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teflon don 03-06-04 05:38 AM

'slaughtered'
 
before u die just know this/u betta concentrate n focus/
on writin nothin but dope shit/cuz when the door is opened/
theres no way to close it/and once my flows spit/
the entire mode flips/from lethal to feroscious/
the throne is/mine i guarantee,even the robe fits/
i just gotta snatch the crown/
so whatteva faggot clown/who thinks he has it, betta pass it down/
or get the back of ya knee caps blasted out/
u fall to the floor, bitch who's laughin now?/
its like u got the wackest style/in history
i just look at the screen and crack a smile/
crush u completely and leave u askin how/
cuz im the master, u average weaklings have to bow/
i'll display my intellect/on a page in the internet/
and slay u wit the best/lyrics
to convince the rest/im ill, and persuade u to quit n rest/
and i'll fight u toys/wit the fist, pen, mic or voice/
but if i use this tool/ to diss you/ i'll rip through/the screen
till every single pixel/ hits you/ like a fistful of nickels...

...and to ALL u kid-krews/tryin to write,this site has been mis-used/
this' true/emceein, challenge me an' ya j'st loose./

teflon don 03-06-04 06:55 AM

wuz up nigga, where u at?
respond in 2 days or just surrender now.

godly6thbar 03-06-04 02:57 PM

that shit was sick cold and jus down right eveil i give a nigga two thumbs up plus mad props ~1~

SlaughTa 03-06-04 05:41 PM

OKAY damn u fuckin idioit niggaz didnt even agree to this battle but i'm still gonna letchu know was up coward i'm bout to postmy verse bitch prepare for da slaughta
godly6thbar cant vote he's DICK rIDEN to EARLY....................

u should've never enter the slaughta hoUsE lame.....................

SlaughTa 03-06-04 05:56 PM

ayo yo yo yo,

his nAme Teflon he on da computer so wat is he really gonna *CoCk-Back*//POST'n a battle wit out me KNOWin just showin he on my DICk like a *JocK-StrAp*//this *Herb-a-CoWard* fuck raP just *Turn-a-ModEL*cuz this fagot probably wearin *ShirTs-wit-FloWers*//for ya text-death this the *Only-da-Beggining-4-You* no glock-Gun-Poppin just twot tunge crossin *ONly-LICK'n-He-Do*//breakfast(brake-fast) give ya hoe *Wild-Nutrition* wit *child-just-spitten* ya *Style-pathetic* the battle *Why-he-Set-it//it aint AXLE-ROSE when i'm say this cRAck-head "bumpin" that *Rock-n-BASE*//this nigga the reason why FLOWER ass niggaz *belong-in-a-VAsE*//its nothin for me to *STAB-A-HOMO*// a bullet u'll have you wit a "ugly mug shot" like *JACkson-PhoTo's*//CAtch'em while he maken flyers for his show and leave'm all over his *ADD's-n-Promo*//and dont talk like the *SLaughTa-DonE*// TEFLON ?How da FUCK? u gonna have a VEST wit *out-a-GUN*//this nigga a PRETTY boi thas why his *FLOW -CUTE*// But everthing he sayin like a LOST member of D12 cuz he aint got *NO-PROOF*//

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SlaughTa 03-06-04 06:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by godly6thbar
that shit was sick cold and jus down right eveil i give a nigga two thumbs up plus mad props ~1~


thas a DICK ride i just put my verse up how this niggaz vote DQ this nigga someone i just put my shit up that vote dont count ............................

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dagreatest 03-06-04 08:02 PM

to start off with i thought teflons verse was good, he's flow was good and he had some good punch lines innit but slaughta just took it up another level, he came out with excellent punchlines and just took it to anotha level, sorry teflon but slaughta gets my vote

demolish 03-06-04 10:40 PM

teflons verse was good. he had word play metas. a very good verse overall its 8/10.
he had the punchlines and everything.
slaughtas verse was a lot better. he came out stronger. the personals, omg the personals wre killin. so the outcome made my decision.


vote-slaughta.

SlaughTa 03-07-04 12:51 AM

uppin for votes............................................. ...........

Vango 03-07-04 06:17 PM

aight teflon dons flow was tighter, absolutely no punches, a battle is supposed to filled with punches, punches directed at your opponent, teflon don your shit had good flow but didnt reallly hit hard,it seemed like a generic written battle rhyme, it could have been directed at anyone, instead of at slaughta, slaughta had harder batttle rhymes, and funnier punchlines, more like what a battle supposed to be. my vote is going to slaughta, but on the real either one of you can get served anytime.

SlaughTa 03-07-04 07:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by VanGo
aight teflon dons flow was tighter, absolutely no punches, a battle is supposed to filled with punches, punches directed at your opponent, teflon don your shit had good flow but didnt reallly hit hard,it seemed like a generic written battle rhyme, it could have been directed at anyone, instead of at slaughta, slaughta had harder batttle rhymes, and funnier punchlines, more like what a battle supposed to be. my vote is going to slaughta, but on the real either one of you can get served anytime.


SO U CALLIN ME OUT HHHUUUHHHHH......ANOTHA LAME TRYNNA COME AT ME I'L L SET IT UP

DONT STEP INTO THE SLAUGHTA HOUSE NIGGA

Vango 03-07-04 07:15 PM

whenever you want it bring it motherfucker, your just another internet mc who couldnt stand a chance in a real battle.

SlaughTa 03-07-04 07:19 PM

So I'mma Post Up Aight Respond Right After Me Mitch Its Over For U And In Person I'll Embaress U Omg U Dont Even Know Herb I'll Set Up R Shit One I Post First U Post After Me Not In In 4 Fukin Hours Right After U See My Shit

But I Got Otha Battles Going On Peep That

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teflon don 03-07-04 09:20 PM

my shit did kinda sound more generalized cuz i went first
but fuck that i still shitted!!!
what up
where the REAL votes at?????

SlaughTa 03-07-04 10:13 PM

Anywaysss....the Real Niggaz Know Was Up Uppin For Votes ..........and Be Honset

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hot clip 03-08-04 12:14 AM

slaughta ya shit was tight as hell but well i was feel teflons shit the most. he had that "imma kill u" flow embedded in that joint. try again slaughta.

vote=teflon

Issachar 03-08-04 09:58 AM

Iono.... it's true SlaughTa brought more personals to the table, but I still only saw two "real" personals against teflon. And teflon's verse was superior in terms of flow, multi's and (IMO) style. It's a tough call. I'm giving a vote to teflon just on the subjective grounds that I enjoyed his junk more.

SlaughTa 03-08-04 06:28 PM

uppin for votes this nigga he didnt even say my name in his battle how da fuck he got more personals anywayss WHERE DA REAL NIGGAZ AT..................

SlaughTa 03-08-04 11:31 PM

uppin and be honest holla back

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SlaughTa 03-09-04 11:05 AM

uppin............................................. ...............................................

SlaughTa 03-10-04 02:28 PM

Uppin............................................. ............

SlaughTa 03-10-04 09:07 PM

uppin............................................. ...............

TOoN 03-10-04 09:23 PM

Teflon..............You flow was mad nice...........I really like to see a kat wit nice flow.....it makes you want to read the verse.....I don't that a battle is just punches, it's a combination of everything put together, including skill.............

Quote:
the entire mode flips/from lethal to feroscious/
the throne is/mine i guarantee,even the robe fits/


^^^^^nice multi-complex.....feelin that................

got kinda weak in some parts like

Quote:
or get the back of ya knee caps blasted out/
u fall to the floor, bitch who's laughin now?/[/QUOTE}

^^^^it was okay......but just okay.............6.5/10

Slaughter........you used straight punches.........which is kool.......

[QUOTE]his nAme Teflon he on da computer so wat is he really gonna *CoCk-Back*//POST'n a battle wit out me KNOWin just showin he on my DICk like a *JocK-StrAp*//


^^^pretty nice intro..........

your verse also got weak and choppy in some parts..........like

Quote:
/it aint AXLE-ROSE when i'm say this cRAck-head "bumpin" that *Rock-n-BASE*//this nigga the reason why FLOWER ass niggaz *belong-in-a-VAsE*//


^^^see what I mean?.......................6/10

BUTCHA 03-11-04 06:58 PM

Vote Slaughta Came Harder Wit Punches Teflon Flow Was Aight Keep Spitten

shank 03-11-04 07:47 PM

both yall came wit the hot lines but i think slaughta got this jus because he had harder punches and metaphors wit multis vote=slaughta

shank 03-11-04 07:58 PM

no offense teflon u gotta nice flow too ...............

Cprogress 03-13-04 05:46 AM

teflon don wins by DQ. Butcha/shank/SlaughTa banned for voting for himself or sharing passwords. DO NOT vote for yourself!!! We have extensive tracking systems in place to catch cheaters.


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