Liquor V ][\/][.O.lB
 

10-15 lines
No dr hate crew votes
Due by 12 midnight EST

Drop it ASAP

Kid I have a date tonite and were goin back to her place at 12
I promise you i'll do this In the morning tomorrow k, If you dont wana wait have this closed
Thanks

Peace It

No problem... I'll wait. I got all the time in the world :)

If ur working skillz match ur ryhmes, thats why u have no job Today
Stealing my Inhalers the only way you could take my Breath Away
Y's ur name say liqour? Alcohols sumwhere U've never Been
I damn this bitch to hell............Like Beavers Comittin Sins
Y'd u except? u've lost ur mind like Inhalin too much Lead
You suck like Teeth being used and giving some bad Head
I aint a slut dude, this wont go easy like ur first battle Did
U'll never find a crew, Terri fox wouldnt run with u Kid
Ur lines are Immature just like urself from Bottom to Top
If u went to New York for New years ur balls still wouldnt Drop
I give you absolutely no props like Mimes actin on Stage
I'll ruin u like novel books when turning to the Last Page
U make me wana Hurl, L swallows more Nut than Squirals
Its cuz you have no job that U have all the Time in the World! (His Last Post)

Hah iight, if i dont have it this morning it will be done by the afternoon or evening.

Here it go

You think your lines are nasty, But they as pure as nuns
Your 14 lines, put to no use, like 9/11 funds
Takin' action, Slashin his chances like a fraction
Mah verse, You couldn't 'beat it' if your name was Micheal Jackson
Though your names Mob, Your rhymes could never be deep
Your lines brightly colored and soft, I'll Call you spits Peeps
This kid is up here tryin to represent windsor
When his spits couldnt be hot if he bit the earths core
Feelin boulimic, After takin you verse in I had to vomit
Like Bush and iraq, This battle wasn't fair, So you had no choice but to bomb-it.

ALright lets get some votes in... Good drop by the way. And good luck to ya

Uppin............................................. .................................................. ...........

U.....p.....p.....i......n...........v....o...t... .e.....p....e....o...l.....e.

Liquor of Tears 6/10 - good flow. i was feelin this verse -Takin' action, Slashin his chances like a fraction
Mah verse, You couldn't 'beat it' if your name was Micheal Jackson

][\/][.O.lB 5.5/10 - feelin this line -Y's ur name say liqour? Alcohols sumwhere U've never Been
I damn this bitch to hell............Like Beavers Comittin Sins

ok can u vote on my battle plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505

Thanks for te vote.......... Uppin.... Again... VOTE PEOPLE!!!!!!!

uppin............................................. ...

mob took this shit b/c he had better flow, and punches, a lil long and coulda had a betta structure, but otha than that...real nice.

liquor, you jus came too weak for me...no real punches...only good line was the 'beat it' michael jackson, and even that is kinda played. check out wec they'll really help ya...keep battlin.

liquior of tears got this battle the boy's verse was hot.the punches and meta's were cool and it was easy to read.

okay lets go.............................................

omfg people.....seriously we need some votes in here. We have so many freaking views and only three votes. UPPIN

yea i was feeling Liquor of Tears lines... espesually When his spits couldnt be hot if he bit the earths core

yea strong on both sides but over all i would vote 4 Liquor of Tears...

i thought u kinda fell apart at the end but i would say it was really good...

vote 4 Liquor of Tears

and plse vote 4 ma battles as well

Uhh, who gave me the third vote? If ya read this and ya did then post why you think i won...

lol n/m for that post, Didnt know there was a second page....

The Micheal Jackson Line Ended Any Chance Of Survival Really Sad And The 911 Line Was Disgraceful Put Ya Head Down You Got Ate Up No Love 1 From Da Butcha

Dude... That was a full fucking hate vote...You didnt even vote the poll idiot... If ya wanna hate bring it to front lines with me and see whos a disgrace... But i dun think that vote should count full hate vote

Butcha Break A Hennessey Bottle Over Ya Face We See Who Liquor Tears child

Damn... That line was great... And only took ya 1 hour and 10 minutes to come up with...

Upp......in......this.......Major.....Sleepin..... ..

If ur working skillz match ur ryhmes, thats why u have no job Today
Stealing my Inhalers the only way you could take my Breath Away
Y's ur name say liqour? Alcohols sumwhere U've never Been
I damn this bitch to hell............Like Beavers Comittin Sins
Y'd u except? u've lost ur mind like Inhalin too much Lead
You suck like Teeth being used and giving some bad Head
I aint a slut dude, this wont go easy like ur first battle Did
U'll never find a crew, Terri fox wouldnt run with u Kid
Ur lines are Immature just like urself from Bottom to Top
If u went to New York for New years ur balls still wouldnt Drop
I give you absolutely no props like Mimes actin on Stage
I'll ruin u like novel books when turning to the Last Page
U make me wana Hurl, L swallows more Nut than Squirals
Its cuz you have no job that U have all the Time in the World! (His Last Post)

not a bad verse good attempts on personals and pounches
you could focus spittin more about that other person though
no hatein

You think your lines are nasty, But they as pure as nuns
Your 14 lines, put to no use, like 9/11 funds
Takin' action, Slashin his chances like a fraction
Mah verse, You couldn't 'beat it' if your name was Micheal Jackson
Though your names Mob, Your rhymes could never be deep
Your lines brightly colored and soft, I'll Call you spits Peeps
This kid is up here tryin to represent windsor
When his spits couldnt be hot if he bit the earths core
Feelin boulimic, After takin you verse in I had to vomit
Like Bush and iraq, This battle wasn't fair, So you had no choice but to bomb-it.

shorter but it feels like this verse was stronger on metas and pounches
you also had a betta structure and a cleaner flow

my vote:Liquor of Tears

vote on battle in sig

peace

Iight, thanks for the vote ill hit up ya battle in a sec... Peace

U....ppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn People Get Ya Votes In Only Need A Couple More!

Yo I Got To Give This To Liquor Of Tears, He Came Strong With The Punchlines, He Came To Back To Back With The Michael Jackson And The Mobb Deep, Like A One Two Combo, Good Battle Though, Show Love And Vote On Some Of My Battles People (vango Vs Butcha) Vango Vs Optimum.