SeRvIcE vs. Murder Phreak
 

iight SeRvIcE thanks for the vote man
bring it!!

Phear it

Poor Kid, Having To Battle SeRvIcE With That Poor Shit ..
Your Punch Won't Flow At All, So You Have To Faucet (force it)
your broke..hittin your head so it cracks.. your left "cEnt'S LESs"
i'm reckless strangling you with a shoestring as a necK "lace"..ayo
Live in Recycle Bins, ya nothing but INTERNET TRASH,
Lose at PYRO RAFFLES, your never WINNING A MATCH
This Kid's Verse Reeks wit Bitin-Lyrics and Played Lines
Trying To Spit Personals With No Diss, Tha Shyt Doesnt Fly
Kid's Heart is Raising Everytime He Checks The Battle, Defeat is Everlasting..
Never Askin For Votes My Motto This Kid Prob IMs For Votes,Thanks For Askin

SeRvIcE with a smile
 

Im puttin you to shame when I'm spittin' my game/Your final words will be cursing my name/You fucked with the wrong KID to make your rival/you wanna be my disciple I wrote the MC bible/ My lyrics is vital I done made my title/ you're still bustin flows at ballet recitals/Cuz you think you're tha shit but I ain't even stressed/Just readin that shit made me feel depresed/cuz I'm feelin bad about pullin your card/A lyrical genius has no bidness battlin a retard/Your lil' sista's friends might think you're the shit/But I bet you never even grabbed a mic to spit/It's almost 11:30 you're up too late/don't make this your 7th time repeatin tha 3rd grade/I'm a lyrical lord swingin my spirtual sword/ in the womb writin my umbilical chord /and you're just a fag hidin' behind ya keyboard/I got tha dope rhymes your broke ass can't afford/At least you got the chance to get your shit heard/remember this as the day that SERVICE GOT SERVED

So Phear that Jackass

structure: murda
vocab: murda
personal: service
lyrical content : murda
operner: murda
closer : service

v/murda....geez this was close i think both of yall got potential keep it up

up................................................ .....

^^^^^^^^^uppin 4 dem votes so vote vote vote!!!!^^^^^^^^

ok heres the brizzeak down

Structure - Serv
Flow - Serv
Punches - Tie
Personals - MP
Vocab - Serv
Humor - MP

in my opinion serv barely sketched by on this one, his flow was flawless and his lines were nice
the flow on MP's verse was somewhat choppy, but good none the less, personals were kickin "Service just got SERVED" for example, that was a nice one.

but overall i think serv got this

Vote Service

oh and one more thing



What did the five fingers say to the face?






IM RICK JAMES BIATCH!!!!!

damn!

thers supposed to be a *slap* in between there

Cory You Asshole You Arent Allowed To Vote On My Battles!!!!!

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE IT WAS THE SHIT AND I DON'T KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I GET TO UP IT BEFORE IT GETS CLOSED DOWN :laugh2:

wow thats a close one ther...but i think that murda takes the win

^^^^^^^^^^^uppin for dem votes lets get this over with^^^^^^^^^^^^

Ok tha BrEaKdOwN

Opener - Service
Flow - MP
Punches - Both
Personals - MP
Multis - Barely any but MP had the better ones
Structure - Service
Closer - MP that sevice got served had me laughin
Enjoyment - MP had the flow which made it more enjoyable n his punches we insane

This was a really close one but MP got my vote cuz i felt his more....Both yall are ill emcees so jus keep battlin cuz yall will be crazy down the road....holla wit an honest vote plz........me vs lilnoe
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117259

too bad lyricals vote doesnt count

Yo yo, tight battle here. You both brought skillz.

Murder: You had tight flow, and lots of funny shit. Pretty strong vocab. Good drop yo.

Service: Tight opener and closer. Pretty good wordplay. Could have used more personals.

Basically they were both good shit. Murder get's the nod (barely) because I like his flow and I think he punched just a little harder.

Keep droppin', both of ya'll.

Peace.

uppin for one last vote to close the curtains on this one!!!!

You cats are killin me!!! Let's get a vote and quick I'm battle-hungry as hell and I don't like hunger......

I hope If I can up for a vote this one last time I'll be able to end this!!!!!

where is everybody"?
 

What happens if no one ever wins the battle? I don't get it man.....

WIL SOME1 JUST F**KIN' VOTE ALREADY?!?! :banghead:

Daaaaaaaaaamniiiiiiiiiiit Somebody Vote I Got More Battles To Do!!!!!

you cats was bof sorry but my vote is murder....

murder was just a lil betta...you need to work on your structure and meta4s......punches were sorry ...........you sho potiential......but just need lil more work....all in all 5/10

service i liked yours but just not good enuf...you also need to work on your structure..punches were not good didnt really have anything good.....all in all 4/10

vote=murder