$$urpreme verse d.j em sce
 

wat the hell is you doin tryn to battle me but we bout to spit at the same time so we are going to drop at the same time so when your done with yours than i;ll be done wit mines...
same rules as the other one

aight here we go

may the best man win

this is not even a battle cut this delete it he aint tryn to battle now

nevermind were gonna battle

R U A DJ OR AN MC IM CONFUSED//
YOUR LOST LIKE THE KIDS IN NEVERLAND GETTING ABUSED//
IM A LYRICAL SOLDIER CAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH//
U WOULD THINK I HAD A PORN STAR THE WAY I GO HARD IN THE BOOTH//
YOUR INDENIAL THINKING YOUR BETTER THEN ME//
MY LYRICS ARE SHARP THEY'LL CUT UR NUTS OFF LIKE U GOT A VASECTOMY// I’LL LEAVE YOU WITH MORE BLOOD THEN UMBILICAL CORDS// YOU WILL NEVER SEE 5 MICS AT THE SOURCE//
MY PUNCHLINES WILL HAVE YOU SEENING STARS//
YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT PAIN IS YOUR ONLY SCAR//IS A STRETCH MARK
:shoot:

Look imma dj cuz I be scratchin up your gimmick//
But im also lyrically inclined my style you try mimic//
look your frosted like a flake but you will neva b great like that tiger named tony//
i'll have you fellin the blues cuz your rhyming style is bent like crafts macaroni//
see im a hands on type of nigga who get mo phisical then sex positions//
in this rap game all you be is a blemish in this lyrical exhibition//
you cant see me like midgets shoppin at big and tall,
see im a lite weight but still on the balance beam is the only time I take a fall//
like m.c hammer you no you cant touch dude cuz my rhyme book will crush you//
im on top I can see your community from a birds eye view//
see my rhymes cumn smoother than when you beat yo meat wit lotion//
I got this notion that im a lyrical magician who will get you wishin for my ill rhymin potion//

may the best man win

upppiiinnn thios bitch this battle rite here i s a given

We Need Votes
U Know Who 2 Pick


Read This Guys Lines Their Korny

uppiinn this bitch we need some votes....may the best man win

man emcee took this shit nice punches and flows
cant say much about supreme


vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116501

that's why your vote aint even gonna count
you need to read the instructions how to vote

uuupppiiinnn this bitch........i no its a weak battle but c'mon

Check d.j em sce's Lines

see im a hands on type of nigga who get mo phisical then sex positions//
in this rap game all you be is a blemish in this lyrical exhibition//
you cant see me like midgets shoppin at big and tall,
see im a lite weight but still on the balance beam is the only time I take a fall//

There u got word play and a strong punchline better then any of $$UPREME's.

THis line below a good punch line.

like m.c hammer you no you cant touch dude cuz my rhyme book will crush you//
im on top I can see your community from a birds eye view//

And a strong final verse to finish it all of.

see my rhymes cumn smoother than when you beat yo meat wit lotion//
I got this notion that im a lyrical magician who will get you wishin for my ill rhymin potion//

See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars

Votes (should be) Conducted on:

personals: d.j em sce
punches: $$UPREME
Flow: d.j em sce
Multis: NEITHER!!!
Wordplay: d.j em sce
Lyrical Content: d.j em sce
Structure: d.j em sce
Content: d.j em sce

Its easy to say Over all ..... "D.j em sce"

(this is a well explained vote)

Yo d.j em sce, Good Punches, consistant flow, Great structure, easy to read. also enjoyable to read "look your frosted like a flake but you will neva b great like that tiger named tony" Funny as fuck lol. 8/10

$$UPREME, nice flow, Lil weaker on the punches, Structure was a little off, but easy to read, great opener, lil short though. If ya kept the flow goin a bit longer and had a couple more hard hittin punches it'd be in the bag.overall 6/10

v/ d.j em sce

ya supreme your verse seemed cut short, decent punches but aint good enough compared to what d.j. dropped wit that tony the tiger line and big and tall thangs, he had more thought put into his punches. yours was more straight foward. another line like "IM A LYRICAL SOLDIER CAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH//
U WOULD THINK I HAD A PORN STAR THE WAY I GO HARD IN THE BOOTH//" i woulda gave it to ya, but ya both of you need to get more multies. and put more time and less stretched linse wit the multies.
vote-dj
this shits an honest vote, no hate
get some real votes on me and ricanelly's battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116470

I Give It To Dj Cuz His Flow Was Superior!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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cum on oyu got to leave a betta explanation then that

uppinnn this bitch..........................may the best man win

dude the tony and the macaroni live was killer, i was week dude. but suprime had some good punches too. and there was more thought in to dj's rhymees and there was a comstant flow, with some awsome structure.
the best man won
vote~djmc

and drop a vote some time in my battles, but be honest.