lyrical mc.....d.j em sce
 

aight look here we go...remeber may the best man win..

10-15 lines
no hate votes
no d/r
no bitting
no recycled lines..

this is about to be a coo battle...........

aight im bout to do sumthin so i'll spit in a lil.......just checkin in

ah i was writing my rap then my teacher erased my rap..........im in saturday school rite now.....so i'll hit you up in a lil....im about to get my internet took by the end of the day....i'll still try to rite it tho....

aight this was real quik cuz my internet is about to be gone...
I bring myself into your embezzled state-of-mind//
So you can fill the full effect of over rated-rhymes//
My rhymes will astonish ya/leave you motionless like Christopher reeves//
Now im the caped magician who has to many tricks up his sleeves//
See my punchlines will have your abdominal fluids leakin out your vaginal glands//
You beat yo meat do much you got dick prints permanently engraved in your hands//
If your rymes were excessively dilated your style still couldn’t expand//
You couldn’t enter hip hop’s arena with your deepest thoughts//
you think you the key, well hip hop’s a combination lock//
see when I bring the beef you claim to be a vegetarian//
dont eva fuc wit tray six wit a style mo fragile than diabetic centenarian//

i hope it makes sense...didnt get a chance to read it over

aiight look....

Dis Wack Herble Rapper taken his time to free-post da thread ,
His Rhyme is wack to high extent and spits as-if he roast his pencil lead,
Chokes on da mic and mirrors imbread Srayin' wack lyrics like graffit,
His punches come few like a guy wid lepra shootin' a mashetti,
Seein' him wid Mic Cred is a hulsitnation,his rhyme played like jackulation,
Hes avin' his internet discared coz his rhyme so wack in need investigation,
Im sivin' his lyrics like ventalation, hes fake coz his punch ricersaded,
Ive blown him away like granaide,he bitch as HIV so hes neva bin layed,
His crew rejected him for every battle as it is there consept,
Coz his rhyme lack verble content and his punch is never direct..

Blah...did it quick.

Lets get some votes on dis peeps...

coo coo...hope we get some votess.... may the best man win

I gotta give this one to Dj.....He just came with better punches that were harder hittin. Lyrical MC, your shit was too hard to read. I got annoyed with it..........sorry.
~no hate~

Vote-DJ

Hit me back at one of my links in the sig

dats a d/r or dj u got dis guy to vote for you...

peeps leave links and i will hit u back

Yoh...

Lyrical MC:7/10
Punches Was OK But Yah Lines Were Too Long It Just Dragged On And Is Annoying To Read...lol

TRAY SIX:8/10
haha I Was Definatly Feelin' Tha Punches In This One...Yah WordPlay An Flow Was Better By Far....Same For Structure An Multies....lol

VOTE:TRAY SIX

damm the two votes before me show it is obvouis he got them to vote....coz lyrical mc killed him....df ur flow was wack and u had no personals.....mc had flow and kept his lines wid da same syliobls (or close.).....dj verse was kinda sploppy...any1 can c lyrical mc wins dis...but it opinon...not bad dj but wen u get 2 votes witch are kinda fake then sumfins gota b sed...
v/ lyrical mc

yo peeps leave a link and i will drop a honest vote......pz :D

uppin

I Vote Fair Dawg...I Dont Vote Fo Ppl Plus Whut You Talkin About Votin For Ppl...Theres More Dickriders In My Battles Right Now Than An Elton John Concert..Holla-Bakk.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116834

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116660

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=116811&page=2

One.

uppin.... ..leave links and i wil hit ur battle wid honest votes wen im online..pz .:D

^^^yo i leave Honest vote man....i fuckin h8 dick ryders as much as the next person...uppin

yo man Lyrical MC has this in the bag dont blame it on the computer that it was not a good flow
my vote/Lyrical MC

dj got my vote wit harder punches n better flow...guess u should take ur time next time lyrical...return the favor wit an honest vote....me vs daclassic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

i'll leave honest votes to so just leave yo battles and i'll hit you up.......we need mo votes...

dj em sce: yo shit was krackin harda den lyrical mc. i jus suggest tightenin up yur lines a lil betta

lyrical mc: ur style seems to poetic to be battling. i mean you need to punch a lil harder. and as i told DJ u need to work on structure

heres how i see it

open: DJ
close: DJ
personals: DJ
metas: Lyrical
punches: DJ
multis: Lyrical

vote goes to.......... DJ em sce

dj emscee: the thing that stood out the most was the punchlines your were hitting harder..vocab was okay but not better then lyrical mc. flow was okay

lyrical mc: to me the reason why u failed on this one is cuz of the punchline u need to come a lot stronger. the wordplay was nice though.....

v/dj emscee

please return the favor and vote in my battle
dclassic vs L.I. its in the first page of front lines go check it out honest opinions though

dj emcee gets this one his punches were better and flow i didnt like lyricals verse much but i seen better from dat kid i think if lyrical would have stepped up it would have been close yo return da favor