Srry but he keeps talkin shit Accomplishment Vs. Gunfamgeneral254
 

aight bitch 25 lines maximum
10 min
no hate d/r votes
i'll spit first cuz your gonna feed and by the way there is non of that to tell you faggot
you keep talkin shit so i'ma kill you

check in due in 30 minutes i aint gonna spit til you check in

Im Checked In................................................ ................

Nigga Spit........................................

fuck off faggot i gotta do somptin real quick its blind spit anyway so drop

AIgh hurr it goes

OOH DAMN...Look dawgs its generla gunfam...but wheres da gun man...oh damn its in my hand and i'm about to destroy his whole FAM....
LIl opener fo ya'll^^

Shh...Crowd be quiet so this faggot can hear me...first line isnt completed and he's already dead nearly...so next time you see me on thread you better fuckin FEAR ME!
...Cuz i spit shit dat dis illiterate bitch is unable to dictate...and i just don't completely murk him, I do it at a quick rate...
Drink Anti-Freeze put ona Cap and Sweater...Some Gloves a Jacket and some boots might even be better...cuz when i get on dis microphone my rhymes as cold as artic weather...
It's over i should just be finished..cuz the way this cat spits, his rhymes are diminished...
You like fat kids playin dodge ball you always gettin Hit ...even if ya was a cammel i couldn't teach you how to spit...
My punches rearrangin your facial dispistition...my rhymes like kama sutra puttin you ina risky position...this is it my final finishen...cuz this battle was over when it was just begininin

haha chuch

Yo,lil Nigga U Dont Want Beef You Betta Leave It Alone/
Before I Put The Nine To Yo Dome/
Have You Pickin Up Chromosomes/
I'm Top Notch In This Rappin And U A Average Nigga/
I'll Hit U Wit One Punch Line U Be Ready To Retire Like Jigga/
Dog Keep Fuckin Wit Me And U Gone Learn/
I Bet When U Were Born Yo Dad Said That U Was A Waist Of Sperm/
Dog I'll Put A Hole Through Yo Fuckin Chest/
Your Name Is Accomplishment/
Well My Rhyme Will Break Yo Success/
Dog I Can See Yo Life U Wanna Committ Suicide Cuz Everybody Dis On You/
Lyrically I'm Rkelly And Your A Young Bitch/
So Every Verse You Kno Igotta Piss On You/
And Yo Bitch Runnin To Me Cuz She Said U Cant Get It Up/
I'll Bust In Yo Moms Mouth And Tell The Slut She Dont Spit Enough/
And I'm Tellin You Man I Stay Wit The Pistol/
If Not I Got The Ak/
That'll Leave You Whiped Out Like Tissue/
You Cant Freestyle Dog Let Alone Write/
I Can Make Better Songs In Aday Than U Can Your Whol Life

Some Body Vote So I Can Win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both of u guyz spit well but gunfam won becuz of his ender and his punches wurr betturr..accomp spit good and i liked his structure betta xcept for tha ^^^lil opener part but yeah..GOOD BATTLE..ya'll come vote dagreatest vs Youngstar*.....

yeah ok you read his lines they are used on this website constantly about jay z retirin that shit is old anyways uppin

Nigga Fuck U My Shit Is Original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gunfam Accomplishment:flow: $$$$$ Vocab: $$$$ Style $$$$$
Flow:$$$
Vocab:$$
Style:$$$

Out Of 10

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ima give this shit to accomplishment. yur shit was koo, i liked the fat boy line that shit was funny as hell.just work on flow and keeping your shit making sense.

GUN; ur shit was wack. u need ta work on vocab flow and STRUCTUREEE!!!!!!! especially your structure it was boring to read

so vote goes to ..... ACCOMPLISHMENT

yo gunfam kilt that nigga

yo example you gotta explain votes faggot

a accomplishment i really wasnot feelin his shitye he needs to work on his vocab and he wasnot all that funny except for a 1 or 2 punches
he really didnot accomplish anything

gunfam had better punches i liked his style he u could tell he wanted it more

still need vot5es hurr ddirtas

opener ac
punches gf
vocab tie
personals tie
closer gf
vote gf his punches hit just a lil harder i think u guys should do a rematch

My vote goes to acomplishment his rhyme skeem was better

and gunfam was kinda plain through most of it

ac - ya structure was good and it was good to read but im gunna give this one to gunfam cos i was rele feelin' his flow.

Dog I'll Put A Hole Through Yo Fuckin Chest/
Your Name Is Accomplishment/
Well My Rhyme Will Break Yo Success/

this line was tight

vote - gunfam

honest votes on these plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116751
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116732

yeh it was kina plain i just try to mix shit up you know keep bitches on there toes but thats just my style ya'll gotta learn that

yo uppin for votes and actually read da lines dont just vote for dat fag

Fuck U U Mad Cuz I'm Winning So Far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well,i think both were kinda on the same level...accomplishment told a story kinda...i didnt like this part..."Drink Anti-Freeze put ona Cap and Sweater...Some Gloves a Jacket and some boots might even be better...cuz when i get on dis microphone my rhymes as cold as artic weather" that was really gay,rhymes are cold like artic weather?thats weak....

gunfam..the jigga line is weak as fuck...but i liked this
Your Name Is Accomplishment/
Well My Rhyme Will Break Yo Success/
at least u had a lil bit of personals...u had a slightly better flow...but a lil more basic rhymes

one more thing,accomplishment had like 3 different lines about the same thing,its over before it began type thing...that was gettin really tiring to read...
overall imma give it to gunfam
vote=gunfam