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I Need Help From Anyone
aiight check it yall i got a problem see theres this girl im mad feelin and shes hella cool i want to impress her wit some writtin words a poem rap song what eva but thats half the problem i can write a lil bit but its never good and on top of that i got for this girl so bad that i cant even talk let alone write so if i could get some help you know maybe a few of yall can drop me so shyte so i can get this girl please yall im desperate :banghead: :help:
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Ever watch the movie Dead Poet's Society with Robin Williams?
Do what that one kid did with the girl he wanted. |
u should post something in the poetry thing on this website u could get help there
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If You Can't Write It, Bite It.
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Make up a variation of "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue". It always works on girls. No matter how lame-ass it sounds.
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hey kid just ask the girl out damit thats wut i did/or make her a lovely poem or if u know how to sing sing to her ok
or and please help me im desperate to battle or learn how i need help to thanx |
i feel you i like this girl myself and im crazy for her but dont rap to her try to be nice cause if you rap she is gonna think you dumb try to get her with patience
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Just think about her, and make a rap about her. Like if she has nice har and nice eyes, put that. You should also make the piece respectful to women, don't add "Hoe" and "Bitch" and stuff like that. And yea, you should sing it to her, too.
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hey right now i think u are being a wussy so act tough and ask her out or ask her if she wants to go out with u
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um g unit the reson you dont rap yo girls is because you cant rap and to tred i dont no what to tell you
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Yo, Madd if you knew anything about shawties you'd know the worst thing you can do is write her a poem. Did shit didn't work in 3rd grade when u sent a letter that said "do you like me, check yes or no." Yo, holla at shawtie, act like u gotta pair. Any true MC is so sick wit' words that when he holla's at a shawtie he knows how to use his words in a way that grabs her attention. So, if u understand what I'm syain' u know what to do. Just a little truth from my book " the life of a true pimp" and a lesson from my class pimpology 101. Pimpin' ain't, except from me, Holla.
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be her friend befor u try any thing. let her get to know who "you" are. Dont fake on her ether, and dont think, just do it. Writing her a letter is totaly a burn down move dont do it. Be you.
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but then what happens if she's got a guy like what im goin threw then what do i do
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man forget about all that poems and shit.........
just talk to her dog........ and be truthful........ one love...... |
just tell her like this:
when im alone in my room sometimes i stair at the walls and in the baack of my mine i hear my contience call tellen me i need a girl whose as sweet as a dove and the fist time in my life i see i need love |
if you drop a poem she might think your a faggot, (not actually gay, because youre writing to a girl) but a bitch, ask her out.
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<====From A Female's Perspective!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Listen Up Fellas* lol Write Summin Like This!!' lol This Is Some Shit' "K13hl" Wrote To Me' .. It Might Be Lame' But It Worked For Me!!!!!!' Try Something Different' If It's Not You Then Don't Try/or/Do It!! Believe Me' Guys Are So Stupid At Times' When They Try To Be Some One They Are Not!! And Poems Arnt- All That Bad, I Mean I Mostly Feel For This Guy Because I Was Into Him' But Heres Some Shit He Wrote To Me: if u could enter my body, and search inside my brain contains insane and vane thoughts youll think im insane but away from all that, one and all lets have fun this is my song, my lullaby to ya hun from the day i laid eyes on you, dam it was true lil latina baby maybe i could call you my boo do u like them long walks, where i look in ur eyes get paralyzed and lost while im explorin ur thighs maybe its montonony how i lick on ur body body moanin and groanin nobody there who could stop me stop me i touch the right places, while u show me fuck faces you'll be prayin to God and thankin him for his graces embraces and kisses, reminiscin this time goddamit that ass, that face is caught in my mind i wish we could see that day wen throw away the bouquet but now i'd rather lay on ur back so that we can now play tossin and turnin, the heat is burnin on up we can make love my baby or if u want we can fuck anyway that you like it, can give it up all night long nibble ur hips and tits and strip off ur thong ill be searchin ur body, every inch will be covered want me to go deeper inside, make me strip off the rubber like no other i take ya to place you've never seen the peak of the fantasy that u see in ur dreams the sex is amazing, so straight after we blazin ill tickle the spots while we lay around lazin im cravin ur body, its every single portion i want we walk down the streets you as my girl i will flaunt all these people will want ya, look but dont touch if they knew what i do, they couldnt give you that much i want you so bad, mami are you hearing me please my dicks gettin so hard that it could stretch over the seas It Got Me All Wet & Ex-Hausted..! Nah Just Playin' But Yeah That Shit Really Works If You Would Like To Know Who You Are Getting This Advice From!!: Just Click On The Bottom Line "A Few Pics Of Me" http://www.face-pic.com/disasterpeice420 |
how can i get better because im getting ready for my first battle
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and how can i elevate my rymes too get a win off i need some help
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DP damn that cheesy shit got you wet shit i would get yo ass soakin haha
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I Bet You Would Accomplishment!! lol
Oh Babe Oh Babe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yo, DP. What did u think of the one I made a while ago?
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SPuL Like I Said That Shit Was "HOT" I Wish My Boi Would Drop Me Something Like That!!!!
But You Know Its Pretty Hard' When I Aint Got No Boy!!!!!!! So S'all Good |
haha, thanks. :thumbup: Yea, I gotta give that to someone soon.
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