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YoungStar* 03-13-04 04:13 PM

Tray-six
 
yo this iz it..me and snyper...
tray-six only votes
othaz can comment but not vote
10 line minimum
3-0 KO 5 to win
do u wanna spit first?

lyricalchick86 03-13-04 04:18 PM

young dat aint a fair battle toon playin u if only tray-six can vote dey don vote fo syhper but if dats how u gon play den do it

furoshis 03-13-04 04:19 PM

naw our crew aint even like dat we give da most honest vote...........if you get ripped we let it be known..........if u rip sum1 then we let it be known..............we as fair as it gets..............

lyricalchick86 03-13-04 04:31 PM

shut dat shit up like i said young dey gon play u im just tryna help a sistah out since not alot of us get reconized in here

YoungStar* 03-13-04 04:31 PM

yo i ain't worried by unfair..if i git beat but i put up a good fite i think that mean i got potential which iz wut thay lookin 4...i don't care if i git beat long az i spit good..SnypeR iz tuff for a newb like me but i think i can hold down enuff not to git KOed
IMA STA TRU ANYWAY IT GO

YoungStar* 03-13-04 04:32 PM

thanx for tha advice lyrical chick.a.nd good battle vs me and u

YoungStar* 03-13-04 04:43 PM

hey mr. snyper u gon spit first..wud appreciate it if u wud but i WILL if necessary
may tha best spitta win (nuttin personal)
MUCH LOVE

Crossword 03-13-04 04:47 PM

She don't know bout us Young, we vote as fair as possible. If you got what it takes to beat snyper we aint gon d/r'em cause hes in our crew we vote fairly.

YoungStar* 03-13-04 04:55 PM

lol yeah liquor..hopefully i can say "we"(TRAY-SIX) don't dr...i plan on it

Krackmittens 03-13-04 05:03 PM

yo why the fuck are you guys free posting this aint a battle get your rules staright first in bitch slapped then make a thread in here you get banned for this shit

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

TOoN 03-13-04 05:15 PM

aight.................don't clogg the thread...................

SnypeR 03-13-04 05:16 PM

I'mma post up my verse...............but yourz iz due ten mins after it......................

YoungStar* 03-13-04 05:20 PM

iight snypes..good deal...waitn fo u..good luck..best winz

SnypeR 03-13-04 05:32 PM

just a lil quick keystyle................

Better pray to Ja, cause like D.M.X. my pen breaks rules and “murders ink”/
rhymes contain no patterns, like a deaf game-cube owner youngstar must’ve never “heard-of-links”/
your family get-togethers consist of watching black-porn/
natural born gansta, break in your house just to stab you with your dad’s strap-on/
like Russell Crowe, when it comes to rhyming skills I have “a beautiful mind”/
u can find youngstar lyrics quick, just follow the bathroom cubicle-signs/(all bull shit)
your show are like broken records, people always “skip it”/
forget rap, cause like a recovering alcoholic your blood lacks its “spirits”/
I'll stab you wit a pair of antlers, leave you “deerly departed”/
like a retarted junk yard dog, you spittin garbage, shovin ya car keys up ya anis, I dare you to “start shit”/

*fades away from sniping*

YoungStar* 03-13-04 05:42 PM

snipes sed in 10minutes its due/i spit nasty ass rhymes to b wit tha damn cru/i needed to build ma vocabulary/but now i spit so proper that ma shit iz scary/naw i am natural no need 4 tha dictionary/i cook u az if this wuz culinary skool/i don't care about ya shoot ya and leave ya in ma pool/so majority rules/well sometimez majority fools/cuz if tha majority vote 4 u then they'll git ridiculed/ur rap iz dope...but ma rape chokes like a rope/have u diving down in tha water like u wuz tha continental slope/i am tha divider/no otha diviner/i am so good i cud beat u wit jus ma one-liners

YoungStar* 03-13-04 05:43 PM

let's giit some votessssss..TRAY-SIX squad
in or no

YoungStar* 03-13-04 07:47 PM

TOoN and crew..am i in..i think i spit well..uppin 4 votes

Crossword 03-13-04 09:04 PM

Iight, I ain't d/r'in cause i dont dothat shit.. But SnypeR took this one. He came with much more force with his punches, but i saw no real hard personals... Young, You were lackin a lot of punches, you started to pick it up close to the end of the battle, but it was not close to enough. And SnypeR's structure took yours, Though i could see and feel your flow a little more, you need to work on the structure of your lines. Nice try, you'll elevate as you battle more.

V/ SnypeR

YoungStar* 03-13-04 09:14 PM

yo TRAY-Six squad ya'll say i need to elevate so thats wut i'll do...i'll battle away...prove i'm good enuff..and come back...MUCH LOVE ALWAYZ

TOoN 03-14-04 10:54 AM

Yeah Star...............I didn't even think that you would battle SnypeR....that just showz that you really want to be down..........and I see you dedication to our Crew and I'm feelin that.................and you a GURL..........so that's kool...........I think Snyper took this............but you did do ya thang...................check ya PM

YoungStar* 03-14-04 11:08 AM

MUCH LOVE..thanx Tray-Six fo tha opportunity
yo good batle Snyper

guyver4mk 03-14-04 12:13 PM

Youngstar* had a good flow, consistant rhymes and a couple of good punches but a weak structure.

Snyper had a good structure, flowin punches, good references "Better pray to Ja, cause like D.M.X. my pen breaks rules and “murders ink”".

Overall: I vote Snyper.
Youngstar*, ya shit was tight. Snype's jus had more appeal.

YoungStar* 03-14-04 12:34 PM

much love guyver....UPPINNN FA THA VOTESS MA NIGGAZ
TRAY-SIX OUT TO KILL NIGGAZ

Status 03-19-04 05:26 PM

imma have to give tgis one to snyper...you was coo but snyper was just betta...but you showed that oyu are growing..keep on doin wat you do and oyu will achieve your goal as a m.c......but you do need to work on your structure like lot said...

snyper: that was a coo battle...not one of your best but all in all good...not much to say about you, cuz you all ready no wat you did or didnt do....

star you got heart..

vote=snyper.....


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