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lyricalchick86 03-14-04 05:05 PM

Lyricalchick \\s// Unborn
 
U spit 1st
10-20 lines
due in a.s.a.p
3-0 KO
5 win

puertoricanelly 03-14-04 05:12 PM

ill spit gainst you baby set it up

UnbornRookie 03-14-04 05:19 PM

you asked for it
 
man look at this trick / think she da shit /
bitch so wack she da only one in her clique/
workin her 9-5 keepin it legit /
cuz she too afraid to get paid from slangin them hits /
hell she be snorting that shit till her blood fuckin itch/
the bad habit she has, kid, can't be dropped bitch/
so how da fuck is she 'possed to make any profit/
certainly not from any of dis hip hop shit/
you ain't no leader trick -- i'm da one to follow/
don't even try to spit -- just suck it up and swallow

lyricalchick86 03-14-04 08:12 PM

Man dis nigga wastin my time
Wantin to battle u out yo damn mine
Yo rhyme aint make no fukin sense
you be betta off licin my click
You whack dawg 99% of yo shit was garbage
You a gay ass nigga playin with barbie
Nigga u wanna be in my clique u just not good enough
Yo rhyme was so fukin whack it was funny da police had to put dem in handcuff
My punches will knock yo lights out you'll think dat it sunny
Unborn i got love fo u doe even doe yo rhymes r played ima not gonna joke (sike)

gangstagrl 03-15-04 03:56 PM

ima gon have to give it to lyric betta punches,flow,sctructure need to work on da vocab doe
unborn urs was jus..............didnt click wit me i really think u need to elevate a whole lot more before battlin again'

v/lyricalchick

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lyricalchick86 03-15-04 08:28 PM

thx fo da vote come on yall we need so more

Yung Duke 03-15-04 08:51 PM

Like i told you before.......... your style is just sitty

Yung Duke 03-15-04 08:52 PM

My Vote= lyricalchick

authentic01 03-15-04 09:33 PM

vote goes to lyrical

also vote on the authentic vs. puertoricanelly battle, its hot.

teflon don 03-15-04 09:51 PM

what the fuk r u all thinkin
 
that bitch aint got no flow her shit......... man i wouldnt even let her shit in my garbage can. not givin that other fuck any props though his shit was gay to

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 03:13 PM

we need some more votes

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 05:07 PM

can we get some votes on here

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 06:50 PM

can yall vote on dis shit so we can close it

Age 5 03-16-04 06:57 PM

Lyrical Chick All the Way....

I Love YOU BABY!!!!!!!!!

V/.Lyrical

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 07:01 PM

thx fo da vote unborn i hope u kno dat a KNOCKOUT but can will dtill get somemore votes

James West 03-17-04 12:08 AM

UnbornRookie won this in structure, and the these two bars were better than all lyrical chicks punches...

"man look at this trick / think she da shit /
bitch so wack she da only one in her clique/"

"you ain't no leader trick -- i'm da one to follow/
don't even try to spit -- just suck it up and swallow"

so thats a win in punches too.

lyricalchick's only good line was this one

"Nigga u wanna be in my clique u just not good enough
Yo rhyme was so fukin whack it was funny da police had to put dem in handcuff"

but it wasnt put together right so it didnt come off as good as it could of.

then some of the lines were horrible

"You whack dawg 99% of yo shit was garbage
You a gay ass nigga playin with barbie"

wtf was that.

Vote - UnbornRookie

Willa 03-17-04 12:17 AM

one of u drop a vote on my battles
vs psyc
vs razer
and ill drop an honest vote on this

lyricalchick86 03-17-04 04:20 PM

ok um can we gett some more vote will a peer ill vote honestly on yo battle

Razer 03-18-04 06:00 AM

Both pretty weak to be honest but i think unborn rookie deserves it. He just had slightly better punchlines than lyrical chick. But he only won it by a little bit in my opinion.

Da Vinci 03-18-04 06:25 AM

My votes goes to lyrical. Both flows were about the same, but lyrical had more creative punches that hit harder. It seems that there was a little more thought put into her lines, and it showed. Unborn rookie, it seems had a fairly simple rhyming scheme like hit, trick, shit etc... Need more complexity.

Issachar 03-18-04 08:40 AM

I kept putting off voting on this battle because there's so little there to vote on. Neither verse was impressive. On the whole, I think Unborn took this one by using a stronger rhyme scheme (in some places it's not quite as simplistic as it looks) and having a clearer sense of direction, whereas LC's stuff came off like a quick rant, parts of which didn't even make sense like the "handcuffs" line. Still, this is a small step up from the last verse of hers that I voted on. Keep workin' and gettin' stronger at this thing, y'all.

Krackmittens 03-18-04 03:24 PM

wow lyrical sweetheart you should have come harder on this cat you could have done alot better i like the lick my clit line unborn you had some decent stuff but nothing that stuck out you guys are trying to make a name for yourself on here come hard as fuck you know be creative dont use the same played out lines
unborn-2/10
lyricalchick-3/10

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

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