Just Me Vs. Accomplishment
 

Here are the rules nigga:
10-15 lines/
No crew votes/
no hate votes/
No D/R votes/
dont strecth ya lines/
Spit within 30 min./

P.S. First to 5 Votes wins aigh... Good Luck im checkin in..

Im getting "big-to-this-Fake", Tha way I *Pon-tha-Depriver* I'm known to "leave-clips-in-kids", im *Fond-wit-tha-fibers*//
But I leave this Bitch Gagging at his Own-Spits like Choking on Your Own Silivia//
Like *old-age detectives* your "stealth's peering" Wit fluids that discharge-from-your-eyes, by dirt, I leave your *filth-tearing*//
Cause im quick to have this kids hands over his Mouth faster than Catching-Yourself-Swearing//
"Accomp" getting ‘Ripped from the Toe Up’ like a ‘Bums Dressin Standards’!! Counting Down to his Loss, why’ll ur Aggravation is Growin//
I’ll ‘Bust ya Balls’ but ya ‘Castration is Showin’!! cuz my Punches got A.T. In Over his HeadLike a *Final Destination Moment*//
’Opportunity Knocks’!! I’ll Give ‘Trash to this Doorman’,while I *‘Write So Hot*’ u can use mah !!Note Pad for a Foreman!!//
*Battlin me* is an Honor!! So these Attacks’ll Torment and Leave u ‘Holdin ya Loss Close to Heart’ like *Mother’s who Go Back to Abortions*!//
I UpRoot ya Life, ‘Dilate ya Pupils' so this Herb can’t ‘See Perfection’!,, ‘Spit Heat’ till ya ‘Skin Boils and Burst’//
Claim u ‘Sparkin Gats’? but need an ‘Editorial First’!!,,Why’ll I Punch hard enuff to leave ya *Head on ya T* like a fukin Memorial Shirt!!//


Aigh thre ya go nigga!! post ya verse!!

With no choices ya'll choose me da winner..like highschool prom elections...this bitches rhymes couldn't shoot for da stars witta sky high erection.../
steppin up to me..like a scale tellin ya rhymes overwieght none of em landed...chop off ya fingas hand ya the mic and beat ya "empty handed"..../
yo ass rhymin like prince-on-weed..hypaneted verses there...there-is-no-need...cuz ya multis dont exsist in dis ficticious-beat.../
dis faggot like shitty asian city's he does nothin but Bangkock..give so many handjobs dis whole website callin ya jon Handcock.../
my rhymes ingulf you then i break you in half just to "snap you out of it"...verses commin Te-Kill-Ya (tequila) so you joinen alchoholics anonoymous.../
kickenya in yo face wit my cleats cuz all you can do is "spit shine"...cuz you chew up yo old mother goose books and claim you spit rhymes.../
I'm "hot and ready' cuz like pizza places my rhymes leavin ya wit "little ceasures"...cuz i spit sin gotya cunvulsin like epileptic preachers.../

jus me: aight your structure was a little off...and punchlines i couldnt really understand well if u had any. flow was okay...ya vocab was okay too

accomp:...i believe this was an easy win due to that fact that your punchlines hit harder. and your structure i liked a little bit better...ya opener was great it kept me readin.

v/accomp

please return the favor and vote for my battles....guyver4mk vs dclassic and dclassic vs L.I. both are the the first page of front line jus run down the list

haha dag,, yall dont know a good verse when ya see one.. aigh ill still win with shit ass votes like that..

just me took this....close battle basically tied in almost everything except for enjoyment....n i felt just me's more....nice verses by both.....return the favor please......me vs daclassic.......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

yo uppin for votes mofucka holla atcha boi i return da favor

my vote is for acc. he took this one..

acc. you had better punches and your rymes were easier to read..your meta4s were coo but you need to work on yourr punches...but all in all it was pretty coo. not much to say you no wat you did wrong and how to fix it....7/10

just me..you was coo its just that your rymes werent all there..couldnt really follow the rymes..but i guess it was alrite..you need to work on your punches..meta4a and multies....most of all you need to work on your structure....

vote..acc.

yo still upppin for votes on dis i'll return da favor

Structure: Accomplishment
Flow: Accomplishment
Punches: Accomplishment
Personals: Accomplishment

Vote: Accomplishment

Nice Battle' ... Eazy To Say Over all Accomplishment Doe

yo thanx shawty still uppin i'll hit up yo battles

yo uppin dawgs i;ll return da favor

lol this bitch ass beggin for votes...i def. had a beta verse,,, all you D/R's damn,,, yall jus dun get my verse..

bitch i aint beggin for votes we just need em look at ur verse you filled it with multis just so you it will somewhat rhyme dumb ass

First Off: I Aint A Dick Rider!! Fool'

Second Off: Quit Fucckin Complaining Boi You Aint Going To Win All Of Your Battles' Aint That The Truth!!! ...

Third Off: Propz** Playa Your Verse Was Tight But My Vote Went To Accomplishment Because He Had Better Punches' ....

This was a close ass battle.. hard decision.. but let me break it down fo ya..

acc:
Nice verse.. solid punches.. and they were hella affective.. nice layout good word choice.. hell of a nice verse bra.. this was something that kept me entertained through the whole verse.. nicely done.

Just Me:
Tight shit dawg.. punches were definatly hittin on tha spot.. i l;ike your layout and word choice.. nice decision on how to throw em out.. multies were there bra.. rhyme scheme was affective.. wordplay and all was good man.. not much negativity to bring to ya.. Hella tight.

Vote- Just me

Its All Good Though............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....

Yo upppppppppin mofucka lets get theese votes i'll return da favor just type who you battled

yo,, uppin for votes.. VOTE FAIRLY Niggas,, hot battle.. ill reutrn the fava as wel.. c'mon yall vote up..

Let's Keep it real....That first cat was a head scratcher!!! Now my dogg Accomplishment he had it goin' on his punches had me laughin out loud and sayin' "That shit's fire" Madd props Accomplishment you got my vote and my Homie Nameless' vote(and he dont even come here) so count this as two pieces of mad respect from some bad rappers down south!!

haha thanx dawg much props to you dirtas ind a south to but we keep it rull in da north ya hurred ma yo anyways uppin

Iight here it goes.

Accomp: You had a ncie verse, good punches and nothing really bad. No vocab.

Just Me: Nice punches, nice verse overall. But not too good with vocab either.

I'm going to have to go with what flowed easier for me. And accomp's was much easier to follow. Just Me, Your lines were too all over. It was a straight verse, and i liked it. Accomps just flowed together easier.

V/ Accomp