dagreatest V furoshis
 

i just got this message from this dick ryder furoshis/ he wanna battle me so i'ma handle this/ lyrically drop bombs on his fucking carcass/when i grace the mic/i'm actually worshipped/you aint on on my level/u ill equipped/it needs to be said/nobody knows whose son this is/cos u so ugly/when you were born/u left yo mama brain dead/you hustle all the time/but you cant get no dough/nobody likes you/cos you in to everything thats homo/everytime you try to look in a mirror/it cracks/instead of hitting pussy/you wanna specialise in hitting sacks/you wanna follow the footsteps of your father/who turned gay/and left with yo mama's brotha/you a loner/you so fat and ugly/not even a gay man would wanna rape ya/you a male version of a prostitue/working on the city block/but you always getting attacked/fucking cry like a gay bitch/everytime you gonna get slapped/thats it i'm done/now u know i'm lyrically renound/ding ding/KO/bring on the next round

yo ill use 10 lines that will teft line your neck line like tech nine//
you try to disrespect mine it'll cause a wreck shrine//
wit rhymes that intertwine with prime to great to be divine//
im leavin no sign that ill combine your spine with these wicked lines//
my shit is sublime yo i typed this in in the nick of time//
time for you to throw in the towel cuz u said ur last vowel//
your shit if fowel ill kill u in the dark like the nite owel on site pal//
yo shit is pitiful hand it ova to the next individual that wanna get ridiculed//
every nigga wanna get rid of u cuz they sick of you ima make a spic of you//
you thought you knew but ur death sentence is actually due who they gonna crowned a foo// let the audience decide who won this round me or you//

just sum off the top of da head simple she but i think itll do

aww thas gay dint even notice but its eleven lines when i typed it i could of sworn it was 10 but oh well i guess i just slaughterd him with 11 lines my bad

uppin this........................................

yo man on this verse right here>>>> your shit if fowel ill kill u in the dark like the nite owel on site pal//



is suppose to be>>>>>>>>>>>> your shit is fowel ill kill u in the dark like the nite owel on site pal//

its cool man, can we get votes for this one ova here pls

Can't vote -- not enough posts yet -- but I'd give this one to furoshis. Dagreatest has nothing to bring but poorly executed faggot jokes. The format made it tough to follow his flow, and a lot of his rhymes were sketchy. First suggestion: even if you keystyle your stuff, at least go back and format it into readable lines that fit the meter so you don't lose points for sloppiness. Second suggestion: think of some put-downs other than "you're a fag".

Furoshis (haha) was focused on rhyme schemes and did okay with those, but got carried away with some crazy long lines toward the end. Even if you have a machine-gun delivery, that mess is no fun to read. Chop it down to the essentials or make one line into two or something like that. Pretty solid battle verse though.

yo uppin fo some votes..............................

uppin............................................. .

uppin once again cmon peeps vote on dis its not dat hard ya know........

uppin c'mon guys vote pls.................................

good shit from the both of ya i aint gana vote thow just sayin

vote=furoshoius cuz his shit was better ..................................................

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my last uppp......................................

I give this one to furoshis. Dagreatest wasn't that great in this one.

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changed my mind uppin this thang...........

yo c'mon guys you vote on this battle and ill vote on ur battle......
n that doesnt nessecarly mean vote for me........

aight look i goota to give this one to furious even tho nobody should win this weak battle........furious was kinda weak i no for a fact he could of have done better...you just needed some meta4s all in all 6/10

dagreatest you was just pitiful he got from the very beginin but your still learnin so i guess it was coo 4/10

may the best man win

look you was gettin on his appearance and didnt even no wat he looks like,,,you cant be spitten like that on this sight...that kinda batllin is for face to face



may the best man win

yo man we need some vote yall keep ur reason y u voted real and too the point...im getting tired of inadequate feedback posts.....but not sayin it sbad just not acceptable by administrators......................

iight, this battle was weak...

da... You didnt really punch him at all. All y ou really did was call him gay. And ones that repeatidly call someone gay are usually hiding something. Hah, But nah i aint hating. What ya gotta do is work on different punches, you really had no personals or metas, no complexity...

fur.. man really weak verse.. You had one meta, and it was a shit load more complex then your opponents. Though this was a shit verse i have to give it to ya.

Vote-Fur

uppin we need to close this one been goin on for too long........

yo peeps just vote and keep it honest..........aight its not that hard..........

cmon yall help us close this battle....................

yo les get some votes here this is goin to slow..........

umm wow this was kinda of sad but dagreatest had some decent punches i mean nothing hard just better than his oppents
/now u know i'm lyrically renound/ding ding/KO/bring on the next round
that was the best line i heard from both... furooshis you need to step up and elevate if your gonna battle dont come half ass that goes for the both of you there really wasnt too much to judge both need some work but my vote hestaintley goes to
V-DAgreatest

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

i give this to furoshis becuz...
1)da didn't have many punches that hurt..
2)wuzn't tha greatest from either..but i guess it'lld o
3)furoshis wuz overall betta..but both needed some work
4)Ya'll wurr equally bad this battle but the betta of tha badd wuz...
FUROSHIS..so vote:FUROSHIS

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^thanks....................

uppin number?.....................................

yo uppin fo some votes..............................

cmo can someone please vote on this im really tryn to get it closed................................

hey furoshis you did really good everything
dagreatest i have nothing to say but i did not follow your flow it was really hard to read you had alright punches so my vote is furoshis