G:Deuce vs The Butcha (World Permiere)
 

Yo, its ya boy G-Deuce, aka, The Grim Reaper, and this is my World Permiere battle. For some reason, I have seen "The Butcha" too many times, but heres the rules:

No hater votes (like I got any)

No crew votes (sorry crew)

Must be ORIGINAL LYRICS. Oh, and did I say Original Lyrics.

This is for Butcha (yo shop is closed)

This nigga Butcha think he da chef of the house, he did wrong. He be a nigga to show up in a bacon bit thong. I blow holes in ya head, not using my hands. Your gurl hungry, is that why she Unzipping my PANTS! Superman stance, I stand and keep her tongue from stress'n, cause you were kicked out of Cooking school and didnt learn your lesson. Cause of my full aggression, I kill now and smile lata. And cut niggas off at the tongue like really sharp paper. So is this the BLAZED NIGGA session? I cut yo body at the knees and leave the rest at the produce section. So who you think you testing, and you bet not say me. I'd laugh and hang you by ya head like Jackson's Baby. My tongue will give multiple shots, round by round, and throw yo body like wrestling, but this aint no Smackdown.


You got until tommorrow at 3:00 pm, the sooner the better.

Da Butcha Shop Open 24/7 Homie

-this Here For 4 You, G-deuce The Vagina Who Can Reproduce-

Yo, Take A Seat And Let Me Cook =like Tha "electric Chair"//
I Dont Know Who Dis Geek Is, He Think He Rashing On Me He Dreamin, Sleepin=, He "in Da Bed Wit A Bear"//
Butcha Da "deadliest Rookie" G-deuce Like "pregnant Pussy"
=quick 2 Tear//
My "machete Da Bullie" Dont Talk Guns When Ya "clips In Ya Hair"//
Dont Think Car When Im In Ya Hood= "shifting Ya Gears"//
He Didnt Know How Right He Was Saying "world Premiere"//
Cuz A Butcha Battle Da Highlight Of This "worms Carreer"//
I Get "rude On Da Mic"// And Da "losing Aint Mine"//
I Rob Blind Niggaz So I Dont Care If You "new 2 This Site"//(sight)
Ya Whole Squad Bitches "crew Full Of Dikes"//
You Not No Killah You An "actress"
The Only Time G-deuce Got "graphic"(graffic) Was His "computer Designs"//
I'ts Da Butcha Same Bloody "meat Cleaver"// "you Think This Deuce Nigga Hot? "me Neither"// "he Irrelevant And "gettin Weaker"//
When They Find Your Skeleton In Ya Hoodie Then You'll Really Be Da "grim Reaper"//
So "fuck Dat Weak Verbal"// I Make "thug Bleed Internal"//
Listen No One Paying You Attention Like The "drug Free Commercials"//
Look, Buying A Car Only Way You "signing A Deal"//
I Checked Ya Mugshot You Look Like Mase. I'll "wire Ya Grill"//
I Wanted A Battle Wit A "savage Enemie" But Like Da Torch On Da "statue Of Liberty" Ya "fire Aint Real"// Ya Skills "tired & Frail"//
Fuck Da Mic Take A "backup Dancer Offer"//
Cuz Da "butcha" Will Leave You "under" Da Stage Like Da "phantom Of Da Opera"// Im Puttin This Woman Mc Thru "manslaughta"
He Aint Wilding Out I Seen A 3 Year Olds "tantrum Harder"//
Face It You Da King Of The Nerds= Da "geeks Lord"//
If This Homo Won Da Battle He'd Hug His "keyboard"//
You Was A "weak War"// I Smoke "barrels And Green"//
Talkin Bout "hackin' Off My Knees"//
You Aint Cuttin Shit, What You Gonna Stab Me Wit? Da "arrow On Ya Screen?"//

It's Over 1
I'm Off This

Grim came with a real smooth, natural flow. A couple of his punches were soft ("really sharp paper", "kicked out of cooking school"), but on the whole he displayed a lot of confidence and put out a pretty solid verse.

Butcha had the more devastating punches, but it was a mixed bag. The first line was promising but then the second was deflated. His flow was all over the place, so it sometimes read more like a spoken word than a rap over a beat. Some really good rhymes were offset by others that didn't really work, like "rude on da mic / losin' ain't mine". It all averages out to be a good verse but not a great one. Butcha's high points were higher than G.Deuce's but his low points were also lower.

It's a tough call, and I still don't have enough posts to vote anyways. But I think I'd give this one to Butcha by a hair, just on the basis of the greater creativity of his disses. Nice work y'all.

Uppin For Votes Yea............................................... ...........................................

Yea Yo Issac, Im A Monster On A Beat
Read Da Lines Wit Some Rythm, You'll See Da Delivery
Kid When You Spit Da Butcha's Shit You Got 2 Put Some Excitement In Ya Voice Ya Know.
Good Looks 1

What Up G-deuce You Was Feelin My Verse Huh-
Uppin Butcha Still Uppin And On And On 1

You might when this, Butcha, but you got to remember, I freestyled this writing as I was typing. But let me go second nextime, it wont be da same. Believe dat.

NIGGA I TYPED MY SHIT OF THE HEAD 2 RIGHT ON THE SPOT LAST NIGHT.
ANYWAYS SO YOU WAS FEELING THE VERSE HUH CAUSE IT WAS STRAIGHT TO YOU DOGGY. UPPIN FOR VOTES UPPIN FOR VOTES ON AND ON

Uppin Upin Uppin............................................. ......uppin Uppin............]

butcha got this
gdeuce was just lame(you just were)
buthca got this with the punchlines and he had a nice style
flow-butcha
vocab-butcha
punchlines-butcha
multies-butcha

butcha was just better, in every single aspect

Duece..........you need to work on your verse structure, cause I couldn't really get into your verse because it was structured poorly......I couldn't really decipher your punches and etc. to give you an accurate feedback..............2/10

Butcha.......your verse was structured pretty good....but your punch was weak......you used alot of quotations, but didn't have any wordplay..........that's what quotations are used for......also your verse was too long and extended.....you should have compacted it, and it would have given it more of a punch........the more I read, I was like "am I done yet"...........but your verse was clearly better and more complex....but just work on your skills, and polish them up, and you could be pretty nice........5/10

Yea Uppin 4 Some Quick Votes And Shit 1......................

this shit was all butcha, that verse was long but it had crazy punchlines. damn g-duece you really do look like mase. i give da vote 2 butcha 4 metaphors and personals . but g-duece ya flow was straight keep ya head up man.

YEA YEA UPPIN UPPIN HARD

Da Butcha Uppin Uppin Hard.............................................. ..............

YEA TRYING 2 CLOSE THIS SHIT TOO
BUTCHA UPPIN'..........

Uppin For Fucking Votes If You Scarred Go To Church...........................................

gdeuce... butcha served u man... but good try tho no doubt.

vote=butcha

Uppin For Votes Yea!.............................................. ........

Jesus christ BUTCH.
I know we don't usually see eye to eye.
but ya didn't have to write that much.
The first 4 lines would of done to put this wannabe clown down.
Reaper was good (for a first try).
The reaper's outa comission.

VOTE=BUTCHA