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Daclassic 03-25-04 05:43 PM

DaClassic vs dj em.sce
 
rules 10-15 lines
no h/v
no c/v
no d/v
both spit within 30 minutes of checkin
okay...i wish u good luck cuz u goin to need it

Status 03-25-04 05:45 PM

look make it so it counts.....make it so that it we get votes so it could go on my record........look you got balls batllin me......i'll give you that

Status 03-25-04 05:46 PM

never mind i didnt see that it was for votes........my bad..

Daclassic 03-25-04 05:46 PM

checkin in time dont start until u checkin

Status 03-25-04 05:47 PM

blind spit or wat......who goes first.......it dont matter to me

Daclassic 03-25-04 06:10 PM

look man blind spit...we both drop at the same time and the time starts when u checkin...cuz im checkin in

Status 03-25-04 06:11 PM

checkin in again.......had to go real quik...im at school.......

Daclassic 03-25-04 06:14 PM

aight posts due by 6:40 eastern time

Daclassic 03-25-04 06:38 PM

Da Classic verse
 
Ladies and Gentleman please rise to your feet.....[/B]

the newest sensation has finally arrived....The Classic One

"D.J pay ya respects the newest sensation comin ya way
dont battle me while u in school i'll make u drop out like kanye"

[B]Ladies and Gents did u hear that.....


D.J u nice but uh nobody cares what ya rhymes say
why dont u edit, reiterate words the way that u said it
ya written shyt is all crap, visa wouldnt give u credit
D.J u stupid for postin a b.tch slap and a battle post
he's not stupid, he's possessed by a retarded ghost
wheres ya intelligence, i cant tell u must of hidden it
D.J the type of man i'll use as a blueprint to build an idiot
only 15, have ya pencil ever got hard to stick a sharpner
he's better at sex than anyone, all he needs is a partner
cant find a way to prove he good, beatin weak people like him and him
if your brain was chocolate it wouldn't even fill an M&M
from punchlines , structure, vocab i got the vote of course
have you ever thought of suing ya brains for non-support?
yes im sick of him,im tired of gettin him in every aspect,
im laughin surprised he lasted, this f.ckin bastard

Daclassic 03-25-04 06:51 PM

your late...so dont try to drop and think u can feed off my verse....so hurry the f.ckup.....uppin so he can see this

Status 03-25-04 06:53 PM

if your forcast was predicted as a great storm u stil couldnt reign surpreme/
im lyrical droupt an spit CLASS SIC's,so u could never rain on my original regime/
wit da help of steve martin n queen latifah u stil couldnt "bring down the house"/
my punchlines r lord of the rings so they leave "rings in your mouf"/
u mite as well b a "mountianeer" the way i got u verbally "climbing hills"/
you could steal my style and still couldnt compare to my ryming skills/
look if you was suckin trivilles dick you still couldnt cum on my level/
look you aint no where near competion so win i win a wont even revel/ (LOOK IT UP BITCH)
after this ur gonna b scared to show ur face like females from da middle east/
b up in counsling like "d.j em sce ate me and said that i was a little feast"/
u couldnt picture me wit a camera,so u just missed out on dis kodak moment/
after this hope we wont have beef, so dont come running bak for atonement/

Status 03-25-04 06:55 PM

that only took so long cuz im at school and had to do this in secret...teacher kept on walkin by....

Status 03-25-04 06:59 PM

coo just read your shit............my structure was alil off but thats all rite tho.......nice flow

Daclassic 03-25-04 07:40 PM

okay uppin for votes number one

Murder Phreak 03-25-04 08:03 PM

ok here's the rundown

Flow-Classic
Lyrical-DJ
Structure-Classic
Punch-Classic
Opener-Classic
Closer-Classic

so guess who tha vote goes to.........

Daclassic 03-25-04 08:03 PM

uppin for votes number two

Daclassic 03-25-04 08:25 PM

i gave the people what they wanted out of me so i gave it to em' uppin number three

Sean.C 03-25-04 08:40 PM

damn clean battle
flow-gata give it to dj
lyrical-dj
structure-classic
punch-dj
opener-dj
closer-classic dj your closer was kinda weak
good battle want ta see mo from the both of ya
but for this one i gata give it to dj

Enygma 03-25-04 08:44 PM

This one was pretty close...........the one thing that seperated the winner from the loser is...........

only 15, have ya pencil ever got hard to stick a sharpner
he's better at sex than anyone, all he needs is a partner

I thought this was the best line in the battle

Vote-Da classic

Raphael 03-25-04 09:32 PM

ok here's the rundown

Flow-Classic
Lyrical-DJ
Structure-Classic
Punch-Classic
Opener-TIe
Closer-DJ

3-4 sorry man but my vote goes to Classic nothn personal really

Raphael 03-25-04 09:33 PM

haha my bad i was readin the wrong names its da other way arounsdsorry for da confusion

dj em sce got my vote

Daclassic 03-25-04 10:05 PM

up up up uppin

Daclassic 03-25-04 11:03 PM

uppin number five

DEsTIn2dEsTroY 03-25-04 11:22 PM

alright ! i feel that classic put togehter a all around better flow ! pundhes where more direct and used a good for of original creativitey ! peace

accomplishment 03-25-04 11:26 PM

yo daclassic nice verse i didnt like all the lil gay shit at the top so it kinda pissed me off and wasted my tiem otherwis good verse ok flow ok punches structre gay

Dj i liked yo verse alot except for tha Rain line its overuse so much but fuck it overall dj won this battle i would poll vote me and dj in a crew togethter so

$$UPREME 03-25-04 11:34 PM

Flow- Goes 2 Da Classic
Stucture-intro Was Hot
Punch Lines- Dj-good
Opener-daclassic
Close-daclassic

poetictendenceez 03-26-04 12:35 AM

alright...this is my vote....close battle, no joke for reall....but I gotta give this to classic....classic was just roundabout fuller..had a lil bit of everything..good flow, ok structure...ok wordplay...i wasn't feeln dj for real....the verse was straight..but not impressive...neither was classic, but it outweighed dj...vote - classic....hit up my shit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117212


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