Puertoricanelly Vs. Supervillain
 

30 min time limit
8-15 lines
no crew votes
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Im Here. You Go First. Im Gonna Choke On This Blunt For A Few Minutes And Then Respond Back. May The Best Man Win Cutty. One.

S.v.

smokin dat blunt only endin yo life fastaa/
hiding from PRnelly only creates furtha disasta/
cuz i take more lifes than Mike Jackson takes lil boys virginity/
you scared now tellin homies ta get rid of me/
but its koo cuz i take flight on niggaz that run in fear/
beat them silly til they no longa speak crystal clear/
supervillain?? Ima supaHERO!/
beatchu so bad youll make more faces than Robert DeNiro!/
and like trina i got 69 WAYS ta slaughta a G,so jus test me b,
and bloody carpets is how it will be

sorri is my shit is wack i havent been spittin in a LONG ass time

p-nelly come "RIDE WITH ME", lets do this.......................quick freestyle.................

yeah......ya feel high and mighty in your 'AIR FORCE ONES',
im the bully that took them from ya, now you got air force nones,
prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,
with forces to your fortress, knock on your door in four hits,
then we storm in thun,
i'll leave ya 'DERRRTY', YOU 'HOT IN HERRRD ME'??? your not worthy,
im serving these squirrely rap cats that attack and try to burn me
for hurting them perfectly, BAND-AID over your heart.......
'cuz im hurting ya SPERRRITUALLY, SERRRVICIN' you SURRRGERY,
and i wont even CHERRRGE you a fee.....HERRRE, this ones all on me.

S.V. DANGEROUS

lets get these votes in........................

p-nelly, my bad for postin' my verse a few minutes late, my computer froze up on me. all apologies. one

........supervillain the kingpin

its all gravy SV tryn get some votes in heeeeeerrrrrrreeeee

prnelly won but it was 2 bads
prnelly

flow - 6/10
vocab 2/10

supervillian- 5/10
vocab 3/10

Supervillian so much hotter i like the nelly disses but they prolly is overplayed like WHOA but you still smoked him regardless PRNELLY you gotta elevate but you gettin THURR but shit yo keep it up you might be NUMBER ONE some day HAHA

YO return da favor

UPPIN' FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
please help us finish this battle off QUICKLY and HONESTLY. also, thanks ACCOMPLISHMENT, i dig your work playboy. one.

supervillain, big, bad c.s.

smokin dat blunt only endin yo life fastaa/
hiding from PRnelly only creates furtha disasta/
Bad opener here.
cuz i take more lifes than Mike Jackson takes lil boys virginity/
you scared now tellin homies ta get rid of me/
Seen the Mike Line to many times before.
but its koo cuz i take flight on niggaz that run in fear/
beat them silly til they no longa speak crystal clear/
ok line....
supervillain?? Ima supaHERO!/
beatchu so bad youll make more faces than Robert DeNiro!/
Not a great punch
and like trina i got 69 WAYS ta slaughta a G,so jus test me b,
and bloody carpets is how it will be
Not a good closer


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Supervillans verse:
yeah......ya feel high and mighty in your 'AIR FORCE ONES',
im the bully that took them from ya, now you got air force nones,
Dont like this opener either but ok then
prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,
Ok line
with forces to your fortress, knock on your door in four hits,
then we storm in thun,
i'll leave ya 'DERRRTY', YOU 'HOT IN HERRRD ME'??? your not worthy,
im serving these squirrely rap cats that attack and try to burn me
Ok line i guess
for hurting them perfectly, BAND-AID over your heart.......
'cuz im hurting ya SPERRRITUALLY, SERRRVICIN' you SURRRGERY,
and i wont even CHERRRGE you a fee.....HERRRE, this ones all on me.
Another bad closer

Super villan barley gets my vote with a better structure and flow
peace

cuz my name is Nelson and peeps call me Nelly for short and plus im puertorican so it goes tagetha Puertoricanelly

uppin' for some fair votes on these freestyles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

c'mon battlecats, help me and deportarican-nelly (ha ha, im just playin' homie) finish this one upper. one love.

s.v. the kingpin

uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!!

s.v.

uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!!

s.v. the kingpin...........c.s.
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uppin' for some fair votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s.v.

supervillain good punches good flow work on vocab and personals
pnr ok punches a few were played work on vocab and personals
super took this barely

I liked your stuff SV but the Nelly diss' were a bit overdone I chuckled the first time but it got a bit ghey.

prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,

I really liked that good work, also I dint like the HEERREEE. Bit gay, next time you should use /'s to help with the flow of it. Not many multies etc. But you still get my vote.

uppin' for some fair votes on these freestyles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

c'mon battlecats, help me and deportarican-nelly (ha ha, im just playin' homie) finish this one upper. one love.

s.v. the kingpin

I didn't think that this was much a battle. In my opinon Super killed PRnelly. Anyverse any style, from the metta's, puches flows this was a one sided battle. No disrespect I think that PR Nelly defintatly has room to elivate, more than likely he probably just needs to get his feet wet with battle'n more.

Da Vinci

Ny1stunna broke this down correct. PRNelly did an acceptable battle verse but used some fairly played-out concepts (MJ) and didn't make his punches hard enough (DeNiro). I liked SuperV's opener pretty well, and he brought some nice complex multi's, but around the halfway point ("DERRRRRTY") his stuff really fell apart. The punches stopped connecting and stuff just didn't make as much sense in general. Only the rhyme scheme kept it going.

It's a vote for Supervillain, but he just about snatched defeat from the jaws of victory with this one.