Kingz Vs. Supervillain
 

The Rules.....

Unlimited Lines,
No Dickriding Votes,
No Crew Votes,
.......you Know, Basically The Standard Rules,
Verses Due Within 24 Hours Of Kingz's Check-in.......
You Spit First Playboy........

you can check in at anytime brotha. i really hope your not trying to bullshit with this. im waiting to spit...........................lets do this. you called me out asking for a battle earlier today and i set it up, so you should be ready by now. p.m. me if something catastrophic came up and you cant do this tonight (otherwise, man to man, i'd appreciate it if you drop your verse within the next few hours, i got a limited schedule......feel me?). one.

.........supervillain of the crhyme sindicate

yo im checkin in........ i wasn't online wen u sent up the battle so i will spit later 2day

Dog You u made a mistake hassling me to battle you
Forget killing physically – killing u lyrically – will do
You flow like a ‘frozen river’ u stationary supervillain
I’ll have u screamin ‘Oh Mercy’ jus like ‘Bob Dylan’
Unlimited lines, unlimited rhymes – it’ll take more than that to beat me
U got no heat – even if u cheat – u would still not defeat me
I’ve got a killer’s mentality – it will be a fatality
I will backslap u so hard – you will be ‘back to reality’
I better watch my ass – cos u aint sure bout ya sexualty
I think u have forgotten the point of this battling thing
Like p diddy did wen he attempted to sing
You will never be a MC – forget making those tapes
You aint a champ – u a chimp – you belong in ‘planet of the apes’
Sour grapes? I will do what ever it takes
you be tossing men like the French tossing crepe pancakes
that is ludicrous (ludacris) – no doubt
my verse is over im gunna ‘roll out’
ya rhymes are a crime - u will get put in jail without a hope
When the big black men behind you - you be like ‘please let me pick up the soap’

spit then dog.....................................

HIS MAJESTY............................"THE TYRANT"!!!
 

S.V. DANGEROUS........
"yeah its pretty obvious you dropped ya verse, 'cuz that shit sounds broken bitch.......none of it works. lets storm this fuckers castle and get him!"

dangerously...
i'll raid the place you sleep with 50 angry, raging fiends,
take ya things, rape your queen,
i came with razor b.'s, lazer beams and navy-made machines,
basically your agency says vacancy, face it please,
i assass-inated kingz,
if i were you, i'd hate me too,
'cuz today your getting banked then booed
like an o.g. blood dressed in navy blue
around 80 bangin' dudes from the same gang he claimed to rule,
insane but true? you could be laced with fruit (bananas)
and hungry orangutangs still wouldnt hang with you,
im that dick in your ass bitch, "i feel the pain in you"
remember my name 'cuz im a menace 2 sobriety,
lyrics dope like coke in all varieties,
from the smoked kind to swollen lines in 3's,
you can eat salsa and ex-lax, still wont produce no hot shit,
son i got this, when i talk sick its toxic, nuclear sub-atomic,
sorry my friend, but brotha you garbage,
gettin' walked on like used carpet,
dont even spit sick when you got the flu and is barfin',
i swing before i ask questions,
leave you dinged up and sleepin' like you was restin' (zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.)
my knuckles be leavin' impressions,
its my duty to do these things, dude im used to beef,
so i creep with midevil weapons that seek and destroy
the thieves that sneak and deploy the unbless-ed,
**im a verbal werewolf 'cuz it pains me to change to beast
and slay these lames for things (chomp, chomp)
oh my god! how rude of me, i got leftover mc between my teeth,
i shouldnt eat when im trying to speak...
so for now im done, i guess im the one you've been dying to meet,
greetings............they call me the sire s.v.

**(no.....when i bite you, you wont become as dope as me...ha ha ha!!!)
good spittin' kingz, lets up for some motherfuckin' votes and complete this shit comad. holla at ya boy! one love.

SUPERVILLAIN THE TYRANT,
CRHYME SINDICATE

opener sv
vocab sv
personals tie
flow sv by a lil
punches sv king were played

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uppin' for some fair votes people. also, once again, much love kingz...........you got down cutty.

s.v. the kingpin

uppin' for some fair votes!!! help us finish this battle off!!!

.........supervillain

yo this shit was so close its crazy

kingz had good punches and good vocab
but I think supervillain was just barely better

but both ya'll was fire!!!

vote=supervillain

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Yo This is close...

But supervillain got this he basically flowed better and wasnt doin punchlinez every second both were tight tho...

supervillains got my vote

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uppin' for some fair votes people. also, please explain your opinion. thanks.

s.v.

I'm gonna give this one to SuperVillian. You know i hate to vote for anyone when both verses were decent. Don't be down from this, Kingz. It's really hard to compare 2 verses when SuperVillian took full adavntage of the unlimited lines, and Kingz barely put down 16. I mean SV's is damn near twice the size of Kingz. So I feel its an unfair comparison, but both combatants agreed to the rules. So, this one goes to SuperVillian taking every aspect of this battle.

UBR

Both Verses Kinda Dragged On...Hard To Read lol But I Think S.V Came A Lil Harder With Better Punches..Holla-Bakk.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116834

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116660

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=116811&page=2

One.

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uppin.............................................

close battle I thought, but I didnt like how SUPERS' just kept goin and goin and was hard to read and some of it didnt ryme. Kingz flowed better and punches were even bot I got to give this to kingz for better structure and flow. Work on the flow super.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148 hit this battle up plz.. I have had 5 votes they kept gettin DQ'd so holla at it ..and vote good.. peace

5orry but thyz battle waz kinna weak... it'z juz a written battle yall, keep your barz kon5tint in5ted of theze - brakez... gue55 what im trinna 5ay iz 5UPERVILLAIN'z ver5e top Kingz. King dawg, lil advi¢e... keep your 5hyt 5hort but 5weet My Vote=5uper

First off, this was a pretty good battle, probably the best i've seen so far. Here's the break down:

Creativity: Both of you kats were pretty creative. So its pretty equal in this category. Neither one of you used old ish, or ish from other people and rearranged it, so this was good and fresh.

Flow: Both had a nice flow. I was able to flow both rhymes pretty easily which is always good in a battle. So this category was pretty equal as well

Vocab: Each vocab was pretty good. Both of you had some nice lines. I liked this like by SV "i'll raid the place you sleep with 50 angry, raging fiends,
take ya things, rape your queen,
i came with razor b.'s, lazer beams and navy-made machines", this line was off the freakin futon. Kingz had some nice lines as well, like this one "I’ve got a killer’s mentality – it will be a fatality
I will backslap u so hard – you will be ‘back to reality’
I better watch my ass – cos u aint sure bout ya sexualty", this line was butter. But for this category, Kingz had more dope punches, SV began to sway a little towards the end.

Structure: In this spot Kingz structure was much easier to read. His lines didnt wrap that much so it was easier on the eyes. SV lines did wrap in some places, it was a little more difficult to read but it wasnt nonsense stuff, it was to keep the flow going so this really wasnt a big problem.

Overall vote: Kingz, mainly because he had maybe 1 - 2 more punches. If it wasnt for this, I would have voted the battle EQUAL. Both of ya'll did DA DAMN THANG!!!

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT ABOUT??? this is bullshit honestly. i already won this battle when it was first posted.......and by a landslide at that! so now the mods come and fuck with it even though it was closed and buried for weeks? shit sounds fuckin' fishy to me. also, some of the cats that voted for me in this battle wound up joining my crew later, so im not gonna ask them to correct the technicalities of their votes, faggots will think im cheating..........im not a fuckin' cheater, im a man about mine. kingz, you got down cutty, but my verse was hotter/more creative. if they give it to you, they give it to you, but you know this shit was through. it was curtains. p.m. me playboy..........we gotta talk.

plus, whoever pulled this gay shit to try to fuck up my record/standings, i send you this message............"I FEEL YOUR WEAKNESS. HATER!"

S.V. THE MUTHAFUCKIN' TYRANT!!!!! CRHYME SINDICATE!!!!!

hott as battle baby both had good structure good shit ya ming check it
kingz-punches-8/10
structure-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9/10
overall-9/10

SUPERVILLAIN
punches-8/10
structure-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-8/10
overall-8.5/10
wasnt feelin da flow like eirthing else
so vote 2 kingz

yo i vote for kingz
but here is the results
flow-king-yo wigga you didn't do it to go but you were better then sv.
punchlines-kingz-damn man the Bob Dylan line and the planet of the apesline was hot. sv-your nuclear sub-atomic line was good (would have been better if it ryhmed with something)
personals-sv-that seemed to be your focus so it was good espscialy the i assass-inated kingz line. kingz-thing one made me go oooooohhhhhhhhh I will backslap u so hard – you will be ‘back to reality’//I better watch my ass – cos u aint sure bout ya sexualty
and that what i focused on so kingz won