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DaClassic vs dj em.sce
rules 10-15 lines
no h/v no c/v no d/v both spit within 30 minutes of checkin okay...i wish u good luck cuz u goin to need it |
look make it so it counts.....make it so that it we get votes so it could go on my record........look you got balls batllin me......i'll give you that
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never mind i didnt see that it was for votes........my bad..
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checkin in time dont start until u checkin
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blind spit or wat......who goes first.......it dont matter to me
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look man blind spit...we both drop at the same time and the time starts when u checkin...cuz im checkin in
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checkin in again.......had to go real quik...im at school.......
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aight posts due by 6:40 eastern time
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Da Classic verse
Ladies and Gentleman please rise to your feet.....[/B]
the newest sensation has finally arrived....The Classic One "D.J pay ya respects the newest sensation comin ya way dont battle me while u in school i'll make u drop out like kanye" [B]Ladies and Gents did u hear that..... D.J u nice but uh nobody cares what ya rhymes say why dont u edit, reiterate words the way that u said it ya written shyt is all crap, visa wouldnt give u credit D.J u stupid for postin a b.tch slap and a battle post he's not stupid, he's possessed by a retarded ghost wheres ya intelligence, i cant tell u must of hidden it D.J the type of man i'll use as a blueprint to build an idiot only 15, have ya pencil ever got hard to stick a sharpner he's better at sex than anyone, all he needs is a partner cant find a way to prove he good, beatin weak people like him and him if your brain was chocolate it wouldn't even fill an M&M from punchlines , structure, vocab i got the vote of course have you ever thought of suing ya brains for non-support? yes im sick of him,im tired of gettin him in every aspect, im laughin surprised he lasted, this f.ckin bastard |
your late...so dont try to drop and think u can feed off my verse....so hurry the f.ckup.....uppin so he can see this
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if your forcast was predicted as a great storm u stil couldnt reign surpreme/
im lyrical droupt an spit CLASS SIC's,so u could never rain on my original regime/ wit da help of steve martin n queen latifah u stil couldnt "bring down the house"/ my punchlines r lord of the rings so they leave "rings in your mouf"/ u mite as well b a "mountianeer" the way i got u verbally "climbing hills"/ you could steal my style and still couldnt compare to my ryming skills/ look if you was suckin trivilles dick you still couldnt cum on my level/ look you aint no where near competion so win i win a wont even revel/ (LOOK IT UP BITCH) after this ur gonna b scared to show ur face like females from da middle east/ b up in counsling like "d.j em sce ate me and said that i was a little feast"/ u couldnt picture me wit a camera,so u just missed out on dis kodak moment/ after this hope we wont have beef, so dont come running bak for atonement/ |
that only took so long cuz im at school and had to do this in secret...teacher kept on walkin by....
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coo just read your shit............my structure was alil off but thats all rite tho.......nice flow
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okay uppin for votes number one
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ok here's the rundown
Flow-Classic Lyrical-DJ Structure-Classic Punch-Classic Opener-Classic Closer-Classic so guess who tha vote goes to......... |
uppin for votes number two
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i gave the people what they wanted out of me so i gave it to em' uppin number three
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damn clean battle
flow-gata give it to dj lyrical-dj structure-classic punch-dj opener-dj closer-classic dj your closer was kinda weak good battle want ta see mo from the both of ya but for this one i gata give it to dj |
This one was pretty close...........the one thing that seperated the winner from the loser is...........
only 15, have ya pencil ever got hard to stick a sharpner he's better at sex than anyone, all he needs is a partner I thought this was the best line in the battle Vote-Da classic |
ok here's the rundown
Flow-Classic Lyrical-DJ Structure-Classic Punch-Classic Opener-TIe Closer-DJ 3-4 sorry man but my vote goes to Classic nothn personal really |
haha my bad i was readin the wrong names its da other way arounsdsorry for da confusion
dj em sce got my vote |
up up up uppin
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uppin number five
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alright ! i feel that classic put togehter a all around better flow ! pundhes where more direct and used a good for of original creativitey ! peace
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yo daclassic nice verse i didnt like all the lil gay shit at the top so it kinda pissed me off and wasted my tiem otherwis good verse ok flow ok punches structre gay
Dj i liked yo verse alot except for tha Rain line its overuse so much but fuck it overall dj won this battle i would poll vote me and dj in a crew togethter so |
Flow- Goes 2 Da Classic
Stucture-intro Was Hot Punch Lines- Dj-good Opener-daclassic Close-daclassic |
alright...this is my vote....close battle, no joke for reall....but I gotta give this to classic....classic was just roundabout fuller..had a lil bit of everything..good flow, ok structure...ok wordplay...i wasn't feeln dj for real....the verse was straight..but not impressive...neither was classic, but it outweighed dj...vote - classic....hit up my shit
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