pictureperfect2 vs. SlaughTa
 

16 lines bout no max really tho, blind spit no dauche bag votes.... due bout 30 min after check in or whenever......

AIGHT so u due in 30 no dickriden votes cuz this is my first battle so keep on uppiin this when ever u ready lame.............

ite checkin in, mine i'll be up within bout halfy, get up on this.....................................

ok ayo....

disinigrate'n cowards burning *ligaments-through*// this nigga claim he be on the block when he soft and lookin 4 a *internet-crew*//my niggaz stompouts till we see *spinals-brake-open* i leave ur street leakin witchya fluid like ya *hydrogen-open*// through pussies *i-penentrate-wit-force-ram// my blaid u'll have ya face painted like a *dedicated-sports-fan*// ya bitch BRAIN'n like she *meditate'n-thoughts-and* wit a *dick-to-slurp-it* the cum on her eyes fukin up her *picture-perfect* go *flip-some-burgers*// cuz as a rapper noones *wants-to-hear-ya-flow* this *dawn-imperial* "track da dumpsta" cuz ya DEMO *GaRBAGe-material*//dawgs-i'm-seroius u not a thug u dont *bust-off-or murk* u was the first kidd on a *buss-off to-church*//
and i *feel-watchu-gonna-do* but dont think so hard cuz ya *still-gonna-lose*//.................

1 holla

uppin wher ya verse coward i see no words from you picture

uppin for ya verse where u at mann..................

sorry took so long had to finish a vote in a different battle........heres my verse

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bet your mom said u could rap, but u only spit crap,
then here she comes wit a wipie to help u wit dat
she say u cooler than picture don’t listen to her, sorry havin to be dissin on her
I wanna be her mister, so from last night tell ‘er I miss her.
Wit that kindergarten vocab looks like u a tattle tale
Put bitches like u in the garbage can to install frear, cus that’s how we battle here
Like a secret kept in the dark I’ll be the spark, so alliterated call me marky mark.
You a stunned surfer in this bloated battle, im the hungry shark
I aint about to fake the funk so Don’t tell me im drunk, don’t give a fuck,
gonna keep rhyming wit my drunkin slur, stay on line till the line curves,
das when I get off, cant turn cuz drunks fucks jus swerve.
Princes Diana here on top at the end jus absurd,
Im the limo driver leavin the whole world disturbed

ok uppin for votes....lets go yo picture was good witchya signatuer that shit sounds homo "even fags say i'm cute".....but anywayzzzz uppin for vote^^^^^^

Ah Yo Da Kid Slaughta Got This Easy 1 Metaphors Killing Um Nigga
Picture Wasnt Even Straight It Was 2 Boring 4 A Comeback
New Nigga Got This Especially Wit Da Church Bus

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slaugta da name speaks 4 it self he slaughta da dude yo homie madd props dat was vicuis man my vote slaughta
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115613

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Slaughta lived up to his moniker. Ridiculous multi's that didn't even ruin the flow like that kind of thing often does. Pictureperfect has the basics but needs to start thinking beyond "I did your mama last night", which was played out back before most other stuff was played out. I don't have enough posts to vote on this, but that's my unofficial verdict. Peace...

Uppin For Fukin Votes......c'mon Man Was Really Good

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i aint voting on slaughta cuz i favor him its just cuz hes a fuckin genius. the church bus was a real fuckin good punchline. pictureperfect2 was good but slaughta got the better diss.


vote-slaughta

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can we get some real votes from none dick riders who know sumin.. i mean shit this guys winnin wit awful structure, one verse makin fun of religion, and abunch of bitches swayin votes for this faggot. someone who know sumin drop an honest vote even if it aint fo me, juz somone tell me i aint alone when im say this, this newbie didn't make anysence and his freinds voted on this...........................

You Sound Mad
You Dont Got One Line Fucking Wit Dat Kids Dedicted Fan Rhymm. Aint You Dat Same Nigga I Roasted I Voted Cuz You Got Slaughta'd
I Dont Know Dat Nigga So I Know You Aint Saying Shit Bout Me. Ya Verse Was Trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
What Were You Saying ?

butcha your the worst rapper int his site you need to realize that ffool me and you gotta battle goin so spit somtin fag

How You Dickriding Me In Some Other Niggas Battle
You Didnt Even Vote Why You Even In Here? Ya Gay Dickrider

Get Ya Skills Up Every One On This Page Will Eat You Nigga
And Dont Reply

Perfectpicture U A Fake Ass Nigga Why U Trnna Persway Peoples Votes Thats Madd Corny On Dawgs Thas Somethin A Fake Nigga Would Do When He Know His Verse Just Wasnt Good At All Be A Real Man Aboutchya Shit Niggaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! U Lame Just Admitted.........................uppin For Votes (dont Take It Personal U Just A Horrible Rapper Loool)


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been readin all your bitchin and your verses he'rs my opinion
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disinigrate'n cowards burning *ligaments-through*// this nigga claim he be on the block when he soft and lookin 4 a *internet-crew*
.......decent opener heard it before tho, and that ligament burnin thang stupid, u aint even sayin usin a metaphor jus talkin out yo ass so u can rhyme yournext week line
//my niggaz stompouts till we see *spinals-brake-open* i leave ur street leakin witchya fluid like ya *hydrogen-open*
......decent multi rhyme but agian the simily is stupid multi dont really make sence
// through pussies *i-penentrate-wit-force-ram// my blaid u'll have ya face painted like a *dedicated-sports-fan*
....*i penetrate-wit-force-ram* nigga if u flow u aint gotta keep puttin ** that shit around your rhymes yo ass so new ta this. and u keep uzin the same forcin multies, and a blaid dont leave a face painted, metaphors sposed ta link similarities from one thing to what u wanna talk about. but wut u sayin dont make sence u just tryin ta get multi's
// ya bitch BRAIN'n like she *meditate'n-thoughts-and* wit a *dick-to-slurp-it* the cum on her eyes fukin up her *picture-perfect* go *flip-some-burgers*
.....u jus forcin multies all over , and that *meditate'n-thoughts-and* dont rhyme wit any of that other stuff u rhymin wit. but it was on topic, but that *flip-some-burgers*
aint got shit ta do wit suckin dick, wich is wicked played,
// cuz as a rapper noones *wants-to-hear-ya-flow* this *dawn-imperial* "track da dumpsta" cuz ya DEMO *GaRBAGe-material*
........horrible stucture dont get the flow u doin, had to read it like 5 times ta see that u tryin ta rhyme them thangs... stucture here gives u no flow
//dawgs-i'm-seroius u not a thug u dont *bust-off-or murk* u was the first kidd on a *buss-off to-church*//
if this was the only time u did ***-**-**** rhymin this would be pretty good but its annoying, and makin fun of sumone for goin to church, wut would yo mamma say bout that, u wanna be goin ta hell or sumin
and i *feel-watchu-gonna-do* but dont think so hard cuz ya *still-gonna-lose*//.................
fuckin terrible finisher, sums up how u be FORCIN MUTIES EVERY FUCKIN LINE

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bet your mom said u could rap, but u only spit crap,
then here she comes wit a wipie to help u wit dat
.... good sturcture, unforced muti, add to flow instead of lookin forced. metaphor stood cuz its reasonable and relatable
she say u cooler than picture don’t listen to her, sorry havin to be dissin on her
I wanna be her mister, so from last night tell ‘er I miss her.
....again flow could read and follow, links from other verse well
Wit that kindergarten vocab looks like u a tattle tale
Put bitches like u in the garbage can to install frear, cus that’s how we battle here
... on topic didnt need ** to see the multies
Like a secret kept in the dark I’ll be the spark, so alliterated call me marky mark.
You a stunned surfer in this bloated battle, im the hungry shark
... new topic, aint stayin on one new topic tho, but good line "alliterated call me marky mark."
I aint about to fake the funk so Don’t tell me im drunk, don’t give a fuck,
gonna keep rhyming wit my drunkin slur, stay on line till the line curves,
das when I get off, cant turn cuz drunks fucks jus swerve.
.... nice flow good muties
Princes Diana here on top at the end jus absurd,
Im the limo driver leavin the whole world disturbed
....i get how the drinkin part links to how the limo driver was drinkin when they crashed, so decent finisher, specially wit the metaphor how u be sayin u ganna leavin the whole world disturbed, but cocky but makes sence

vote-picture, could actually read and understand his flow cuz he had better structre and metaphors actually had to do wit his punches. other cats oppisite of what someones verse should look like on this site. slaughtata after u get that maybe u'll get more comprehension out your verses till then, i dont see how someone could be feelin yo shit.

okay. both strong openers.
flow was good all in all.
my vote goes Slaughta.
He brought it strong.

yo FA REAL U A DICKRIDE wat i wrote was straight key type BITCH ASS NIGGAZ U TRYNNA BRAKE MY FLOW DOWN U FUKIN WAK ASS NIGGA BE- E-Z CUZ I'LL EATCHU TOO NIGGA I HAD WAY HARDER PUNCHES EVEN IF THEY WAS WEAK PICTURE PERFECT STARTED HIS VERSE OFF WIT "ur mom SAYED U COULDNT RAP U SPIT CRAP" hahahahaha WHO THE FUCKS RAP SO SIMPLE FO REAL U PROBABLY PICTURE PERFECTS LOVER FAGOT STOP DICKRIDEN NIGGAZ UPPIN FOR VOTES...............................NOT DICK RIDES

yo man yall both was coo but slaughta got this 1....
slaughta: cool punch line the only one i dint like was the one where you had said
open twice to make ur two lines rhyme....but other than that ur punches
were coo keep practicin and comin hard bro........

pictureperfect2: yo man ur structure was coo but it was too simple for me man.
try workin on ur vocab and itll be all gravy from there....also
try to make ur punches hit harder..n..use better metas...but other
than that you did well...

BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
My vote= SlaughTa

upin for vote where da real niggaz at................

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AIGHT...SLAUGHTA,THIS BATTLE IS BETTER THAN THE LAST ONE I SEEN FROM U...THE DEDICATED SPORTS FAN LINE WAS TIGHT...

PICTUREPERFECT...WTF IS THIS "she say u cooler than picture don’t listen to her, sorry havin to be dissin on her
I wanna be her mister, so from last night tell ‘er I miss her." U SUCK

VOTE=SLAUGHTA

Vote Slaughta Had Better Punches And Flow Picture Perfect Flow Was Straight

i think slaughta got this wit multis and punches..

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They where both pretty good but im going to say picture perfect, i mean your good n all slaughter but battlin isen't all about the disses (no im no dickriding you its called critisizm) Sorry

Vote=Picture Perfect

okay so a battle aint about disses.....i wonder wat the fuk its about then

anywaysss uppin

I said its not "all" about disses
(slaughter i pm'd you)