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blackie vs gambino
aite you spit 1st u got 2/3 days coz thats wen im next on aite ima spit round bout wednesday
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ight its what ever....................................
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10 lines at least.....................................
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this bitch blackwell likes to talk gangsta like he's been to the joint//
but battling me is like a pencil with a broken tip there just aint no point// and you better not take my ryhmes and repeat even though we know its all heat// cause the only time you make since when you spit is when you brushin' your teeth// and blackwell you aint know compition by now I got you on the ground in submission// and my guns in perfect position to take your life if god only gives me permission// and now this cats missing till thursday like i showed him a gun with a loaded cartridge// cause he knows his ryhmes is like a junkyard its just full of some garbage// and I hope you asked for help before you got in this battle with gam// cause I might just slice off your wrists so then you'll be askin for a hand// whats good nigga.......... |
ok nice ima post wednesday while u at skool or wotever coz i cant get on till then
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yo! you on now so spit dawg!
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ayo this is a horror "spoof" and ya name screams "wackniss"/ (the movie scream)
ya last battle is "proof" that ya no multi structure needs "practice"/ Just keep up the day job coz truth is you never gunna get "noticed"/ If rap was a race and there was a finnish bet ya ass ima be "closest"/ Fully "focused"- poor n "atrocious" ima stamp allover this cat just like "locust"/ The way this cat rhymes one word we should nickname his ass the lone "cyclopse"/ (one eye, one rhyme) ima keep pushing "minds" wit "rhymes" like marines pushing pressups at fort "knox"/ this fools thinks he too big for his "socks" like henry the 8th bitch you getting the chop I can not be "stoped"...ill?? lol how bout coming back when ya god damn balls "drop"/ now i can sit back n "chill" you had better stay put coz wit words im trained to "kill"/ |
supposed to say i cant be stopped lol and you got ya wish man its tuesday lol HAPPY!
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yah I'm happy I dont like waiting for ever!!!!!!
uppin^^^^^ for votes please if you read this drop a vote one love....... |
uppin^^^^^for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin^^^for votes please..............................
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Weak Battle
I Know Yall Could Do Better Overall Blackwell Had Good Vocab Gambino Had Few Punches I Got Luv 4 Both |
yo blackwell takes this one by a lil bit his structre is gay but he did better gambino can easily take him but he didnt give his all yo retrn da favor
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I appreciate ya'll voting even though ya'll voting against me
its hard to get cats too vote one love........ |
vocab-blackwell..sum nice shit ther mate..gambino u need to get round those words u got ther (if you no wat i mean)
flow-blackwell...again its prety nice..gambio u win on the flow mate...nice flow Personals-no one..guys ther was no Personals.both need sum more personals punches-gambino i like this punch Quote:
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overall 7/10 gambino 8/10 blackwell v/blackwell |
is multies that important were even if I got nice punches I cant win cause I dont like
having multeis in a battle....... yo I know My punches is hot man....... well what ever just vote......... one love..... |
gambino ure better than this man ure punches werent the best u had no personals and ure ryme scheme was a bit basic,also try and improve ure vocab and ryming and u will elevate
blackwell u had some very wity punches and personals , very good flow and multies but ur vocab was non existent vote blackwell vs KINGS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 vs rec-d http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940 vs touch to gold http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127 |
Vote to Blackwell
Straight up you guys have some work on your lyrical. Ya'll got a long way before you can take a CarsonJet, a Crysis, or even your's truly.Blackwell had something that was iight to read tho so I give him props. Gam- I don't think you tried on this one and I'm pretty sure the only reason Black got this one is cuzza all the damn time he took to write it. Anyways homies stay up and Black congrats on the weakests KO ever.
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