Yung Duke vs LyricalChick
 

10-20 lines
no hate votes
no crew votes
3-0 is kill
5 votes is win
verses do by 6 eastern time

Dude y u aint make it a battle

i did i just had to figure out the last 2 numbers of ya name or it wouldnt work

o ight

2 more rules: no bitting and feeding

yung Duke is a monster on the mic, known to get buck wild,
You can have thegreatest verse in the world, it just mean you goin out in style,
why you wannacom battle duke, you must be infatuated wit me,
she pretending that this a love sonnet, so she can masturbate to me,
dont try to switch it up now, you've been caught in fantasy,
I'll let you taste it, but i dont think that you can handle me,
see you lovin duke i, know you wishin that you could get a ride,
I wish she had a web cam up, we could see her gettin murdered and wet at the same time,
I'm like pimpn to the third degree, now thats a lil math fo yo ass,
I dont care if you a bitch or not, I stil got a lil blast fo yo ass,
a Blast from the Past, because i'm similar to Brendon Fraisor
So i'll leave you wit a goodbye, thanks for the head, and see you later...

Dis bitch just spit 12 line of bullshit
U think u can win well bitch prove it
U a nigga dat get beat n beat yo meat at da same time
U sayin dat im in love wit u sorry baby dat a lie
U wasnt good last nite so i gotta say bye-bye
I dont need no 1min man i rather die
It wasnt big any way 3in aint gon satifie me
U be betta off jus beatin yo meat

omfg i know i usually have a lot to say about battles... but this has nothing for me to talk about... Yung Duke, You had some good vocab and some good punches, feelin ya shit way more. You had a nice flow and line length. Way more complexity then lyrical.

Ok Chick... Ya said you need people in ya crew. I ain't hatin on ya, but elevate before ya makea crew. Ya have shit line length, shit punches, and some shit metas. You maybe hit him with weak personals, but thats it. Work on ya style(which means everything about ya style: Structure, how ya wanna punch, metas, personals, multies).
If ya do that you'll be good.

V/ Yung

aight lets get some more votes up in here

^^^^^^^^^^^uppin 2

yung Duke is a monster on the mic, known to get buck wild,
You can have thegreatest verse in the world, it just mean you goin out in style,
why you wannacom battle duke, you must be infatuated wit me,
she pretending that this a love sonnet, so she can masturbate to me,
dont try to switch it up now, you've been caught in fantasy,
I'll let you taste it, but i dont think that you can handle me,
see you lovin duke i, know you wishin that you could get a ride,
I wish she had a web cam up, we could see her gettin murdered and wet at the same time,
I'm like pimpn to the third degree, now thats a lil math fo yo ass,
I dont care if you a bitch or not, I stil got a lil blast fo yo ass,
a Blast from the Past, because i'm similar to Brendon Fraisor
So i'll leave you wit a goodbye, thanks for the head, and see you later...

Dis bitch just spit 12 line of bullshit
U think u can win well bitch prove it
U a nigga dat get beat n beat yo meat at da same time
U sayin dat im in love wit u sorry baby dat a lie
U wasnt good last nite so i gotta say bye-bye
I dont need no 1min man i rather die
It wasnt big any way 3in aint gon satifie me
U be betta off jus beatin yo meat

Yeah, Duke held all the cards here. He had a good opener, then a few so-so lines, then threw some harder punches with the web cam line and stayed solid through the end (except for the ref to Brendan Frasier, which was odd).

LC talked a lot of personal trash which kept her verse from fizzling out entirely, but didn't prop it up with any battle skills. It could have been just a bunch of insults; the only thing that qualified it as a rap verse was the extremely simplistic rhyme scheme. Observation: in rap battles, it's not so much what you say as how you say it. Think of some more interesting ways to throw an insult and see what you come up with.

Vote = Yung Duke.

Yo thanks Supreme. the Brendon fraisor line was just somethink tho flip up "blast from the past" you kno like the movie

Still Uppin(ready for a kill)

I don't really need to explain my vote in this one.............Duke got this.....LyricalVhik verse was ok................

thanks for all the votes. well i guess that's a kill

Lyrical Chick All The Way....

I Love You Baby.......

V/.Lyrical

there gotta be somethin up wit that vote. he know her or somethin

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lyricalchick86 your shit was just bullshit man that was wack as can be 2/10
nothing was good
Yung Duke he's she was jumping i could fill it it was nice he won i mean he like ko her how did she even get one vote she didn't even write a vs that was just baby shit

yo man that was a KO how that nigga gonn vote then say he love her

Yung Duke,

"a Blast from the Past, because i'm similar to Brendon Fraisor
So i'll leave you wit a goodbye, thanks for the head, and see you later...",

Nice Nice, that really sealed your win right there, you made it as personal as you can get on the net and really left her speachless.

lyricalchick86 , it was way to simplistic and literall for my taste.

then you say this in your 3rd line/
"U a nigga dat get beat n beat yo meat at da same time"

then your final punch is
"U be betta off jus beatin yo meat"

so basically same thing and your final punch has to always be the hardest punch of the verse.

Vote - Yung Duke