guyver4mk vs tru2it
 

Okay. Any amount of lines.
No DR, no Hate votes, No Crew votes.
Stay true

aight
 

well i dont mind goin first this sh!t kinda excite me\
like when u in high school and u cop a fresh pair a nikes\
i know y guyvo wanted me to spit first\
cause he aint know if i was aight or the type a nigga to put u in a hearse\
well too bad 4 u not the type to loose over here\
i just ask that u dont start jockin tha flow like underwear\
im sure u gotta few smart lines to spew\
but b4 u get the chance imma leave u cooked like stew\
nobody want it i say that in my first rap\
cause i smell the b!tch in u u probably like to make ya ass clap\
yeah i know the flow is str8 retarded\
and u cant bite it cause its gary paytonish....closely gaurded\
thats y its easy 4 me to pull ya card on the first take\
cause ya style is soft as birthday cake\
so try it if u wanna cmon dawg step to me\
and find ya self pissed on worse than toilet seats

good shit i liked it cauze it was funny and had good punches in it hope you vote on my battle when he drops for me heres a link guyver4mk

I find it easier than speakin to take the piss/
Y u think u can hate and try to diss/
I kung-fu you with my shaolin fist/
An your rhymes I don't even need to try to twist/
Make you get the jist, fuck you up and break ya wankin wrist/
I don't know you yet I already hate you/
I'ma make my dent then come through/
The only way I see to defeat you/
would be to remove these two addidas an beat you/
So You've been told once and I'll repeat it again/
Like a faggot, you take it up the rear from men/
I hope you don't think I'm gona fuck you up one more 'gain/
I'm jus here to help you train ya mind and maybe find/
The thing you think you got called rhyme up ya behind/
You speak out ya ass, you smokin too much grass/
Coz there ain't no time like the present/
To clean up ya act and improve ya behaviour/
Take ya bare balls and shave 'em, remove ya skin/
I hope you now start to begin, to realise you ain't got nothin/
But weak ass rhymes and a two bit imaginary crimes/
So this time I'ma end ya shit with a frigid rhyme/
Cos u don't like girls, its men that you find/
Always up ya behind, with a no smokin sign/

wassup this is tru2it if u think i roasted this nigga vote 4 me

uppin for votes in this mutha fucker!!

holla back people!

breakdown for guyver4mk:

flow: the flow alright in spots you lose it though like lines 3,4,5,6 all over the place overall though not bad 6/10

volcab:nothing special but it's not over simple so alright 6/10

punches:open disses nothing that really hurt best line was, "Make you get the jist, fuck you up and break ya wankin wrist/" i'd give you 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for tru2it:

flow:same problem as your oppenent your first couple of bars were all over the place if you want big bars split them up with some multis still 6/10

volcab:better then your oppenent but still nothing really special keep trying here 7/10

punches:best line,"but b4 u get the chance imma leave u cooked like stew\" you did throw some alright punches were your oppenent didn't so you get the edge here 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--tru2it

overall
flow-2
funnyness-g4
tightness-2
pounches-2
no hate

v tru2it

hope you retern the vote

good battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For both of u

V Tru2it

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aight peep this mk you got this one but just by alil.....

mk: that was betta than most of your battles....so keep on spitten thats the only way you will get betta....punches were alrite..meta4s were alrite...structure was good..multies need a lil work but coo..all in all. 6/10

tru: you was coo...you need a lil more practice..you could of had this one but you were just had some immature raps...they were kinda childish...you need betta meta4s, punches, and vocab...all in all5/10

vote:mk

I think it was a pretty even battle, all catagories were pretty even to me, but I think tru2it's punches were more creative. And I also add a point for going first.

guyver4mk you shit was clean and all but the punches were weak, if you had even like 2 strong punches at the end and maybe a personal or two I would've gave it to you.

Vote - tru2it

Cool man.
Uppin for more votes in this.

Holla back!

What up tho Uppin for votes in this biaatch!!!!!!!!!

Nice battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo sinnister. You actually wanna explain ya vote, Instead of jus puttin "good battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For both of u

V Tru2it" or "Nice battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
" That don't count as a vote.

uppin 4 votes in this muthafuckaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

uppin 4 votes end this battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nothin like a good battle....you both did good yo...but, i think guyver inched you by a lil....he's got some good flow and rhyme.... tru, you did ok too, except yours was kinda "the old school" rap.... everybody know the old school style...work on your vocab and try different ways of rhyming...

aight...i voted for you guys...return the favor yo....dope_emcee vs. enygma...vote on it, we need a tie breaker....

Uppin for votes up in herre!!

Holla Back people!

tru got this with better flow and he came harder overall nice battle

Tru==5/10
guy=4/10

Return favor plz its in sig go for 4th battle plz

uppin 4 votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tru - aight u had a ok flow....dont stretch ya lines....punches were lackin....u had like two ok ones....nothing impressive.....work on ur wordplay.....use meta's and personals to help ya punches....

guy - okhalf ya shit was fuckin HORRIBLE....but the otha half was jus wack....ur verse sucked....u had no good punches....useless multi's.....no punches worth taking a look at.....go to tutorials and elevate.....

vote - tru for his closer cuz that was the only ok punch/meta in this....