lilrenegade89 Vs Adept
 

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No D/R
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No Crew
No BULLSHIT VOTES.!!!

due in 24 hrs

you spit first!

If your gay, how can u be a emcee/ im not gay, so it's your place to tell me
U better back track and get off the ass crack/ Befor your get smacked/ remember ur style is still wack/ ya turn your back, and ya gunna get shot/ my punchline so hard it give u a blood clot/ur raps arn't hot/ there fuckin ice cold/ there so played out even god thinks there old/platinum ain't happenin 4 you/ with your boyfrined u like too spoon poo/ you jew/ you need to get a CLUE like Dj/ I heard ur gave your brother a BJ
your rhymes are nasty there off key/ just like havin too much cream in your coffie
u got no vocabulary try usin a dictionary/ ive seen ur battel b4 although u won it was a little scary. You Rhyme like a fuckin fairy/ Fuck bitch you could be cupid./ Ur not a emcee all ur lyrics are stupid./

ok it'sbeen 24 hoours in 20 minutes so do i auto win or what mods please close if he dun spit in 20 min

oK Hold On

Im serving this clown with french dressing,
since the only time you drop heavy bars
is when you cant finish benchpressing
Ive caused this whore stress and depression by
making him lay his best shit hence the clenched expression
If you went to confession in christs church and had your
writing censored you still wouldn’t spit nice words
Ill bury you alive in a midgets casket so your last
speech is the only time you leave a tight verse
Showing his friends his football sticker collection
is the only time anyone admires his prose(pro’s)
Ill flip the scripts and cripple this bitch with
acidic spits that corrode your name
Your road to fame has been blocked by my attacks,
punching so hard your p.c screen explodes in pain.

Somebody Please Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ragon got dis no question bout it he had way betta punches,vocab,flow,struc which really dont matter his shit was hot

lilrenegade u need to elevate more

I know i lost i even agree

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Aint Non Nigga Out There Can Beat Me I Wish One Of Yall Niggas Would Step Out There

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OH MY GOD!!!

Renegade Got MERKED!!!!!!!

V/.Dragon Rage!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

Vote = Dragon Rage

Reson = Look at the Verse!!!!!!!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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lilrenegade: Your shit was a bit Basic need more word play in there bro You need to fix your structure because that shit is hard to read.. looks like you put no effort into your (key style)

Dragon Rage: Had a More Unique' all around Better Flo, Hit on punches ... good Choice of Vocab good Flo Stucture.. and it just came out on Top in this Battle

Votes Conducted on:

Personals: Dragon
Flow: Dragon
Structure: Dragon
Word Play: Dragon
Complicity: Dragon
Punches: Dragon

Easy to say Over all "Dragon"


so ThereFor...

Vote: Dragon

nice battle

lilrenegade-ur verse wasnt all that good...u had sum basic rhymin words that is played out...ur flow was good tho..rolled off my toungue nicely..and lose the paragraph form..it makes it harder to read n throws off ur flow...jus change thath it up n you should be on ur way to de top

rage-better verse than renegades...had a nice flow but the way u had it kinda threw me off n the flow...but managed to still flow it out...nice vocab n u had a better structure n form..jus do sum minor changes n u should be good to go

overall-good battle but my vote goes to rage cuz he had a better verse

v/rage

peace

Ight ight ight That was a real wack battle but i'm sorry to the otha dude but like Renegade Murked ya ass! Madd Shots! The flow was choppy but i liked it anyway one up vote renegade!

bump.............................................. ................

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hahaha this vote dont even need to be explained.....every category goes to dragon.....flow,structure,punches,enjoyment....etc .......vote = dragon
return the favor wit an honest vote.....me vs daclassic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

lil renegade:..hey yo i felt ya wrath u tried to come hard but not enough....u really need to take time and think for a little

dragon: its obvious who one....better vocab lyrical content punches were hittin i like

v/ dragon

please return the favor and vote in my battle a honest opinion
at daclassic vs L.I. its in the front page front lines go check it out thankx

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I'm givin this one to Dragon. Battle was good, but when it cam e to rhyming and intricate structure -- Dragon merked this shit. Both good flows though. LilRenegade bout to come up. For now though -- it's Dragon's time.

UBR