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Furoshis vs. DisasterMaster
yo man u know rules
10-12 lines no hate votes or 1 line votin no d/r first to 5 votes win good luck.................... |
delete this please messed up.....................................
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ok here we go
some poeple from tray six, they try to diss after I serve this sucka, then you'll up to this i'm gona pass u and then you'll miss me cuz im alot of things that you'll never be i'll cook you in three lines like i work at micky D u cant be reppin sac cuz u just tredin water in the heat when its a one hundred and ten you said lets battle cuz you might think im punk im at my best like lil jhon, im getin crunk i can beat u ten thousand times, even when im drunk even though im white i can still spit the funk |
neva mind dont delete this........................k im bout to go right now...........
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yo ill brb back gotta post later pops gotta use comp but i really will have it
fa sho dont think im goona go n rite now alright |
yo i keep my mac clean to blast fiens that try to act mean//
my shits keen to good to go unseen n dont think drunk is when your off caffeine// ill split your spleen wit flows to clean then let every1 watch like a tv screen// but now its time to take my rhymes to the next line// so you betta resign petition me then stand in the picket line// cuz ill leave you in the state of mind wishin that b4 this battle youd decline// n wit my nine penetratin your spine climbin up like a vine makin you mine// me a sucka? i think you need to redefine..dont wanna get ur blood spilled like red wine// n you couldnt serve me if i was a dinner plate u lost is what i accusate// cuz i got verbs that conjugate ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate// yo dis is weak but enough to win i think.............. |
yo man sorry it took so long too but oh well it is what it is........................
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oops second line is............. n dont think drunk is when ur on caffeine//
my bad...................... |
also last line is .....................
cuz i got verbs that conjugate u herbs so ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate// once again sorry for all these mix ups just read it over right now and noticed da mistakes i made.............. |
-------------------dude upin for votes------------
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uppin needs some votes .........................................
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i'on kno y niggaz ain't votin
yo its ez disastermaster's structure i did not like..it didn't flo..build ya meta furoshis..u wurr ferocious..u lit it up wit tha structure and punch linez VOTE:FUROSHIS |
this was really close
dis ok flow good personals u need to work on vocab fur good flow ok punches some were played a lil u need to work on personals and voc vote dis barely cause he actually had a personal |
yo yall we need some votes on dis..................................
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uppin for some votes..........les get this thang over wit...............
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can someone please vote on this........................
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~upin for some votes up in here~~~~~~~~~~
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Im gonna have too give it too furoshis he had better punches and more of a smother flow easy to understand No effense Masterdisaster read more battles and get a way of rapping aint trying to educate you though cuz i keeps it real
IM OUT!!!!! |
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yo furoshis takes this one pretty easily his flow punches and just about everthying else was better except for his fuck ups yo RETURN DA FAVOR MAN
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Yo I Giv E This One 2 Disaster B/c His Punches Were More Personal And Furoshis Yours Were Iight 2 Good Battle Both Of U Keep Strivin
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disasterm: 5/10 neither was very pleasing...strucure was okay, u need stronger metaphors. and it was very simple
furocious: 4/10 like i said neither was very pleasing, structure needs work but more metaphors..vocab was a little better...but not enough i vote/dis this was close it took me a long time to come up with the decision dont forget to return the favor clik the link below <a href="http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933">guvyer4mk vs da classic</a> http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933 |
Vote: furoshis
Reason: Better Punches, WordPlay, Complexity, And Flow. Other Guy Needs Some Help On Battling Verus |
this was a tight battle. Dis and Fur both had pretty good punchlines. But dis was the only one who made his punches personal. So by a slim margin, I give this one to Dis. Oh, and return the favor. Click on my link in my sig. PEACE
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yo main i think that furoshus took this one heres y
furoshus nice flow good stile like the killer multis keep up wit it and you get better disaster master nice style good flows nice punches keep up the work you did good but furo did a lil bet better |
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