dates motherfucker hahahaahahhahahahahahahaha
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