LyriCal HavoK vs L.I.
 

ok.........
RULES

10 - 20 LINES
NO PREWRITTEN
NO HATE VOTES
NO DICKRIDING
NO CREW VOTES
DUE 20 MINUTES AFTA CHECK IN
BOTH DROP AT THE SAME TIME

goodluck :laugh:

checkin in can we make this 15 min so at 4:30 pacific we drop em aight

man my schools clock is fucking messed up...cheap ass district make it 4:35

Bring fullest effect to his name --LyriCal HavoK--....
Gonna cry bout votes cuz his skill dusnt --HaCk It--....
He Pm'ed me beggin for a chance to battle....
I aint even the greast cat but he actin like i wrote tha bible....
OOPPS u made a mistake but u made plenty n this battle is one of them....
Maybe i did write the bible, IM GOD, ur condemned!....
Send him to hell for his evil sin....
What is it you ask, ill tell u in a min...
His lame excuse for a rapper got u a first class ticket to hell...
Almost done with this faggot so say ur farewells....
"Bye mom bye dad i made a huge mistake"....
First you were branded then made into a steak....
Left the trademark symbol of L.I. on you....
His lines r stretched thats why they r hard to construe

weak but i was in a rush holla g/l wun

im that type a nigga who be holdin the lead//
shoot you in ur neck so youll be holdin ur head//
layin on the corner in a puddle of red//
if u would of listened to me u woulda never been dead//
the weed i got make your bitch ass choke//
u buy ounces to sell i buy quarter pounds to smoke//
i aint gonna lie your freestyles is whack//
eminem called he wants his notebook back//
man ur workds are a disgrace, ill say it to ur face//
ill kill your ass and get away without a trace//
coz im a real cat//
you think you gon' get somewhere wit flows like DAT//
please, my words sting like some bees//
yeh you suckin dick just look at ur knees//
dont come around me coz ima jaw ya//
just coz you on my balls dont mean you a baller//

uppin 4 votes.....i return the favor...............drop a link n ill holla.....thnx wun

Ok structure both lacked but L.I.s is better
Flow both were ok but L.I.s Flowed better
Style Both were similar But L.is. did go better
Punches Both had strong punches and came hard but i think Havoc got punches
Overall L.I. Gets My Vote tho

naww man fuck all that shyt havok ate tha boi up, he showed em how tru gangsta spit it, he got my vote

can we get an explanation....................................... ..?

iight bro u wanna explaination? if u beat me in a battle ill vote for u. deal

hahahaha ok........................set it up........

a bro i aint gon lie, u gon have to teach me as a fellow emcee, set it up

ok its set up check in holla 1..........can we get sum votes on this?

can we get some votes on this shit...ill be sure to return da favor with an honest vote...

ok heres the breack down
havok gets a 7/10 for overall flow punches and enjoyment

L.i. get a 5/10 for punches and flow. i lost interset with ur rap.

ok ok here it is
lyrical nice style nice flows good structure and some good punches didnt realy feal all that ima pimp gana smoke feal to it but it was ok keep it up
l.i nice battle keep up wit it you had some good flows and good structure some punches to nice battle but ima have to give this one to lyrical..

lyrical havok man ur last flow was betta sorry dawg i gota go 4 L.I so bettal uck next time dawg.....good job L I nice flows

thnx for the votes keep em comin holla...........uppin .................

A'ight...okay battle I guess...LI...some nice punches...some shit didn't rhyme though, though rhyming is not EVERYTHING i guess...for example Havok and hack it don't rhyme...okya flow and structure...Havok...you had flow, but a lotta the lines u had were played...and ur punches were slightly better than L.I's...

L.I.: 3/10

Havok: 4/10

Vote- Havok


Hit this up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

uppin 4 votes............................................. ................

yo....
nice flow L.I. you got pretty top noch punchlines....Hvok had them too

but my overall vote=L.I.

Tight Battle, Respect

But L.I. Had Better Structure, Punchlines, Flow, Creativity, Vocab, And All That Shit' ... So My Vote Goes To L.I. *Propz* Playa Nice Verse

I'm gonna give this one to Lyrical Havok. I gotta say that both verses were still on a level that excedes what most of these fools be postin. L.I. says he rushed his verse -- well i believe it, because the skill is apparrent but it didn't come together like Lyrical Havok's. L.I. beat himself with the rhyming on this one -- definitely could have came harder wit that. Punches were both equally strong, but Lyrical Havok got my vote for sure wit his "balla" closing line. Both ya'll get madd props though. Stay up.

UBR