Lyrical MC vs Carsonjetx2
 

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no d/r
no feedin
no bitin'
i spit frist

CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.

dis is carsonjsetxs verse:

Lyrical MC.......

Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....

^^^dats carson Jets verse^^^


votes please??

shit...sorry peeps..dat was ment to go on front lines but a admin moved it on to ere ^^^^

i liked both verses both of yall agve it yall all but carson all u did was talk about his record really i want feelin dat so my vote 2 lyrical mc

i have to give this one to mc.

mc just was all around betta...you had harder punches and betta vocab..this was not one of oyur betta battles..you use will smith in a lot of yur battles to..but you won this 1...next time come wit betta meta4s and punches..good vocab tho..7/10

jet..you was alrite but not good enuf.you sho potential...pretty good for a newb...but youllost me in the beginin with that weak banner shit but the rest was alrite...but you just need to come wit betta punches and alot of betta vocab..5/10

vote=mc

yo uppin

yo..uppin

lyrical takes this one his flow was tight and so were his punches and the fact thag carson couldnt even show what the hell so return da favor hit up my battles

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I give this to lyrical mc his was better organized

he had better rhymes

and better punches

my vote=lyrical

yo please vote in my battle mike12 vs gambino

thanks dog

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uppin for da last time hopfuly :D :

aiight ppl..ima break it down

carsonjet ..you had a good flow and your structure was there. But your punches and personals didnt hit hrd enough for me and as punches and personals win battles you needed to improve opn them in your next battle

lyrical...you had an aiight flow and your structure was ok as well. You came harder with your punches and personals cos i fink dat u deserve my vote.

keep it up both of you..v/lyrical

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lol......carson ur half arse aproch lost u dis battle...u didnt even care....lyrical mc u were wack but did just bout enough...
vote:lyrical mc

mc i was felling you more than othe dude no diss or nothing but you could have came harder

lyrical mc took this for me because it seem to me like carson wasnt hittin personals hard enough and wasnt really dissin....

return the favour and vote on my battles....peace :thumbup:

Straight Off The Chains LyriCal Mc Got This Shhit On Lock' Merked CarsonJet'

Punches: Lyrical MC - Heated
Personals: -Alright- MC
Structure: Lyrical MC - Nice
Flow: Lyrical MC - Consistant
Vocab: Lyrical MC - Heavy
WordPlay: Lyrical MC - Decent

Lyrical MC - Had This Shit' .... And Has My Vote ' Good Battle On Both Sides But Lyrical MC MERKED Your A$$ CarsonJet

I Guess This Shit Is Closed' .. Lol'

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vocab mc carson u came really basic up ur vocab
flow both flowed really well so tie
structure mc carson a few of ur bars were unevev
opener mc carson who cares about a damn banner?
closer mc i was feelin his more both were good though
overall carson ur my boy but im gonna give it to mc i feel he caught the edge
carson i liked ur flow u could work on evening out ur bars and work on ur vocab and throw in some more personals and post ur own verse
mc u had a good flow good vocab i would like 2 c multis and some more personals
good battle from both

lyrical mc took this easily straight clownin carson
the flow was top and the structure was on from lyrical but it was from carson also

i just thought that carson wasnt hittin all that hard with his punches and he wasnt throwin much personals and shit into his spit
lyrical was just straight spittin fire with hard hittin knockout punches
he used gud wordplay in his spit and i liked the personals used.
there cud be room for a little more creativity from both and spti a few more personals carson, try throwin in sum multis also
vote - lyrical mc

whoa check it
i saw 4 votes for lyrical and thought the poll was still open
but it is closed
but i still wud have voted for u lyrical

lyrical mc won thise by far, his words were more easy to read and understand, created more punches, had a nice rithum beat, metas, flowing and ryming were all top notch . I vote for lyrical mc.

Straight killen
 

You think I'm a rookie but you soft as a cookie, you so lame you can't even get in a girls nookie. You keep runnin wit gunz cus you know I'm #1, keep playin wit me boy and you won't even be able to use ya thumbs.

I'm scarier than thriller and meaner than Godzilla try to fight me and its gone be like the thrilla in manilla.

Yo Lyrical Mc// Had Good Pucnhes And Good Flowz

Carson U Need To Work On Yo Punches Homie// Hit Harder Next Time And Get Personal At Da Nigga

Vote=lyrical

Lyrical Mc Got Dis Becuz Of Punches And Flowz//

Carson U Need To Write Mo// Nice Flowz But U Aint Hit Hard With Da Punches

Hey Yo I Cant Vote Sorry// But Lyrical Won Dis// No Doubt