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topical battle: explicit vs lyircal mc
this is it kid spit when ya ready the topic is "explosive rhymes"
just a practice battle voterz just do yo thing checkin in :shoot: |
when i spit, i rain thunderous shit//
put catz in a plunderous trip// i put u under my whip, cuz i ran u over, causin ya skin coroded// my rhymes explode like a city block loaded wit explosives// my lyrical scriptures go boom when im comin at ya// i dont know why u chose rap as a profession u just an actor// damn i gotta bounce so go wit dat iight |
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Wen I OnSlaute Verble It Comes Like Rain My EXPLOSIVE RYHME,
Not Reached Prime Dopness Wid My Hip Hop DEVOTED TIME, Put Nigga To rest Wid My Rhymes Hooked wid dope like TNT, My Rhymes Eplodes on Herbs,Like C5 i Kill EXPLOSIVLY, But Lyricaly I Bomb MC's Down Wid My Punches to PENADTRATE, Im Da Illset Wid My Explosive Rhyme So High It LEVERTATES, Explode My Rhyme Like A Pin Discareded From the GRANADE, Lyrics To Blow Up Niggas To let them Lick Wounds And BANDAID, As My Rhyme Explodes Into In To Rec Mode I Penatrate NIGGAS, My Diss leave MC's In tears And Choked Of Air In High FIGURES, Explode To Reality Rhyme Spitin' From the Hart And To The TIME, Front Line Dopness As I pull out My verble "Explosive RHYME"!! Blah Blah.....Did It Quick..Yo Leave Honest Votes Peeps And I Will Hit Ur Battles Wid A HONEST Vote IF You Leave A Link...aaaiiggghhttttt!!!! |
uppin on dis shit
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my vote goes to lyrical mc
the other one was good but too short hit this battle pls http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116732 |
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yo peeps if u poll vote honestly and leave a link i will hit ur batles wid a honest vote.....wen i come online......
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uppin 4 vote peeps leave link and i will hit back wid a honest vote..pz :D
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this is common
to me the best mc doesnt always shyne in a battle explicit got this one barely I know it was topical but lyrical emcee made the topic too repetitive i know u got flow, but try showin more with less tellin u had him, but the more i read the more it slipped into explicits hands |
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yo I thought lyrical mc one cause his was longer so it was better
because of the topic and thats about it vote=lyrical one love....... vote on my battles please....... |
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Yo, Lyrical MC got this...explicit may have had a better chance if he had some more material, but even if he did, I dunno if he woulda secured it...Lyrical MC had everything a Topical needs...sticks to the topic, and flows and rhymes awesome.
Vote- Lyrical MC Hit these up plz...thx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117047 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=105319 |
uppin gen...damm no 1 vote on ere
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uppin dis shit gen...................leave a link and i will drop a honest vote
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I'm gonna give this one Lyrical MC. Although I did wanna say that your lack of spelling whether intentioanl or not is difficult to get past sometimes and fucks up the rhythm of your flow. But overall I say Lyrical MC takes this battle in every aspect. Explicit just didn't put down enough lines to pick up any momentum. Ya'll stay up.
UBR |
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yo lyrical mc had better personals, mulits, and his flow was better he also hit
harder with his punches Ex you need ta work on your punches and next you might win vote=lyrical hit this up its tied 4-4 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117992 |
yo you didnt vote on tha poll
you need to hit that or it wont count |
iight this is the way it is my mc won o douht....ex you rap like kindergardener
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