lyrical mc vs. disaster master
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Aiight...lyrical Mc Checkin In.... I Will Drop By Thurday Man

the Master of Disaster cheaking in.. i'll drop thursday. who goes first?

ok im gona drop first...and right now

right now im gona expose u
then after that i will despose of u
homie im gona get satirical
show ur human foly and ridicule
Its a mirical that ur can be half as lyrical as mystical
but all that raper says is watch yourself
after im done ur gona' remember myself
dissmember ur member and have u supported like suspenders
dont get mad at me cuz u cant stand and deliver
Dude im the best mc it stands for muzikly conditioned
but for u mc means half mentaly cognitioned
now im in a position to ravage plunder and kill
i'm a natural croud plesser with a licence to thrill
I'm a savage and i'll rip ur spine out ur anul cavity
take ur limbs and lines and bunch them up and intertwine
then disemmboul you with out showing any sensitivity
I'm the new world order and ur the first to die
all ur raps sound bitten and they all sound like a lie
u bite from corny bitches that got a low suppy
when i elevate in this bitch gravity will be defied
Dj emcce's like dam vanilla ice just dissed you
homie quit now its ok, just subdue
pull 8 pints of blood to be imbued
get some air freashiner u smell like boo-boo
u stink more than an old person will caterak in they draws
u aint in dopeness no more dorthy cuz im the rap wizard of OZ
sever ur 2 major nervous systems without any hesitation or flaws
theres nothing that can stop me from devouring all ya raw

Dis Is How It goes....

Desater Master Hyped On Dick Rhydin' Faster,
Defintion of his punch couldnt hit harder flyin' plaster,
His DNA Sceintist say has restircited Genes,
Still anit Past Puberty and his rhyme inflicted dreams,
He Steps to da mic but spit Hostility,
Hypes bout streez talk like he admits to verginity,
The way i tormant him verbaly is like butt and tissue,
Wippin' my arse wid him like his rhyme sput was no issue,
Peeps call him "dingy" the way hes blown up and deflated,
Obesity Consiquenced him as hes neva Jackualted,
Fuck Jackulated his neva masterbated srayin' shit over rated,
His 1-1 battle Rec mirrors his freinds and ememys,
Dumb Fuck hewb can't be Helped wid drugs or remadies,
His rhyme is restricted to wack as he bites rhyme,
Mic cred at sub zero tempretures as his wackness combine,
I caught his punch like at verble weekness hes king,
His last breath in RB hes invaded as i riun his sing,

thats tight lets get some votes in here now, good luck.

yeah^^good luck.........vote peeps

yo wurss da pole

we wont votes...dis is a league....

Lyrical MC: 7/10
I Liked Your Verse, Multis Were Nice and Metas Were Good. Punches Were Good But Not Many Persoanls. Still Overall Good Spit.

Disaster Master: 5/10
You Need To Get Your Mulits and Metaphors In Check. Your Punches Need To Be Harder and You Just Need To Come Harder Overall. I Mean I Like Ya FLow, But Work On Da Complexities Of Your Ryhmes.

Vote: Lyrical MC

~R~

lyrical M.C. 6/10
hard to understand but good punches.flow was nice and lyrical but too plain.
best line was; His 1-1 battle Rec mirrors his freinds and ememys,
Dumb Fuck hewb can't be Helped wid drugs or remadies,

Disaster Master 7/10
good punches,good use of metophors,overall better flow nice lyrics.kinda basic but good.best bar was; dissmember ur member and have u supported like suspenders
dont get mad at me cuz u cant stand and deliver
my vote goes to disaster master

ok....1-1...uppin 4 more votes.... :D

iight...i wasnt really feelin this battle...just simple

but
LYRICAl..came correct flow was on point and got personal wit his shit...not too many punches or metas

DISASTER...um you need to work on metas and punches dog...you got the idea but you aint really followin through with the shit...get it together and you could have a solid verse

my vote goes to LYRICAL cuz he came wit the punches, more dissin, and personals in his verse (ima metaphor guy myself but props for the verse)

iight man!! keep spittin yall!

gunits vote? was that a vote if soo it dont count.

1-2 come on vote in here

the bullshit votes been deleted and here's my vote:

breakdown for lyrical mc:

flow:solid basic but not bad 6/10

volcab:good use no beefs with this 7/10

punches:best line is, "Defintion of his punch couldnt hit harder flyin' plaster" most of your lines were kinda weak nothing that hurt no diss but really 5/10

overall:18/30 alright verse not much for punches but solid flow and volcab

breakdown for disaster master:

flow:solid use of multis the flow was definatly on the whole time 7/10

volcab:good through the whole peice no probs here 7/10

punches:best line, "I'm a savage and i'll rip ur spine out ur anul cavity" my god this was a hardcore verse you didn't try and make people laugh no it seemed more like you wanted to make people leave this thread holding there stomachs good job 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--disaster master that shit was crazy so violent. good verse for both though

A'ight, nothin' that specail in this battle...but there is no question about it thgat Lyrical MC had this shit won...Disaster's shit is pretty elementary...nothin' worht mentionin' in his verse...

Lyrical MC ahd this shit wit the punches and flow...everything was good, just no real eye-wideners.

Vote- Lyrical MC.

Lyrical MC 3-2 Desater master....upin

close battle!!
uppin over the no shows

Im Upin Its 2-3 Needs Some Votes

yo, this was a pretty close battle

disaster master..I liked your flow nd ur structure. But for me, your punches and personals didnt really hit hard enough. You didnt have any multis..But overall i liked your verse

lyrical ...your flow and your structure was aiight. You came harder with your punches and personals and you had some ok multis and seeing as they win battles my vote goes to you...

v/ lyrical

Cheers^^^^Lyrical MC4 Vs Deaster master
Uppin

Sorry typo...."lyrical MC 4 vs 2 Desaster master"
Soz to post it gen but da score needs to b up :D

damn lyrical git this one.......and dm wat did you mean win you said my name in your flow didnt really under stand it.....

lyrical: good punches good meta4s great vocab....this ryming game comes easy to you....not really much to say bout this didnt really do anyhting wrong maybe next time you could comem wit a lil more punches.....this wasnt your best but alla in all good...8/10

dm; THIS WAS ONE OF YOUR BETTE BATTLES..but idnt really understand it when you used my name...but punches were alrite need lots mo vocab and could use betta meta4s...just an average flow.......all in all 6/10

vote=lyrical mc

yeah it fink he thought he was battlin you...
Lyrical MC 5 vs2 desaster master:D

dj emsce thats a d/r vote man when know you in the same crew vote honestly fuck jesus christ

lyrical you had a nice scheme going at first i thought it was gonna be sick as fuck but then you just lost me your structre was nice flow so so punches weak i excepeted more from you
3/10

DM damn your a violent fuck not as violent as me but anyways your structre needs work it was ok flow was decent punches were there this wasnt your best by any means but keep at it
5/10
decent battle i just expected more and dont worry im waiting on my hate for my verse against Re$tricted

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens
Undestructable--you will see

yo i used his mane cuz ur in his crew
"Dj emsce like dam vanilla ice just dissed u"
like he was reading it and he was thinking it(cuz im like the whitest person at my school)
oh and upin 5-3

"like dam vanilla ice just dissed u" yo man i av herd dat som1 were alse....i fink you bite that...im not realy sure...any1 else see dis?

nice battle......but lyrical mc just got da edge on dis one with his punches and his sturcuture was beta keepin the same sylobols im each line....other cat verse was kinda structure was wack...
v/lyrical mc

Personally I thought they both sucked. Disaster was spittin cat in the hat rhymes and Lyrical ain't make no sense............The only good part of this battle was Lyrical's flow, so I guess I'll vote for him.

Vote-Lyrical MC

vote dm ill verse better punchlines better multis
lmc ok punches ok personals ok vocab
dm just came harder

Lyrical mc 7 vs 3 desaster master ....,....how many votes do i need to win?

i think its just how many you have by sunday

lyrical M.C. 5/10
it was sorta hard to follow but i started to understand....but i think disaster took this one
Disaster Master 6/10
had punches and better flow and shit like tht

DisasterMaster Took This One Easily... Better Flow, Punches, Vocab, WordPlay ..

Vote: DisasterMaster

5-7 upin

challenge
 

:shoot: i'll kill anyone who wants to battle me

sign up in the battle for next week and "kill" someone

Disater got it, Lyrical MC would have had it but he fell off a little at the end. Where as Disater was consistent throughout, so I give it to disaster.

i dont know how yall want me to vote this but whateva

Lyrical had mor pucnhes in his text
unlike DM
i was feelin his text more and didnt have to think about readin it twice.
it was short and sweet.

punches:Lyrical
metas that were there:Lyrical
disses:Lyrical
so if this vote count,my vote goes to
Lyrical
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