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SPuL v.s Guyver4mk
Yo, here are the rules:
Max. 20 lines Get it in by Mon. First to 5 votes (No D/R votes. Explain the vote and give each person a score outta 30) You spit first. PEACE |
YO checkin in.
I'll have my piece done by monday. But I got some work to do now. I'll spit later when I've finished what I'm doing. |
ok, cool.
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You up the shit before I've even started/
Claim u'sa gangsta boi, but u just retarded/ My stytle is placid but I spit like I'm on acid/ Anything from you is just gona taste rancid/ See you drive past in ya transit or shall I say "man"sit/ Cos all the time you drive you got his head on ya lap/ He sucks too hard and you holla and clap back/ Slip me the finger an I snap till I hear it crack/ Shove it so far up ya ass, now its part of ya back/ Your rhymes are half ass, lame and lack/ The ounce of feelin needed for us to stack/ Fuck around thinkin u the mac/ But jus like ur dead in the sack/ ur ur dead to us too jack/ I slaughta ur lyrics and spit on ya name/ Beat the shit out of you and do it again/ I'm not gona hold back or try to refrain/ Cos battlin you is jus like a main game playa/ Goin up against a stupid blonde dame/ |
ok, I'll post mine when I get home from school. PEACE
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ok, here it be:
Where's the rap? All I see is crap You spit that shit out, like you think you all that You try to spit back, cuz you just got dissed I'm two feet away from you, and you still missed Now I'm FUCKIN' PISSED! I wanted a real battle After you saw me, you prolly got rattled But I don’t blame you… cuz you ain’t the first I made so many niggas limp, they vanished like Fred Durst I think it’s crazy, how you try to spray me Wit all you got, but your shit don’t faze me Fog is your rappin’… it gets my eyes shady Just like the yappin’… of your fucked up old lady You’ll never get rich, so you betta die tryin’ Your bitch came to me, but I sent her off cryin’ All she wanted was me… but why not you? Maybe cuz you fuck up, in everything you do The world has been rottin', watchin' your 18 years pass I'm 3 years younger than you, and I'm still kickin' yo ass 2-6 will change soon...just you wait You're losin' in 2 battles... you're goin' to 2-8 |
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Upin for votes in herre people
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Nice Battle On Both Sides
But Spul Got This One Kidd Structure: Guyver Personals: Spul Punches: Spul Flow: Guyver Character: Spul Multies: Spul Creativity: Spul Vocab: Spul Overall ... Spul Got This One Vote : Spul |
cool. Uppin' for more votes!
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Opener: tie - both poor
Structure: Guyver Personals: Spul Punches: Spul Flow: Guyver Multies: Spul Finsher:Spul overall spul got this one, good job son honest votes on this please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 |
cool cool. Uppin' for votes. I'll go vote on that battle later tonight. I gotta go now. PEACE
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uppin' fo votes.
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A'ight, not the greatest battle...but there is no doubt about it that Spul had this shit. Guyver...you need to elevate dawg. Some of your lines were a'ight, but others...ehh, no comment. Spul...you had some nice punches in there, but either verse had great flow, or vocab...there were no multies in this battle.
Spul: 7/10 Guyver: 4/10 Vote- Spul Return the favor plz...thx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362 |
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i think spul merked some1 lol
lets c he had better flow vocab better persoanals guy work on vocab punches personals everything lol no hate |
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spul had better structure and punches plus he used some personals which is something u need in a battle
guy had a good openr but after that he started slippin his punches werent good and he used no personals but his ryme scheme was ok, fairly close but my vote goes to spul return the favour (battles in my sig) |
lol i havet put them in yet
i take the time to look at urs, take some time to look at mine return the favour with an honest/explained vote vs KINGS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 vs rec-d http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940 vs touch to gold http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127 |
yo code didn't push the vote button, and his vote was put in the mix. so can i just push the vote button? lets see.
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