accomplishment VS $$UPREME
 

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yeah your cool rock fish

[Ayo, pictureperfect, This was my first battle in this forum.......Check some shit out before you give a pity vote. Just look at your breakdown........

originality-enygma
stucture-enygma other cats aint very good
flow-enygma
punches-accomplishment
havin fags ride your dick who cant even vote-enygma

I count one catagory that you gave to Accomplishment...........how the fuck does that give him a win?

Can I please get some honest, thought out votes. If you think I got beat, just explain how I lost and don't give a pity vote......I can

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spit somptin you homosexual

You Aint Bout Shit I'll Lay Yo Ass Out On A Stretcher//
Leaving Yo Body Wit Mo Spots Then A Leopard//
Not To Mention Your Lyrics Are Soft//
Ill Crush You Have You Leaking Jam Like I Was Squeezing A Pop Tart//
Fucking Wit Me Have You Seeing Visions//
Niggaz Is All Up Yo Ass Like U Living In Prison//
U Just Another Mc Bitch//
With White Stuff On Your Lip//
Everybody Would Think U Was Sucking Some Dick//
Dont Even Reply I Already Won//
Wit So Much Heat You Would Think My Mouth Was Gun//
When You See Talents I Advise You To Run//
You Aint Even Strong Enough To Cock A Semi-//
Knife Game Will Have Your Hands Down On The Ground Like If You Were Reaching For A Penny//

dont be makin life threatining decisions by callen me out...
the ask me for fo-givness as i'm chalkin you out...
I was just arrrested cuz my rhymes found to be weapons of mass destruction...
cuz i'm lyrically spitten at you verses of mass corruption...
yo rhymes leave you and vanish without a trace...
but i'm takin you outa place and leave you chopped up in outerspace...
talkin lik you supreme then i'm fucken higher powers...
leavin ya crashed like planes into the two towers...
yo shit so week i'll re-read it and make a correction...
after realizing you couldnt fuck me up witha twenty foot irection...
verses like viruses cause so much sickness and infection...
but yo mama cant recognize you after a thorough inspection...
scarface nottin you dont know shit about sellin blow...
but i'ma blow you off dis planet like my driveway covered in snow...
the world aint your cuz you amountin to nottin...
except a dickridin bitch whose rhymes are always frontin....
so i'll leave you with this a finisher it wont be required...
cuz yo ass got rolled like some fireston tires

chuch

yo supreme won..i liked both punchlines but sumpreme impressed me more with the structure...
VOTE:$$umpreme

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uppin for votes dirta 1 30

week battle...both came wid no flow or structure....accomplishment had beter punches....other cat was kinda basic.....both had no mulitups or any complex to the verse....both need a lot of work.....
v/acomplisment coz he had some ok punches

upppin fo votes my dirta ..

we need more votes for this one
everybody needs to vote!!

uppin fo votes ond is battle right hurr yo

upppin need some real votes on dis one right hurr

$$upreme: You need ta elevate Completely Structurely, vocab , and punches.
your stuff didnt even rhyme half of the time, so just reread your
stuff and practice on what you need to work on

accomplishment: your verse was aight. your structure was moderate and
your flows along with punches and the whole nine. if i had to say to work on something it would have to be structure (explain anything you think people wont understand it shows a lil more veteran kind of style)

open: accomplishment
close: accomplishment
personals: accomplishment
metas: accomplishment
punches: accomplishment
multis: accomplishment
V/ ACCOMPLISHMENT

my vote goes to accomplishment. he came harder and had good flow, but u could have came more correct on the twin tower reference. if we ever battle ill make sure to drop a reference for ya. vote=accomplishment.


vote for the authentic vs. puertoricanelly battle.

$$upreme you got down homie, but i believe that accomplishment took this one. in all honesty, his verse just stuck out more in my mind when i completed reading them. i like both of your guys' style and look forward to peeping out your work in the future. much love battlecats..

s.v.

There wasn't much to pay attention to in Supreme's verse until the last few lines, which were solid enough. Up to that point it was all "I'll shoot you, you're gay and you suck dick," which has to be done REALLY WELL to impress me anymore.

Accomplishment rose above that conceptual level and delivered a pretty steady stream of punches, many of which were solid. He gets the vote for the more all-around superior verse.