Preme vs Furoshis
 

Yoh u already kno whut it is.....10-15 lines i guess ima spit first....holla back


One.

ight fa sho prolly wont get it til later im at night school so...............ill get back as soon a as possible tho..................

Irite Well Ima Have My Verse Dropped By Tomoro Night At The Latest So That'll Be The Due Date If You Can Drop By Then?...Holla Back.

One.

Yoh Dawg...It Says Yah On So Key Up A Quick Verse And So WIll I...Holla-Bakk.

One.

yo man im not gonna be able to post til like 5:00 bro.................this the only time i get to get on...............just seeing wusup on this site.............sorry bout dis.......really hope you dont mind..................but i will have my post b4 5:00 or like 10 mins after 5.................is that coo...............

n you can post urs at that time too.....................

Yeah Thats Kool Dawg....Just As Long As We Get This Done....Ima Have Mine By 5 Then If Thats When You Wanna Post...Holla-Bakk.

One.

ight fa sho man les do that................well im botu to bounce bro.............n thanks man.....................

Word...No Doubt Dawg Its Kool...Holla-Bakk.

One.

yo man im back n sorry for the wait..........jus got done playin basketball at da school wit sum of da homies.......................want me to spit first........heh cuz im kinda pumped up........too plus i made you wait for soo long...........

or you wanna just do blind spit so it can be who ever gets done first

Yeha Thats Kool Then....Ima Do Mine Right Now THen.....


One.

ight man les do this then ill do mines right now 2.....

Irite Ima Bout To Post Something...How Many Lines Again...??

like 10 or something dont gotta be too long but nutin less than 10

Stop Bitin My Rhymes They Not Edible-man//
Fuck Witt Me You Bettah Have Good Medical-plan//
Son You Bettah Take Notice, Yah Hope-lees, When I Take Focus//
Key An Ill Verse And Post-it, Only Way Yah Gotta Chance Is If You Quote-this//
Save Ya Self From Death Back Out An Drop No-diss//
How This Bitch Think He Furoshis, When I Drop This Verse I'll Leave This Cat Vote-less//
Know-this, I Got Em Marked Out Witt Optical-beams//
My Mic Presence Rip Up Topical-themes, You Know This Fags Droppin-his-jeans//
In The Mens Change Room With Provocative-schemes//
I Spit Hott-like-degrees, Im Stoppin-emcees//
Make Yah Take Back Yah Verse Pick Up A Pen-please//
Invest At Least Ten-g's, On Ghostwritten Frees//
Yah Probley Still Wudnt Come Close To Roastin-me//
I Serve Ne Emcee Locally, Vocally, Endin' Careers Witt Dis Poetry//
I Bet You'll Neva See These Lames-roc-a-venue//
I Serve This Cat So Much Its Like His Name-on-da-menu//

I Over Did It A Bit But It All Flows So It Was Hard To Cut It Down...Holla-Bakk Dawg.

One.

yo i spit shit that gets niggaz doin backflips more than gymnastics//
n my enthusiastic tactics will have you gaspin for breath like asthmatics//
i'll shock you like static with punches that add up like mathematics//
my shits dramatic n always erratic like a crackaddicts mind//
n with elsastic lines this gonna be a drastic time//
cuz niggas like you are faker than plastic mimes//
n ma flows come to me automatically then liek elevation they gradually climb//
im hard to find, one of a kind, leave you in the state of mind to press rewind then decline//
dint you know im deeper in these streets than sewer lines?//
n nigga you couldnt correspond to the sounds at the end of your verses if you were bustin rhymes//

yo man this was off da top...............les hope i did well................

les get some votes now ight n nice spit u did bro seemed to me a lil prewritten but it was coo..............

Irite Dawg....Man I Aint Got Nuthin Pre-Written....All I Do Is Audio Pretty Much This Is Liek My My Second Text Battle...I Got Madd Rhymes I Can Bust Of The Top Cuz Im Used To Freein' Alot...But Its All Good W.E U Wanna Think Bruh...Tiight Verse Tho Dawg...Holla-Bakk.

One.

yo man if it wasnt, it wasnt.......you know what i mean...just curious cuz that was pretty tight man.........keep it up bro...

Fa Real I Know Whut You Mean....Its All Gravy. ^^^UPPIN'^^^

yo preme killed this with better flo, better multis, better punches, that shit about leaving him voteless and spending 10 gs on ghostwriting fees was ill. furoshis work on your personals, this is a battle, go for the jugular kid.

Word....Thx Fo Votin Dawg Too Many Peeps Sleep...1-0 ^^^UPPIN'^^^

overall good battle

F...you came out wit heat...good vocab but its basic...no real eye poppin punches...
P...you also came out wit heat...good vocab..your flow wasnt as choppy...and you had a couple hot punches...

this overall was good battle

overall vote
<Preme>

Word....2-0 ^^^UPPIN'^^^

^^^^UPPIN'^^^^Fucken Vote!!...lol

Yoh Uppin Fo Some Votes......^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yo preme had better punches.preme had better rhyme scheme.
i thought furoshis had better multis. but didnt have good enough punches
and rhyme scheme.

V=preme

yo dogz can i git some honest votes in my battles! peice from gambino

Irite Yoh...3-0 UPPIN'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Irite Lets Just Finish This...........................^^^^^^^

UPPIN'^^^^^Drop A Link An I'll Drop Votes On Yah Battles...Holla.

furoshis

Punches-8/10 dey was hott i liked:n with elsastic lines this gonna be a drastic time//
cuz niggas like you are faker than plastic mimes//
Flow-7/10
Creativity-9/10
Overall-8/10
Total-32/40

Preme

Punches-7/10 his was a lil betta den urs but i liked dey was hott:Stop Bitin My Rhymes They Not Edible-man//
Fuck Witt Me You Bettah Have Good Medical-plan//
Flow-7/10
Creativity-8/10
Overall-7/10
Total-29/40 u was good but he was a lil bit bettah

Irite......Did You Even Read The Verses...You Picked One Of My Worst Lines And Said It Was Good...You Dont Even Know How To Judge The Topics In Yah Vote...

n yo opinion u said it was yo worst in mine i liked it da most got it n u got somein else stupid to say bout my vote

Yeah I Got To Say Yah Wack If You Voted For Him....Mufuka...

BREAKDOWN

Opener - Tie both had a good opener....
Closer - Preme....fur's was stretched n premes was fuckin insane
Flow - Preme....his worked through out the whole verse n it was hot
Punches - Preme's hit harder n thats why he got it
Meta's - Preme got this no doubt his meta's were fuckin crazy
Enjoyment - Preme jus kept me into it n i was baggin up

Vote = Preme

return the favor wit an honest vote
me vs daclassic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

Word...Thx FO THa Vote Dawg....I'll Hit Up A Vote In Yah Battle....4-1 UPPIN"^^^^^

FUROSHOUS: ya rhymes were nice...a lot of similes and metaphors but most of them were played and simple....your vocab was little better then preme..your punchlines werent hitting hard enough

preme: a nice rhyme too. metaphors fealt to me were a bit funny especially the opener...not bad. vocab as good as furoshush but u did enough to win

v/preme

and little not preme when u voted in my battle u didnt make it official..in the poll so please do so thanx