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Da Vinci 03-08-04 08:11 PM

Da Vinci VS L.e.b
 
10-15 lines
No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
3 straight or first to 5
Due by 9:00pm Tuesday night
Don't care who spits first, but I won't have time to go till tommorow, so to speed it up, you can if you want.

L.E.B. 03-09-04 12:32 AM

So this rap battle is against a chump named vinchee
i must be dreaming, somebody please pinch me
this battle be over in the blink of an eye
ill give u so much pain, u'll want to die
and beg for me to kill u and rid u of the pain
but im like a serial killer, mentally insane.
I wont stop, till ur on the floor bleeding,
with your chest wide open, and rats feeding-
on ur intestine, the outcome predestine
the pain unbearable, nothing comparable
to this little ass whipping addressed to you
mr. da vinci better think of what u should do
your dumb ass should of stayed out of rapping
if u had kept on painting u woulda dodged a slapping.
so ur times up, here's a friendly goodbye
wait a second, didnt u just fucking die?

:shoot:

Da Vinci 03-10-04 02:36 AM

Sorry I'll post by tommorow, I've busy with school lately.

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:15 PM

Dear Diary,

Today I had to battle this boy named Da Vinci//
I'm really quite confused, I thought I’d win, but he's beat'n me easily//
His mettas, were better, and I've never seen a vocab with such complexity//
He moved around my punches, oh so effortlessly//
Its almost as if he had a map to my entire strategy//

Maybe Tim tipped him off, Tim is just pissed off, he needs me to swallow but I can’t help but spit//
Da Vinci even painted my name (L.E.B) Lyrically Everybody’s Bitch //
Now everyone's callin me this! Tim tells me “it won't stick,” and “just shut up and stay up on this dick”//
All-and-all today was shit, even my mom told me that I was an accident//

She said she didn’t plan on having me as a baby//
But two transvestites rapped her back in the eighties//
And I know this all may sound crazy//
I went to a psychic she told me to kill myself cause I have no future//
After this battle today I'ma take her advice and listen to her//
Dear Diary, I regret to inform you this will be my last entry//
I just don't see the point not more, after battle'n Da Vinci//

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:16 PM

Sincerly, Yours

L.E.B

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Alright there it is, now we just votes. Sorry for taken so long man, I'm just in mid-terms this week.

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:20 PM

What the hell??? why did it spread mine on to two posts?? Anyways, nice drop L.E.B

L.E.B. 03-10-04 08:53 PM

very nice style on ur rap, lets hope ppl actually vote.........

Da Vinci 03-11-04 04:04 PM

Come on yall, we need some votes on this one, either way!!

Da Vinci 03-11-04 05:55 PM

Alright yall, I just voted on about 10 or 11 battles, so can we get some votes here.

Afterword 03-12-04 12:31 AM

yo yall are right about the lack of voting aroun this bitch
niggaz iz sleepin on this one too
on da real i have low expectations for most of these battles, but this one was hot
yall both came correct, with the vocab, rhyme scheme, and word play

but i side with da vinci for killin him with the diary entry, fresh and creative
L.E.B. was hangin in there but i wasnt satisfied with his ending

Da Vinci 03-13-04 10:08 AM

We need some votes on this one yall, either way.

Restricted 03-13-04 11:14 AM

Alright..

I think Da Vinci Took This One Because of His Style With His Flow...I Like That...Something New....

You Pimp Come Check Out I.L.L. in Crew Forums...Just Try Out...

To L.E.B.....You Did A Good Job Just His Stlye Was Crazy Man..

Vote: Da Vinci

~R~

Da Vinci 03-13-04 10:01 PM

Alright cool, we still need more votes. Come on yall,

Da Vinci 03-14-04 08:41 PM

Hey we need some votes on this one, come on yall

Da Vinci 03-15-04 06:06 PM

Alright, I just voted on a bunch, I'm gona bring this to the front of the front lines one more time and maybe these people will check it out.

Crossword 03-15-04 06:56 PM

Yo this was a iight battle... Davinci definantly takes this because of his great style. The diary thing made a punch of it's own. L.E.B nice battle with him, but this kid came too creative for ya. Nice style Da Vinci, like ya shit.

V/ Da Vinci

Crossword 03-15-04 06:56 PM

and can ya hit up the battle in my siggy? Thanks appreciate it.

Da Vinci 03-15-04 11:15 PM

alright cool, all we need is a few more votes, i'll check yours out liquid

James West 03-16-04 12:14 AM

WOW, I applaud both of you for good verses....

This one is hard to decide.

L.E.B. used Da's name and it was good, but I think Im gonna have to go with Da Vinci on this one due to his use of the Diary style of his verse,

My Vote goes to Da Vinci

Da Vinci 03-16-04 08:46 PM

alright, cool so again, i'm a bring this to the top, see if we can get that last vote L.E.B

!ceCold 03-17-04 07:14 AM

yo both nice and wicked style.
but Da Vinci did it for me with the diary.very nice.
L.E.B it was very close but he just got it mate.

v/Da Vinci


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