S-killz vs, lk63
 

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heres my verse

you say-you-willing, for a lyrical-killing/
so you better, put-your-lyrical-will-in/
S-killz, will super-kll, you ass,/
you-wont-even-have-an-afterlife/
my rhyme is a knife, it can-take-your-life/
i dont know anything-bout-you/
but by replying to-me, i can see/
you're-pretty-stupid, for doing-what-you-did/
more of-your-posting i gotta-forbid/
is wacking up the-site, i cant stand-the-sight/
put-your-fists-up, and fight, before-you-run-of-fright/

:shoot:

I’m a replace ur Ego with a Halo, but u still wont Shine\\
Rip off ur username and replace it with an Out of Order Sign\\ Ur rhymes Wack, and only reason ur punches ill, Cuz ur Handicapped\\ So Kick Back, (lol), relax, well give u a free Epileptic Attack\\ U punches like ur figure, half man, half plastic, half’s not Real\\ U can’t get a Deal, Cuz ur not aloud in the street with them Wheelz \\ (Wheelchair)\\ U don’t know how to battle, so I assume u just Bored\\ My rhymes so hot, they got u drooling on ur Keyboard\\ Ur Flow is all screwed up, and ur head is a Screw On\\ Ur more cried and prayed for then that movie “Armageddon”\\ , ur flow, punches they all just retarded, u’ll be more Dissed and Black Listed then Fred Durst, more Spat on and Cursed Than the ‘Water Boy’ …Man ur ‘literally’ Cursed\\ My words r Murder Material, it’ll have u more bent out of shape than a bunny Aerial\\ I’m like a serial killer, putting pedal to the metal, preparing u a quick Burial\\ If we had to put skills to Size u would be a Tester// I’m stomping u like a f***ing Sumo Wrestler// , ur style is more Messed Up, Then fags Dressed Up\\ Buckle up, ur mom found u and ur rhymes in a F***ing Garbage Dump// U think u could win this, Hell NO\\ U couldn’t fit ur Ego on a A4 Photo,//Homo//
In this battle ur punches making U-Turns\\ My style is so hot, only thing u taking home is Third Degree Burns// yeah my style is a definite S-Killa, U got no Flow\\ my rhyme make ya open minded like drills\\ up ur spine with chills\\
sorry s- but this shit killz//
Ur a space Filla, with a lot of fake Ammo,\\ and the Pansy Flow Sorry Bro but u gotto go, I’ll win this 5-Zero see ya later Rambo\\

sorry but here it is :thefinger

OK lets get them votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^votes pls

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for votes

sorry but this was a tko knockout first round by IK63, better flow, better punches, strong finish, this was like lennox lewis fighting oscar de la hoya.

peace Vango

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votes please

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I'm a replace ur Ego with a Halo, but u still wont Shine\\
Rip off ur username and replace it with an Out of Order Sign\\
Ur rhymes Wack, and only reason ur punches ill, Cuz ur Handicapped\\
So Kick Back, (lol), relax, well give u a free Epileptic Attack\\
U punches like ur figure, half man, half plastic, half's not Real\\
U can't get a Deal, Cuz ur not aloud in the street with them Wheelz \\
(Wheelchair)\\
U don't know how to battle, so I assume u just Bored\\
My rhymes so hot, they got u drooling on ur Keyboard\\
Ur Flow is all screwed up, and ur head is a Screw On\\
Ur more cried and prayed for then that movie "Armageddon"\\ ,
ur flow, punches they all just retarded, u'll be more Dissed and Black Listed then Fred Durst, more Spat on and Cursed Than the 'Water Boy' 'Man ur 'literally'Cursed\\
My words r Murder Material, it'll have u more bent out of shape than a bunny Aerial\\
I'm like a serial killer, putting pedal to the metal, preparing u a quick Burial\\
If we had to put skills to Size u would be a Tester// I'm stomping u like a f***ing Sumo Wrestler// ,
ur style is more Messed Up, Then fags Dressed Up\\
Buckle up, ur mom found u and ur rhymes in a F***ing Garbage Dump//
U think u could win this, Hell NO\\ U couldn't fit ur Ego on a A4 Photo,//
Homo//

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LK63 won this becuz of tha personals and tha punch lines both wurr good but those knocked s killz outttttt....vote me vs supervillain @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116334

VOTE:LK63

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so those are stupid votes
barely explained at all! even the person that voted for me
its bullshit!

I wasn't feel you guys at all you both are newbish in your flow and u need to uppin your skills and ik63 u wack and your structure sucks to u need to change that up also this ain't no chat room yo both were like on the same page wit each other even dough ik63 had more lines he still didn't win and nor did skillz i am giving this one to skills dough cuz i could understand his and is structure was better and his punches was lil bit better and you ppl need to learn how to vote.

v/Skills

return the favor

iight... This is how it goes. S-killz ya lines were too short. and you dont need the dashes if there isnt a punch or word play. You had some punched but they were weak as hell. Besides that there was nothing. Work on your line length and try and fit in some multies and personals they give points to the verse.

lk.. Like always you have a nice verse. Some of the shit...was exactly that, but you had some nice punches and metas in there. I liked th eout of order thing. I think you should try and structure you shit more so its easier to read... instead of a paragraph make it spaced using Enter.

This was really a lopsided battle. lk took this in all categories that were availible in this battle. S-killz got eaten up... Just keep workin on what i mentioned and you'll get better S-killz.

V/LK

well thanks for the explained vote godfather and liquior of tears. but those other votes were bullshit they shouldnt count.

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far

L.I.Tears ur vote never went through, please try again

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far