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Lyrical MC vs CarsonJetX2
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No Feedin' No Bitin' No D/R I will drop fist |
CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin', Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen, Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten', Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight, Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light, You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates, You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes, He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv, My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me. |
this needs to be in elevated.....not frontlines.
mod move this. your gonna lose...how are u 11-0? |
Moved.. but considering how everyone is new here, you probably won't be getting much votes in Elevated
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Lyrical MC.......
Everything about u is wak your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner ....chek his lyrics.... What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer! 11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it.... Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox 100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going... Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing.... 1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend.... The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend.. Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend... Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again.... |
lets get some votes on dis......even tho dis battle will neva be finshed up in ere
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Lyrical MC...........that verse was kinda weak.........
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^^^it was like you was tryin to come hard.....but you couldn't...............your rhymes were kinda elementary.........no wordplay......no spelling.....nothin....I don't see how your 11-0......no beef....just real...................3.5/10 Jet........your verse was ok..............nuthin really outstanding.....but you had some nice personals............and your punches were better............ Quote:
^^^nice personal.....but you kinda fed off his verse..................4.5/10 Both ya'll didn't really impress me like I thought I would be by lookin at your records.............. |
umm...u didnt vote bro....
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Toon your couldnt do any better.
Is any one else sick of newbies nocking there verse's when they suck? staring to piss me off. maybe thats why im like the only vet on here.... and fed off his verse? what a fuckin moron....it's his sig! |
HAHAHA! Shyt the only red neck newbie around here for as long as yo week ass record holds is you, man you make all newbees sound tough, and this Vet look even more glorified. Stay undershadow ya lil slug, or get a spine and step to da RAP DON! BUt ya better off pissin ya pants and runnin, fool!Ahahaha!
v335T4R***** |
WTF^^^
LMAO...Neways...Upp Dis Shit.. Would Vote But Carson In My Crew.. UPP DIS BATTLE PEEPS!! ~R~ |
This is why i'm inactive on new RB...
flock's of newbies who think they are ILL.... and wakness outnumber's skill on this site. It's a damn shame. |
Yo...I hope I am aloud to vote on this shit...this was a tite battle, dawgz...I think it was pretty close on both sides...
Lyrical MC- I thought you came pretty hard...on your first 2 bars. Everythin' went sorta downhill from there...you still came a'ight, and I probably couldn't do much better, but you coulda cam harder. 6/10 Carson Jet- Your verse was sorta the other way around...your opener was tite, but everything got better as it went along. Punches were dope, flow was perfect...everythin' a verse should be... 9/10 Vote- CarsonJetX2 No hate...could you plz hit these up? Thx... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...740#post1212740 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367 |
Shit...just saw that I couldn't poll...sorry about that, dawgz...
Much respect. |
Yo Lyrical Takes this one his vocab punches flow and structre is all better the part that set him above carson was carsons opener "Everything about u is wak" talkin bout newbs that line is about as herbish as it gets anyways vote lyrical
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yo mod can you cchange da pole vote accedently voted for the wrong guymy bad
Done -strobe |
This is what I saw......
Lyrical came OK but he doesn't really throw any punches. He comes wit some good, complex lines that he can't spell and passes them off for punches. He might be good in a topical match or maybe a vocab cypher, but his punches just aren't there. Carson came a lot harder and even though the same sigs and stuff aren't there for his personals, you can still tell they were hittin hard. Flowed well and overall good verse. Vote - Carson |
lyrikals verse was o.k, abit average really some gud wordplay n it flowed nice enough but i didnt really feel any of ya punches!
carson-i've seen beta from u to man opener was real tight but i thought it fell off abit then, flows always on point wiv u cos of ya audio which is gud, nice read but nothin to special. but out n out winner overall! pretty tight battle......pz |
neither were very impressive not talkin shit sayin im better ive just seen better from both
carson jet x won better punches and u came more creative ur verse was funny and great flow try to throw in some more multis lyrical good flow and vocab u need 2 work on ur creativity every single line was played i wasnt really feelin it good verses from both i think carson caught the edge |
uppin''
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the breakdown
Lyrical CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin, Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin', 6.5 Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen, Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten', 7.5 Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight, Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light, 6.5 You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates, You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes, 8 He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv, My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me. 7 carson Lyrical MC....... Everything about u is wak your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner ....chek his lyrics.... What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer! 7.5 11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it.... Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox 7 100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going... Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing.... 6.5 1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend.... The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend.. 7 Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend... Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again.... 7 hmm well i don't know what to say besides i'm a little dissapointed with this but whatever...i like carson's flow...but he really didn't have ANYTHING half intelligent in his verse breakdown on points lyrical-35.5/50 carson-35/50 v-lyrical |
aigght..cheers bro...uppin' :)
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upppin' ;)
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breakdown:
lyrical MC: CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin, Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin', ^^ok opener good 2nd line1st one was ok 6/10 Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen, Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten', ^^another ok bar coulda been better 6/10 Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight, Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light, ^^good 2nd line 1st one is ok 7/10 You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates, You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes, ^^wasnt feelin this felt stretched and forced 3/10 He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv, My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me. ^^good closer 7/10 overall: 29/50 CarsonJetX2: Everything about u is wak your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner ....chek his lyrics.... What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer! ^^good opener and personal 7/10 11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it.... Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox ^^ another good punch and personal 7/10 100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going... Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing.... ^^hot shyt good multies/wordplay 8/10 1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend.... The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend.. ^^good bar nice shyt 7/10 Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend... Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again.... ^^good closer and wordplay 6/10 overall: 35/50 vote:CarsonJetX2 good verse from both but i think carson took this by using hard hittin punches and good wordplay and multies nice verses from both but carson has my vote |
aight mc got this one....
mc: you was coo everything you spit is hot.....not much you need work on and everythin you do need work on your already workinn on it...was feelin just about all of your lines...all in all8/10 jet: not good..i would have expected mo from you..work on your lines make them rhyme....jet you was hot in the end...but in the begin you was not so good.but im pretty sure you no wat your doin..all in all5/10 vote=MC |
aiight cheers bro..upp..dis is guna be clse battle
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My Vote
Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner ....chek his lyrics.... What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer! Nice personal...decent wordplay....good punch....8/10 11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it.... Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox Decent punch...coulda gone places wit the set up line...6/10 100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going... Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing.... Not all that great...6/10 1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend.... The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend.. Gettin better....7/10 Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend... Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again.... Hot closer...9/10 Verse Score - 36/50 Aight your verse was pretty good....good wordplay....flow was straight....punches coulda been better in spots...closer was hot....pretty solid verse...good spit... CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin, Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin', Decent opener....but u didnt land a great punch with that nice set up lin....6/10 Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen, Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten', Nice punch...8/10 Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight, Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light, Still good...8/10 You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates, You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes, Stretched but it was good....7/10 He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv, My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me. haha nice closer...8/10 Verse Score - 37/50 wow this was close....flow was straight.....u had good punches....wordplay was good.....well rounded verse....but the punches took this battle....u had harder hitting punches....close though....very close.... Vote- Lyrical MC |
uppin
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Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner ....chek his lyrics.... What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer! Nice personal 11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it.... Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox Decent punch 100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going... Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing.... soso 1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend.... The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend.. aight punch Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend... Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again.... dope punch CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin, Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin', Decent opener Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen, Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten', Nice Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight, Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light, dope punch You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates, You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes, Stretched but it was good He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv, My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me. haha nice punch Vote- Lyrical MC peep my second link in my sig please |
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carson takes this......lyrical u are just not on the level of carson.......he outpunched u badly......u had some ok bars but carson came nice and consistant........he also had some nice personals that is why he takes this easily
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sad thing is.....this kid's been running around for votes.....
you shoulda won by DR by now......uppin |
i havent dawg
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uopp
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upp 4 da last time......i hope
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