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DirtBoy69 03-22-04 01:10 PM

restricted vs. krackmittens
 
deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Restricted 03-22-04 04:04 PM

Aiyo...Lets Get This Started..

.::Checkity Check::.

Good Luck KrackMittens

~R~

Krackmittens 03-22-04 04:19 PM

lol you know this is kinda funny cause me and re$tricted just talked baout us haveing to battle each other but its all good mad love

check check checkity check

good luck re$tricted

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

DirtBoy69 03-25-04 09:40 AM

well i guess this is round two show up

uppin over closed battles

Krackmittens 03-25-04 10:20 AM

your closing this?? im lost today is thursday right??

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

Restricted 03-25-04 03:51 PM

Aight..This Can't Be Closed, The Rules Said Verses Due Today...So Here Is My Ish..

Aight Check Mic...

Yo No Disrespect Just Business..

3.....2....1....Yo....

I'll Rip Your Brain Stem Outta Skull, and Watch The Blood Rush From Your Nose,
Insert A Needle And Suck Out Ya Cerebral Spinal Fluid, Unbalanced Rythmatic Flows/
Insert Two Tampax, Chemical Formulas Burn Like Anthrax, Disolving Ya Tissue,
Pull Out Da Cerebellum, How You Gone Spit and Think?, Battlings Gonna Be An Issue/
Pick Apart Ya Cerebrum With The Mic, Ya Nerves Flipping Like Gymnastics,
You Have No Gull Anyways, Not Like You'll Be Missing Anything Fantastic/
Pull Apart Your Corpus Callosum, I'm Really Splitting This Kids Dome,
No Throne, You Ain't Winning, But You Can Have Back Your Back-Bone/
Since You Lack Chrome, O-Somes, Brain Waves Invisible Like The O-Zone,
Flip Your Flow, ILL-Matic Ya Prone, See Me On Da Scene and Be Like "Oh No!"/
Enough Of The Anatomy, I'ma Just Rip You Bitch, Word Play I've Already Won,
You Spit Wit Ice, I Keep It Nice, Described Like GWS Patients I'm As Hot As It Cums/
With Lyrical Typhoons, And Enough Carosene In My Spits To Ignite You,
Spiritualy Fight You, Twist Ya Neck Backwards, You Ready For Round 2?/
If Anyone Votes For This Cat, Then We Must Be At A Gay Convention,
Spit Metaphors Wrapped Within Each Other, Spittin Lyrical Deception/
I'ma Verbal Mastermind, Crack Ya Back Over My Knee, Break'N Ya Spine,
Insights Are Blind, Acidic Spits Melting Your Inner-Core Decline/
Don't Fuck Wit Da Lines, I Spit Bars To The Extent Of Your Neck,
My Upper-Cuts Leave'N Your Upper-Lip Over-Your Head, Bitch Come In Check/
Your Bars Ain't Made Outta Concrete, Their Made Outta Plastic,
I Bend Em and Extort Them, Making Your Spit An Instant Classic/

Haha..Yea..Round 1...Who's Next??

~R~

Restricted 03-25-04 03:58 PM

.::My Votes::.

Vote 1:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117008

Vote 2:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117006

Vote 3:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116996


Aight...Uppin For Kracks Verse...

~R~

Krackmittens 03-25-04 05:47 PM

hey yo i didnt want this battle but its whatever this is just a quick key cause everyone keeps bitching for me to post im sorry fellas i have a job..lol Re$rticted have another win..lol and give me my sig already!!

R-rated shit your eyes must be dialated
grab the mic shove it up your ass leave you violated//
try and fade it leave you like a nuclear theisis covering a dead fetus
piss lyrics out my penis just to let you know you not da meanest//
you not an emcee or a textcee you a femcee spitting flowery rhymes
i chop and cut your spitt like coke straight powedry lines//
move in milatary formations gett your mind racing and pacing
think you a rapper cause you know em's part on "patenily waiting"//
im not 50 so i aint holding you down im here to smack you off your throne
and shatter your crown leave you like Village pimp straight bitch//
man i've had dis itch to get at you got 4,000 verbs aimed at your face
let loose leave you breathless wit ink all over the place//
maybe it was a mistake for me to step up in this battle??
but you da one thinking you make gallaxies rattle//
naw you just run in tattle name one win you had and it was a decent battle??
oh yeah the one wit TooN but you jumped 2 soon went and bitched at the mods
got him suspenede cause he brought it to you real hard and split traysix like pea pods//
but its all good we all hood undestructable emcees up to no good
run these rap boards and pimp scores of whores fuck dis battle
i didnt want it in the first place im just here to take over and run this place
Re$triced you could have this win we kin i dont feel like rapping dis the end!!

yo i didnt want to battle i gotta alot going on so whatever my vote is for Re$tricted..lmao

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens
Undestructable--you will see

Krackmittens 03-25-04 05:51 PM

omg wtf i didnt know you had throne in your shit my bad pimpin

sorry didnt mean to freepost

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens
undestructable ---you will see

coo coo capone 03-25-04 07:14 PM

Re$TricTed 8/10 good shit
solid flow all the way through,good use of metaphores,punchlines and lyrics.No flaws.

Krackmittens 5/10 o.k.
I was feelin yo verse in the begining then you slowly died out. You had great
metaphores,and punch lines but lost focus,.



:thumbup: my vote goes to Re$Tricted.

shabba ranks 03-25-04 08:58 PM

Yo i was feelin ur verse resstricted it had some good flow and everything, just what i expected from a vet. 6/10

Krack the first line was the hat shit fool, i was feelin this rap too. But unlike restricted, kracks rap was my style. CLOSE 7/10
vote~Krack

DirtBoy69 03-25-04 09:03 PM

no i wasn't closing it just uppin it over all of the closed threads. anyway here's my vote:

breakdown for restricted:

flow:slick nice mutlis at the start solid through out the whole peice 7/10

volcab:amazing!!! the best i've seen in the league so far. my god are you an anglish major in university or something?? shit 10/10

punches:really violent at the start and some good personals through out the rest of it like,"If Anyone Votes For This Cat, Then We Must Be At A Gay Convention," pretty funny 7/10

overall:24/30 great one of the best verses i've read since coming back to this site

breakdown for krackmittens:

flow:just not on level with your oppenent good none the less except those last few bars really got out of hand 6/10

volcab:good use still though no hating but a level below your oppenent 6/10

punches:solid here though nice personals through the whole peice my fav. "you not an emcee or a textcee you a femcee spitting flowery rhymes" 8/10

overall:20/30 solid verse against anyone else me included probably could of taken the win but not good enough this week

vote--restricted came to fight this week he gets my vote. one of if not the best verse this week. krackmittens did good just not on the same level the time.

Restricted 03-26-04 06:22 AM

Aight Nice...

Re$tricted: 2 KRackMittens: 1

Uppin Dis Ish...

~R~

HeXen 03-26-04 10:41 AM

good battle......some good punches from restrictedand personals...overall 7/10
Krackmittens ...did ok but i just wasnt feelin it man...overall 4/10
pz out...kepp it up...good abttle
v/restricted

Krackmittens 03-26-04 11:00 AM

uppin this gay battle

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

Restricted 03-26-04 02:18 PM

How Many Votes Does It Take To Win?

~R~

Enygma 03-26-04 11:49 PM

I don't know who to give this to. Restricted came wit some tight ass shit, but didn't throw any personals. If it ain't personal, it ain't that good. Krack came alright but hit wit a lot more personals. Restricted could have spit that at anyone, Krack spit to one person........Restricted

Vote-Krackmittens

Krackmittens 03-27-04 02:56 AM

umm not to be a dick or bitch but enygma brought up a good point name one personal that he threw at me none so dirty i understand this is your league but until you can point out the personal your vote needs to be removed aswell as lyrical mc's you have no clue what the fuck a personal is i mean shit if you want i can take it to the mods no hate just enygma brought up a good point

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

Restricted 03-27-04 08:43 AM

LoL Don'T Try To Sway Votes....I Mean If You Go To A Freestlye Battle...A Live One....You Go Up Against Peeps You Don't Know...

So How The Fuck Are Personals Important?? LOL Wack Enygma......and I Can't Believe YOu Went Along With It Krack...You Should Know That Personals Don't Meant Shit....

Besides There Are Personals In There, Just THe Outside "Voting" Doesn't Know About Those...Only I Know Them About You....

~R~

Willa 03-27-04 10:22 AM

restricted great vocab ok punches and multis u really need 2 work on personals 8/10
krack good punches great personals ok vocab 8.5/10
i personally think personals have alot to do with a battle
so my vote goes to krack if u had personals u would have merked him but u didnt

Krackmittens 03-27-04 10:45 AM

Besides There Are Personals In There, Just THe Outside "Voting" Doesn't Know About Those...Only I Know Them About You
that makes no sense im not trying to be a dick on da real this is just some fucked up shit right here

"dont get nad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

Restricted 03-27-04 01:06 PM

All These Herbs On Dis New Site....

Man Carson Was Right...They Don't See Skill When Its In Front Of Them...

I Mean Dirtboy, and Lyrical See It...and Thats Because They Have Skill Themselves..

Fuckin Wack Dickryders That Voted For Krack LOL...This Is Gay..

This Is Why Outside Votes Shouldn't Be Allowed..

~R~

MCShortyD.T. 03-27-04 01:13 PM

Yo, good battle, but krakmittens man, you lost it. started strong, i was rootinng for you but you get weak as f*ck. my vote goes to re$tricted. good punch lines n lyrics. my vote goez to re$tricted

killaeffect 03-27-04 01:55 PM

Nice battle.. But it was kinda clear to judge the winna.. Let me break this down fo you..


Restricted:

Your workin wit some skill man.. nicely done.. punches we're hittin affectivly.. your rhyme scheme stayed intacted.. vocabulary was decent(not that it made a difference).. overall you had a nice verse..


Krack:

You started off nice but went wack as fuck.. punches were good up until about 3/4ths of tha way.. keep your mentality the whole way through man.. your rhyme scheme was decent could have been layed out betta.. but overall a decent verse..


Vote- Restricted

I felt that he clearly won this.. if krack would have kept his verse up the whole way through he might have had a chance.. but he didn't and Restricted clearly won this shit.. good battle.. holla.. 1

Enygma 03-27-04 02:05 PM

Restricted..........all I said is that I like the personals better than any other part of the battle. Look at all of my battles and you will see them full of personals. There is no doubt to your skill and you will probably win this battle, but My votes go to the person I feel did better...........I just thought it was Krack this time
~no beef~

Restricted 03-27-04 04:49 PM

Aight Uppin Dis ISh..

Re$tricted: 5 KrackMittens: 3

~R~

Aisle Phive 03-27-04 09:05 PM

Wow, you suck. I wouldn't waste a line on you kid.

Enhance 03-28-04 10:38 AM

^ Word to that thou . . your structure was awful & herbish , got damn.

DirtBoy69 03-29-04 09:45 AM

restricted wins 5-3


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