will a peer vs vs YoungStar*
 

u drop first
3-0 ko 5 wins

is u gonna drop?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????? ur online so drop

its ya gurl YoungStar* checkin in..iight ima drop

ya spit so weak its like a bedtime story
i gotta b a g and defend all ma territory
i trynot to say too much of tha derogiitory
but against bitches like u ma negative iz obligatory
ma shit so unbelievable they put me in a observatory
but n e wayz enuff bout ma sick ass spit
i have ya ass cryin like u jus watched a chic flik
suck dick
cuz u alreadi got white on ur mouth
all tha real niggaz kno wut i'm talkin about
so i guess i'll holla later
split ya skin, put u on shoez like damn alligator

this bitch is tryin to sound smart but obligatory isnt a word
ur fake like ur vocab thats why my rhymes are preferred
i mean come on it took u an hour to write that wack shit?
u & rap dontexactly mix fuck tryin 2 b nice u cant spit
dope ass spit? did u even bother 2 read ur own verse
isnt an hour enough 2 rehearse guess not u put urself in a hearse
tray six hasnt replied cause they didnt wanna make u cry basically uve been denied
like the wack asian off American Idol being shitty is the only way ull get worldwide
youngstar? were the same age but lyrically we aint on the same page
im full of rage got skillz 4 my age and i own the damn stage
u dont have shit u dont have crowds and u aint gettin paid
ill write the raps u stick to writin chants 4 the gay parade

yo obligatory iz a word..and it took me so long cuz i had to go eat...:)

oh and also r u in any crewz......didn't think so..:)..i got many crewz wantin me..waitin 4 TRAY-SIX cuz outta all tha crewz that want me..i'm tha only sick free agent that want them
MUCH LOVE TO PSA AND TRAY-SIX AND CHRYME SYNDICATE

obligatory isnt a word its noy in the dictionary
if it is then send me the definition

obligatory-legally or maorally constraining;binding...imposing or recording an obligation..compulsary :)

that's suppose to b morally
sorry bout tha mystype

First Off, Congrats To Both Contenders. In My Honest Opinion, Will A Peer Gets The Vote. He Just Came Better. Youngstar, Much Love For Your Heart Babygirl. Keep It Up. You Got Great Potential. One.

S.v. Dangerous

yea i am in a crew y ??????????
pm me with a verse and ill tell u if ur in

will o' peer had mad rhymes, and hit the personals hard. he was dissin every thing u had, some things u didnt have, and some things you wont have. mad props to youngStar for the verse, keep ur head strait.
vote~Will a peer

uppin tell me a battle u need votes on and ill hit it up

Wellll...This is how it is... Young, You had better line length this time, and had some alright punches, good vocab(I write poetry and know vocab). You cam a little weak, but ya got hott potential. Keep at that.

Will, you dissed everything she had, but yet tried to diss her vocab and failed. Which is minus a couple of points, but you had some better punches. Wasnt feelin ya flow

young had a better flow then Will, I wasnt feelin it too much. She had better vocab then ya but weak punches. Will, work on ya flow you had nice punches though.

V/will

First off. Congrats to botha yall.
Young, you had a great line length and I found it easy to read an found the rhymes. Great use of vocab, but a lil weak with the punches. I also liked the consistant rhyme for the first 5 lines. But it whent a lil weaker after that.

Will, you had good punches, great 2 line rhyme goin on. lil to large on the lines sometimes but thats alrite. better too much than too lil eh. Structure was good and good use of references "like the wack asian off American Idol being shitty is the only way ull get worldwide".

vote/ Will a peer

uppin tell me a battle u need votes on and ill hit it up

YoungStar*, pretty good,

"i trynot to say too much of tha derogiitory
but against bitches like u ma negative iz obligatory
ma shit so unbelievable they put me in a observatory"

I liked that shiz, the rest wasn't as good as that though.

3/5

will a peer,

"tray six hasnt replied cause they didnt wanna make u cry basically uve been denied
like the wack asian off American Idol being shitty is the only way ull get worldwide"

Loved it, everything he said to you, you returned it twice as hard.

And you ended it Very Nice with this line...

"u dont have shit u dont have crowds and u aint gettin paid
ill write the raps u stick to writin chants 4 the gay parade"

that made me chuckle, so you get my vote.

4/5

My Vote... will a peer