enygma Vs Adept
 

10 Lines!
You Know The Rules!
and please no bullshit votes!

Give me a minute, I'm cookin up some hot shit....literally, I'm cookin.........This is my checkin, start keyin if ya want

Sorry for the wait.........even though I still dropped first, hmmmmmm?

Adept still owes flows he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/
But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they call you adebt/
Pussy rappers like you need not worry, I even shook the tightest/
I hope you Big Pimpin cause your raps won't make you Brooklyn's Finest/
Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop tomorrow/
The only time this dude spits quick is when he forgot to swallow/
I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin to bore us/
You're still stuck on your first synonym while I'm writin a thesaurus/
Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get go/
Dude, here's a bottle of draino.......Maybe it'll help ya shit flow/

And thats how it's done

And This Is How It Finishes...

I Warned You About Me Like I Gave You A Mid Term-Sign !!//
Let This Worm-Unwined, Cuz The Only Cum Back You Can Make Is When You Put Your Sperm-On-Your-Spine !!//

Enygma Never Has Wordplay..Thats Becuz He Cant Flare-Scrabble !!//
Known To Scare-The-Cattle, Even If We Moved This Arena To The Carnival It Still Wouldnt Be A Fair-Battle !!//

You Crossin My Boundries Like Drunks At Track-Meets !!//
Putting A Miami Jersey In A Suitcase Is The Only Time You Could Ever Pack-Heat !!//

I Got Ya Shit Locked Up Like I Cuffed-Your-Ass !!//
Cuz My Knifes'll Be Happy To Give You A Pierce-In Like The Last Boston-Draft !!//

No Need For Hype-And-Attention, My Blade Swipes-Your-Dimensions !!//
So Ya Know I'll Take The Life Out Of You Kid When I Cut Ya Stomach Open Like-A-C-Section !!//

Uppin.............................................

Damn Please Vote And I Will Return The Favor I Promise!

Uppin for votes...............please don't sleep on this

...Adept...: 8/10
Your Flow Was Decent, But Your Multis and Metaphors Were Awesome. I Enjoyed Your Flow and You Are One Of The Not Many Cats On HEre Who Impress Me...

enygma: 5/10
Your flow was alright, but you need to work on vocab and multis....there really wasn't any personals in this whole battle...

Vote: Adept

~R!

I just want to know where Adept's punches were, cause I don't really see any. All he does is add hyphens-between-words and all of a sudden he is tight. If I gotta do that for you to understand it, I'll break my battle down for you better

Adept still "owes flows" he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/
But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they "call you adebt"/
Direct personal on his name
"Pussy" rappers like you need not worry, I even shook-the-"tightest"/
I hope you "Big Pimpin" cause your raps won't make you "Brooklyn's-Finest"/
He's from Brooklyn......Hmmmmmm......I even made a meta out of their best rapper
Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop-tomorrow/
The only time this dude "spits quick" is when he "forgot-to-swallow"/
In our Bitchslapped http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116252 He wanted me to spit first.......Direct personal
I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin-to-bore-us/
You're still stuck on your "first synonym" while I'm "writin-a-thesaurus"/
All this dude thinks he has are his synonyms.......Direct personal
Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get-go/
Dude, here's a "bottle of draino".......Maybe it'll "help ya shit-flow"/
Decent meta, worthy of a closer

Maybe that will help you out in the future. Please don't drop a vote if you don't understand the battle, it just makes you look foolish..........Oh, Re$TricTed......Try to look Past-The-Hyphens, you might see somethin that makes ya shit your Pants-In-Writin........was that better?

enygma won this becuz hiz structure and his flo wuz betta and i enjoyed it more when i read it...good battlle tho....vote YoungStar vs SnypeR or Vs. $$umpre or Vs.DisastaMasta or Vs. WIll a pear

good battle...enygma you came week...punches were a little played and didnt hit hard...flow was deff there tho...and structure was nice....wordplay was basic and dat kinda droped your grade....5/10
Adept....you had some good punches....flow need a little work...structure was ok....wordplay was basic...overall...6/10
v/adept
no beef

Thanks Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

adept good flow good punches u need to work on vocab and personals
eng ok flow ok punches u need to work on flw vocab and personals
vote adept
vote on my battle
will a peer vs yungstar

Aiight Thanks Will Vote As Soon As I Reach 100 Post Uppin!!!!

^^^

This one goes to adept cuz of word play clearly he kills this guy but i think you tryin to hard to get multis but its all good return da fav dont need 100 post to vote

Adept *tried* to throw a hail of punches, but most of what I saw in his verse fell short. Let's take a look:
"worm unwind" -- nonsense
"cum-back / sperm on your spine" -- too much of a stretch; doesn't work
"flare-scrabble, scare the cattle" -- *shrug* no heat here
"carnival / fair battle" -- okay, finally some noteworthy wordplay.
"drunks at track meets" -- good image
"miami jersey ... pack heat" -- okay, but Miami Heat meta's have been done over and over and over
"shit locked up ... cuffed your ass" -- pretty good punch here
"pierce-in ... boston draft" -- kind of a stretch here
"hype and attention / swipes your dimensions" -- an okay multi
"So Ya Know I'll Take The Life Out Of You Kid When I Cut Ya Stomach Open Like-A-C-Section !!" -- good concept, so-so execution. Too wordy, needs to be shorter and punchier.

enygma opened with some shaky sentence structure and no hard punches for two lines before he really got going. After that, his stuff was as good as Adept's (although the draino line was a little stale), and had a better flow to it. Still, I think he really needed a stronger opener to take the win here. Those weak lines really pulled down his verse overall.

Vote goes to Adept this time. I'd like to see a rematch.