afterword vs poeticaltendenceez
 

rules have been stated
cum out swinging

i'll post tomorrow...you took so long to respond damnit.....go ahead and post if you got something, i won't bite...word...peace

yur lame
how long do u need?
4get poetic, u got negro tendencies( colored people time)
and that shouldnt offend no 1 cuz im a brotha

ayo, check

negro tendencies, fuck yeah I'm a goddamn nigger ~ the only thing black bout you is your tongue ~ asshole licker//
a hustla with inteligence, 20 years old and fucking "living"* ~ the only fun that interests you is molesting lil children**//
I gave you a chance to spit your mother fucking rhyme ~ you musta been too scared or just waiting to bite some shit off mine//
you could emboss me with your lyrics, but I still wouldn't be "impressed" ~ i drop this shit out my ass, penetrating your cracka khaki vest//
fuck you now, and fuck you afterwards ~ i'm wiping you like my ass after shitting a big WHITE turd

Check-it,

Yo emcee P.T.( poetic-tendenceez) yur definately
not the thug poet you pretend to be//
Yur just another undercover brotha,
with homosexual tendenceez //

You are simply tempting me,
to shred you into smithereens//
Because you are using scapegoats like poetry
to explain your sensitivity and insecurities//

He said, “lets battle, but how about tomorrow”
I figure that’s how long it took him to borrow//
Some punches, similies, and wordplay,
Just to get his ass beat on Thursday like it was his birthday//

And I don’t wear jerseys,
I just need a white tee//
For some trees, my boy at da swap-meat, will swap me
A air-brushed shirt that reads….R.I.P. emcee P.T.//

Now type the hottest shit u got, and it’ll look like bluurrr
B/c u speak insignificantly “Afterword”

yo u finally showed up, good business
i quik keyed once i seen u finally posted, but let the best "word" win!

voters holla!

you're the fucker who took so godamn long to respond to the first post bitch....quit your pussy crying.......peace

uppin this for some votes.....honest feedback will get return honest votes on your stuff....peace

poetic take this one cuz of his first line it makes me laugh tight shit dawg other dude uyou did alright

uppin (2).....go ahead and finish this shit....this nigga got dropped hard...damn

yo thats a lame ass reason 4 that last vote
but phuck-it keep it movin
uppin

uppin (3)..........post a link and i'll hit it up with honest feedback....come on ya'll

up this shit...bitches.......come on ya'll...some honest feedback and this kid'll be done....damn.....post a link and I'll hit it up with honest feedback

afterword ur bars were too short ur punches were too simple ur personal about how long he took was rubbish and u really didnt insult him enough also try to work on ur vocab a nd make ur bars longer

poetic ur verse was well structured and ure punches were witty and hit hard ur flow wasnt great though and u didnt use personals
vote-poet

return the favour with an honest vote
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

LOL HERES THE REA LINKS
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

this guys idol is simon
rubish, witty
bullshit aint nothin
uppin

Nah Im Going Against Ya'll I Think Afterword Had The Better Rhyme/Flow

I Liked His Shit Better ..

So Therefor My Vote Goes To : Afterword :

Poetic Had Some Nice Vocab, Multies, & WorldPlay... ' Propz No Disrespect Playa i Liked Your Shit Aswell

i was kinda pissed she voted for dude..but i peeped her pic....dat girl fine fo sho....whoever da fuck adam is is one fucking lucky dood...damnz

poetic...these are the lines i liked by u

negro tendencies, fuck yeah I'm a goddamn nigger ~ the only thing black bout you is your tongue ~ asshole licker//

you could emboss me with your lyrics, but I still wouldn't be "impressed"

afterward,ur flow was better but ur punches were too basic ...poetic,some of ur other lines were really lame..but those two stood out so
vote=poetic

yo votes are poppin up without explainations
wutz da deal!

yeah there was nuthin special about this battle but afterword won so yeah i giv emy vote to afterword
yo come vote for me and ill return the favor
Red Dogg vs Prezident vote yall!

vote=afterword

^^^^

hahahaha......that vote will clearly not count
"come vote for me and ill return the favor"...that nigga's gettn banned.....dumbass

Nah Poetic Your Shit Was Nice, Like I Said Propz Playa But I Just Wasnt Feeling You In This Battle Boi, Thats All No Disrespect!!!!!!!

lol And Dapz Playa' ..

Lets Get One Thing Straight!!!!!!!! Im Not Wit ADAM!!!!!!!!!!! No More' lol

uppin this shit ya'll....PEACE....once again...drop a link and I'll drop an honest vote on your shit

poe you got him beat!you the better rapper in this battle!
come vote on my battle lil nae2 vs. kkbug

explain your vote whore....damn....whatever

up this shit for one more vote...damn ya'll finish this shit....

yo that shit was hot but im here only coz i need to get some posts cuz i got like 0 right now payce

poet got this one....shouldnt have to explain but i guess i will....

poet:you just came all around betta ...punches meta4s vocab everthing was alrite ,...not the greastest but good enuf...all in all.7/10

after: you was coo but i think yiou could have com allil harder than that......need alil work...could work on structure tho....all in all6/10
coo battle.
vote=poet