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JaCkOfAllTraDes vs. DJ.Dienasty
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no crew votes no hate votes Blind spit No dick riding Newb |
Cant fade Me lets go bitch
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all right checkin in........ damn this 50 word shits tp much
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you called me out you spit first that how it go....
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gata go to class be on later so just drop your spit and ill get ach ya
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yall bout to go or what
I NEVER SEEN U GUYS RAP BEFORE SO HURRY UP YOUNGSTA |
fuck yo put some shit down ait man i gata go schools over if you dont post first i will what eva k ill put my shit up later
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ok here it is my gay ass shit man im not even a raper i make beats but here i go..
why you trying to challlenge me, you bout to get handled buy the finest G// you get your 5 min, of fame like "you dat nigga that lost agianst dj. dienasty"// whin im spitin theres no need to procrastinate, im everlasting like virgins whin they masterbate// like losin you verginity im cummin at you at a faster rate// so dont hate congradulate, dont blame it on me you called me out so this is your mistake// this nigga proly gana be a no show so fuck this flake// probably read my ill rap then started feelin inferrior, bitch nigga all ready knows my rap styles are supperior// i should have told you that im the greatist like biggie and pac// now let the votes began, so i can make a clean sweap like one of those swiffer mops. ok thats it hella gay what eva this my first and my last battle man i make beats not raps like a said so if ya get it all cool |
the only beat you make is when you taking a shit
jack of all trade needs to go |
Steppin up to me about rappin as if you a Pro/
Put up ya best guns lace your boots bitch lets start this show/ A Check it check it Im about too rip this nigga yo yo ……I’ll cut thru your epidermal layers with verbal lasers, Sharper then razors on the feet of olympic ice skaters/ While you sittin there babblin, my lyrics is travellin/, like a javelin, to stab you in the abdomen/, Im gonna re-arrange your ribcage like a twelve-gauge at close range/ You need too stick to making beats/ Because Im already stomping you without shoes but cleats/ Your rymes dont make sense there of the wall/ you climbed to the top of my mountain bitch slipped tripped down and falled/ When My lyrical bullets pump through your body and penetrate/ they put you under my rap spell and make you levatate/ So from now on when you think about rappin remember you cant affiliate/ Go back to the beats Bitch, Better yet grab some lotion and masterbate/ IM OUT!!!!!!! |
ayo cats vote on this battle and ill return the favor for shur, good lookin out if you vote! heres the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116565 |
jack of all trades: you had all aspects of this battle won.
DJ dienasty: your flow, structure, and vocab were all underage. i suggest practicing and reading a lot of battles (good luck in upcoming battles open: jackofalltrades close: jackofalltrades personals: jackofalltrades metas: jackofalltrades punches: jackofalltrades multis: jackofalltrades V= jackofalltrades |
jak got this one.....
jak..good rap..ithink you came wit betta punches...and meta4s and evrything....i loved the elevate line it was hot.....this guy was no chalenge for you...you need to work on your multies...but good for a first timer..6/10 dj..you was ok but jak was more strate to the point so imma have to give this one to jak...next time work on your meta4s...and punches..and i think you could have done betta...just keep on battlen and you'll get betta..i loved your virgin lines tho..5/10 vote=jak |
i voted for the wrong person hopefully they fix this...i meant to vote for jackofalltrades..
FIX THIS VOTE |
V/.JackOFAllTRaDeS
Weak Battle But He Edged The Win, He Hit With Harder Punches, and Consistant flow Vote On This Please: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116518 |
Ya need to vote and quit playin.......ya know the winner
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JackOFAllTRaDeS d.j DiENaStY
FLOW XXXXX FLOW XXX VOCABXXX STYLEXXXXX |
d.j DiENaStY OUT OF 10
FLOW XXX VOCAB XXXXX STYLE XXX |
uppin this bitch....................................
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supreme you dont even know me dumb bitch..........
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uppin this battle cmon now people gata be votin on this shit
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still uppin cmon now we need some votes on this shit
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uppin cmon now we need some votes evin if ........
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ok stop taking shit Dj u sound like obie tric rap. and wile ur at it elivate, and never say that ur rap is shit. It just brings u down. u both had some good lines and a a good start. but the punches went to jack and he got flow too.
dj that was a 3/10 jack that was 6/10 vote~jackOfAlltrades |
know drop a vote for my battles
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116323 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116263 |
ok what eva man just sayin i make beats not rymes but what eva uppin this shit
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i think that jak had a better flow and some good punches and dj dont diss ur self because you think your not good juss stay rappin or make killa beats and you rshit will come up
peace out My vote goes too jak |
I thought jack of all trades beet the dj out all around.
jackofalltrades had better ryhme scheme and punches. but I thought both of you can improve. v=jack i'd appreciate some honest votes in my battles. one love..... |
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