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dirtboy69 vs. Razer
must eplain your votes!!!
no dick riding votes or crew votes 10 bar max verses due by tomorrow night |
here i did this right away waiting on you:
losing all of your battles quick looking for a crew/ patheic knowing that you need someone to vote for you/ a textcee producing beats? spend more time avoiding defeats/ cause you catching them like a accountant with tax receipts/ i read that topical you posted "e-mails from desperate girls"/ son they were love letters, cross dressers looking for thrills/ take your name sake and lob of some limbs till your blood spills/ a emcee quickly losing ground your empire crumbling beneath/ like the u.k your golry's all in the past gone like your teeth/ cause i've dulled this razor he's harmless nothing to fight with/ |
hey where are you???? hurry up and show it's not that long of a battle come on it shouldn't take this long to write
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fucking no show you fag where are you??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????
still looking for this kid it's time to show hell i'll even give another day |
O.K LISTEN UP MOTHER FUCKER......
Gayboy 69, you should of taken your time with your rhyme, You illiterate fag, spitting lyrics whilst clutching a hand bag, Everyone here really knowns your a newbie in this game, Or you never went to school - you cant spell explain!, I read half of your verse, then it brought me to boredom, The worst piece of text ive ever seen on this forum, We all want money, but you're too desperate for wealth, I mean, what kind of fag tries to vote for himself?, Youve basically faded out, just like your avatar, At at the end of the day, you're just an amature!, ...Right im done. Pe@ce |
YO IM just upping this piece yeh people. Pe@ce out!!!!
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Upping............................................ ........................................
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alright nice verse good personals lets gets some votes now!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on uppin this
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Hmm, just upping..............................Come on people.
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Razer's punches and personals didn't really land. You have to spin it pretty cleverly to get much mileage out of dissing a kid's poor spelling; otherwise it just looks like you're really reaching for stuff to criticize. Spending the first four lines building up to that (with a fag joke thrown in) was pretty much a waste of space. After that point, the verse got a little better: three punches thrown, but nothing to raise any eyebrows.
DirtBoy packed his short verse with personals, most of which were pretty much on target, and wins the vote on those grounds despite some awkwardness in the rhyme scheme. |
vote!!!!!!!!!!!! come on lets get some votes for this i wanna finish this battle
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votes come on now why the sleeping??? really this isn't a bad battle lets get some votes for it
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Ight ight yo that was dope! First and for most big up to both of y'all for a very sick battle but now is the time to vote. the both you you had mad skill and very hard hits, at first i couldn't decide but check it no disrespect to either of y'all but Razor took it it was really close but he took it by one line!
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razer took that one but it was close. i thought the spellin line was alrite,69 was good but just not good enough
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Gayboy 69, you should of taken your time with your rhyme,
You illiterate fag, spitting lyrics whilst clutching a hand bag, Everyone here really knowns your a newbie in this game, Or you never went to school - you cant spell explain!, I read half of your verse, then it brought me to boredom, The worst piece of text ive ever seen on this forum, We all want money, but you're too desperate for wealth, I mean, what kind of fag tries to vote for himself?, Youve basically faded out, just like your avatar, At at the end of the day, you're just an amature!, ...Right im done. |
k don't get this guy above posting razor's verse???? but we're still looking for votes here
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alright now i vote for all of your guys votes really fairly too and you can't vote for me??? come on uppin
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Razor U Took Him. I Mean What Kinda Fag Tries To Vote For Himself, God How Did You Come Up Wit That One.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
dirty boys verse was ok...punches were hard hitin and vocab and structure were nice......wordplay was basic but effective.....6/10
Razer...wasnt feelin' ur verse bro...punches were week....vocab was ok but structure was wack....4/10 v/dirty boys |
Yo its 3-2. Come on people - lets get this battle over and done with...
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what is the vote count here? he's saying 3-2 for him but the poll says 2-1 for me? either way lets finish this damn battle!!!
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Dirty boy takes this one way better punches and flow ive seen way better than this but he still clearly takes this guy what the hell is gayboy 69 that was fuckin stupid man elevate vote-dirtyboy 69 keep it real playa and return da favor
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uppin 3-1 for me now??? lets finish this battle come on
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vote!!!! come on now vote!!!! these are my last battles just finish them off
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Razor was the winner no doubt, those fuckin rhymes were smooth and consecutive, the type of shit that get you started.
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Yo, there is no question about it that Dirtboy got this shit. Razer's verse was elementary and played...like the first line for example, "take time for your rhyme"? Like shit, that has been used and abused a million times over. Dirtboy came wit some nice punches, and his verse flowed nice too.
Vote- DirtBoy Return tha favor plz...thanks... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=105319 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117047 |
I'm gonna give this one to DirtBoy69. He just came harder wit the punches hittin real deep wit numerous personals. Both decent flows and punches though. No one on this site really ever amazes me with there rhyme schemes.
UBR |
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